[NARANDA]

Just some simple line edits and a background. Also some sort of wings.

[Equid Phantasm]

Cool. One of my favorite color combinations. And one of the few to add an accessory. I like the tail too, very fluffy. I also like the way you made the dots go smaller smaller then get a little bigger in the center. A nice pattern.

You already know I give tips, so here's yours. It got lost when the power went out that Friday.

1. Although it is a basic background, it actually distracts from the wolf. The eye automatically wants to find patterns and especially with the different sized circles. Also the red dot behind the red tail made the tail blend in quite a bit and so I didn't at first "see" that it was a custom tail.

2. Your accessory although it does the job well needs some smoothing, a bandanna isn't all triangular when it is pu ton an animal, it takes on the shape of the neck/shoulder area and rounds. I have a really good example in my gallery on one of the wolves if you'd like to look. It also has folds on the underside, never perfectly strait edged.

I hope these tips help in the future. I'm off to judge. Was going to late last night but C.S. went down for maintenance.

Equid.