by Equid Phantasm » Thu Jul 12, 2012 8:36 pm
Hey there, sorry took so long to reply, your critique was part of the data lost on Friday when C.S. crashed due to the power outage.
Anyhow, I like the work, I really like the white scrolls on the legs and the other markings. I've always been fond of gradual color changes in the legs or anywhere else. This one I would call Wintergreen if it were my own because it reminds me of Wintergreen gum, the Wrigley kind.
I am giving crits/tips on all, so here is your tips.
1. Your color dots do not match what is on the wolf. When color dots are provided, the person usally expects the artist to contribute the colors that were used and I see no brown or pink on your wolf as well as no purple in the dots.
2. On your marking on the face, the body shot shows a swirl on the cheek but the head shot doesn't.
Thank you for your entry. I'm judging in a few minutes when I'm done with the re-critiques of the last 5.
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