Re: Adopt Me

Postby The Purple Martian » Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:43 am

Well there are a lot of similarities, so I'm going to have to ask you to change it please.
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby supernovacity » Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:06 pm

I was deeply disturbed when i read that. I was VERY disturbed. I'm a writer and i don't like the plots of my stories reused without express permission,therefore that would be a form of art theft pardon if i i'm wrong.
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby ~.^нαυηтιηg^.~ » Sat Jun 09, 2012 12:05 am

Sorry, but I didn't try to copy it. I actually wrote another story but found that the ending was rather sad, and there was other points in it that I wasn't sure if it was allowed, so I browsed through my memory and remembered a passage with quite a cute and funny ending, and not knowing that it was your writing, I change the last few sentences. I'm really sorry about that and I'll use what I first wrote. That is a form of art theft, and I too was deeply disturbed when i read that I copied someone else's work.

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Story: Azure looked on sadly as his bonded grabbed a deathstick, as he now knew as a 'gun', and got into a monster, which was called a 'truck'. She had gone poaching, as she had been doing recently. If there was something that he and his bonded disagreed on, it would be poaching. He never liked life to be killed just like that, but his bonded apparently thought it was fine sport. Slowly, the bond frayed, and Azure felt less and less attached to that human. Now he wished that he was free again. Looking at her, his mind drifted to the day that he met her.

He flew in the sky, weaving between the clouds. His greenish-blue coat blended perfectly with the background, camouflaging him. He landed on the ground and scrambled into a cave. He knew that humans were out hunting as usual, and since they all carry deathsticks, he really didn't want to get accidentally shot. Suddenly, a bang ringed through the woods. A squirrel laid dead at the entrance to the cave, shot through the heart. Why do humans like hunting? he thought, scared that they were so close. He knew that he was safer in the skies, but he was afraid that if he came out, he'll get shot. Then he saw something shiny stuck in the leaves of a tree in front of the cave, slightly above his head. He lunged for it, not caring about the humans that were out poaching. He missed and tumbled back into the cave, causing a loud thud, and also giving him a few bruises. He knew that those humans would surely find him and might mistake him for a bear and shoot. He tensed with fear when he felt footsteps walking towards the cave. Shortly after, a little girl of about 11 popped her head through the entrance. He cowered, wondering if humans poach dragons. But instead of killing him, she picked him up and walked out into the sunlight, hugging him as if he was a teddy bear. And thus they were bonded.

He sighed, breaking away from those memories. He knew what he wanted to do, which was to get far away from here. So he lifted his wings and took to the sky, fleeing from humans who like poaching, just as he had done all those years ago.

Art: I haven't finished it yet, so I'll post it tomorrow.
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby The Purple Martian » Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:53 am

Well.. the second paragraph still has a lot of similarities to Darkness Angel's story. Mainly the Sparrow being dead and all and Azure running from the humans and hiding in a tree and all..
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby ~.^нαυηтιηg^.~ » Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:55 pm

I changed it slightly.
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby The Purple Martian » Mon Jun 11, 2012 1:33 am

Thank you c: I'm sorry to put you through all that trouble.
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby supernovacity » Mon Jun 11, 2012 7:57 am

I'm glad they changed it ^^ It was a very good story ^^
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby OcarinaGreen » Mon Jun 11, 2012 9:36 am

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Name: Leaf
Gender: Female
Bonded: No
Story:
She flew through the forest, flowing through the branches of the tall trees in which she made her home in. The small creature slowed to a stop and landed next to her favorite tree. It was the tallest and always gave her shelter from the dreadful long, heavy rains and the teriable flashes of fire that sometimes came from it. The tree had become more than her favorite place, it became her only friend, too. She was seperated from her family when she was very young and knew no others of her kind. She did not even know her own language, but there were a few words that she did remember. One was leaf, the thin green petals of the trees that had kept her alive for all the years of her life that she remembered.
She must have fallen asleep under the tree because when she woke, it was night and the flashes of fire were there along with rain. The wind howled violently and sent some trees crashing to the ground. The tiny dragon clung to her tree, hoping that it would shelter her as always, but something was stirring inside of her. There was a loud crash as one strike hit her tree and set it on fire. The fire jumped from tree to tree, igniting her entire home in a blazing, roaring light.
She flew away as fast as she could. She knew that it was dangerous to fly in a storm, but her heart was pounding and she couldn't stay there any longer. Tears flowed from her eyes, knowing that her home was gone. She flew for miles as fast as her small wings would beat, but the storm seemed to be following her. The next thing she knew, she was falling, then hit the ground.
There was a bright light. At first, she thought that she was dead, but then her vision cleared and it was morning. She was in a different place, a forest with trees that had long, sharp-looking leafs. A young girl no more than fourteen sat beside her and smiled as she stroked her head. "It's okay now, you're going to be okay..." The girl told her. She looked at the girl's hand, where a normal leaf had stuck to. Happy to see something familiar, she lifted her head and nuzzled it softly.
The girl took care of her and taught her her language, which she was eager to learn. They bonded almost immeadetly. She took the girl to the forest where she had lived before the storm. Both were devastated to find that there was nothing left of it but ashes. But, she and the girl planted seads there and new trees sprouted and grew.
Because of her green color and it was the first thing she saw when they first met, the girl named her Leaf.
Art: You would ban me from this page if I tried to draw... :lol: I hope the story's enough.
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby OcarinaGreen » Thu Jul 19, 2012 4:30 am

When does this end?
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Re: Adopt Me

Postby Raven_Wolf » Sat Aug 25, 2012 6:13 am

Username: ~LunarWolf~

Name: Sasha

Gender: female

Bonded?: yes. :D

Story: (what kind of story are you looking for? I will add once I know.)

Art: on its way
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