by Equid Phantasm » Thu Jul 12, 2012 8:57 pm
Nicely done, very Oregon State Beaveresque. The Oregon State Beavers colors are Orange and Black.
It's bright for sure. I like how you oversprayed the orange to blend things together. The color dots were a nice touch on the back and tail.
I'm giving all entries tips. Here is your tip.
1. The rear leg markings do not match on the wolves. On the left you have left rear short, right rear long orange markings but on the right side wolf, it should be the same and you have it as right rear short, left rear long. In essence, the left wolf's left side is short orange markings and it's right side is long orange markings but you've reversed the rear legs on the right wolf.
I hope this will help in the future. I'm off to finish critiques since all my Friday data was lost.
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