The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Soccerlvr]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Soccerlvr
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=3517325#p3517325
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec
Deadline for your form: The weekend :3
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here


My form is hardly close to done, but I want some critique so far. If you wonder why it grew while you read it, it's because I'm still adding more :3

[.kestral]

I would like some critique please!
Username: *kestral*
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=3565585#p3565585
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: Um....not sure, I think I got a week
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whichever is easiest, I dont mind cause I will check back here anyway so yeah.

[Yamanaka Shin]

I would like some critique please!
Username: ~MeiTay~
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=2840 (this is my form so far. it's on the 3rd post.)
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: In a week, I think.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Anywhere is ok ^^

[Atwood]

Remember to help other people out by critiquing their forms as well, everyone - that'll make it go a lot faster and help everyone get the critiques they need in time. :3

[Yamanaka Shin]

This is a critique for ( copy and paste their username )!
Who the critique is for: Kestral
What you had to say about it: It is very good, but maybe you could try spacing out paragraph boundries and bolding the categories. Name: is easier to see than just Name:.

[.kestral]

This is a critique for ( copy and paste their username )!
Who the critique is for: Kestral
What you had to say about it: It is very good, but maybe you could try spacing out paragraph boundries and bolding the categories. Name: is easier to see than just Name:.

Ok, fair enough. I shall do that when I get home.

[Lirrie]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Lirrie
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=99202&p=3569220&hilit=luniea#p3569220
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: tonight
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Both if possible

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This is a critique for ~MeiTay~ !
Who the critique is for:~MeiTay~
What you had to say about it:
I loved reading her story only thing i really saw you could do was break up the personality paragraph a little. Other then that you form seems ok to me.

[Yamanaka Shin]

Thank you Lirrie <333 I will certainly do that ^^

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[Lirrie]

This is a critique for Xanre !
Who the critique is for:Xanre
What you had to say about it: There is a bunch I would change for instance a personality should be added to give her more depth and possibly a like/dislike should be added. Break up your paragraphs a little as well.