[d.zee]

Finally got around to adding art to my form.
My entry is finished. c:

[Whiteclan]

Username: whiteclan
Name: snowy glow
Pup: 7
Why you want it: for rps and all
Story/Art: was born from butterflywolves who died shortly after she wandered around then discoverd her powers....
I,{Whiteclan}, Promis to Return This pup To Snowstar1 should I no longer wish to keep it. I promise

[.The Bootless Box.]

Username:

Ɯιℓ∂ɛƨтѲиɛƨ Ƭнαт Яʋи

Pup:

7

Name:

Elysia {Ἠλύσια,Pronounced~E-lie-zuh} Rain

Name Meaning:

Elysia: From Greek Pedion Elysion, the name of the heavenly fields of Elysia, a section of the Underworld mentioned in Greek mythology. The mythological place name may have evolved from the designation of a place, or person, struck by lightning (enelysion, enelysios); if so, the name means "lightning-struck."

Rain: Modern English name, either derived from from the vocabulary word, or a revival of the medieval English personal name Rayne, meaning "queen." Compare with masculine Rain.


Why you want it:

She is so beautiful I just cant help myself on trying for this beauty. She will be welcomed in my large family of canines.

Story:

~Well before I start telling you this story I'll tell you about her naming. Her parents thought she might be lightning powered so they named her Something that basically means "Lightning Struck Queen" and she was completely different than what her parents thought. She is very shy. She loves the snow as it is stated but her parents thought she might like storms. Boy were they wrong. She is terrified of thunder, except when she can tell their is snow coming with it. Now for this story. Oh! One more thing! She hasn't discovered her other powers yet, Hail and Ice. Now I'll leave you to read.~

"ELYSIA!!! Get your butt in here!" Saphire, my mother yelled at me. "OKay,okay I'm coming!" I said back innocently. I knew why I was in trouble. I had 'let it snow, let it snow...' were we kept our food. Mom was going to kill me. It had been an accident, I got a little too emotional and boom! it was snowing. Lucky me dad isn't home. I would be skinned alive! My father was a shadow elemental and my mom a water elemental wolf. They thought their precious pup would be a lightning elemental. I was born 1st out of 2. My brother died almost instantly after birth. It was sad but my parents were from then on super protective, in every way, shape, and form. I floated down to the 'food cabinet', as we called it. "Elysia Rain, Why on this green earth, is there SNOW in here!?" Mom asked. "Well I kind of got upset and it just boom! snowed. I still can't control my powers that well, Mommy. It scares me." I said playing innocent scared young adult. My mom bought it every time, and this time I wasn't kidding, or putting on a face. Mom licked my head, which was always cold like the rest of me, in my comfort. "You'll get it eventually hun." She said softly. I nodded.

An hour later I had it cleaned up as me and my mother had worked on doing for the past hour of my life. I smiled. "Yes, we're finished. And dad didn't even see!" I said happily. My party was then rained on. Stupid party pooper, Dad. "Dad didn't see what?" My father said as he walked in. My tail sagged and I put my head down. Dang it! He always ruined everything. "Oh, hello dear. Elysia had a break down and her power went out of control and blasted the food cabinet with snow, we cleaned it up though dear." Mom said going over and licking his muzzle he licked hers back. I looked away. I didn't want to see their stupid romance. "Well Ellie is coming with me to train tomorrow then. Yes ellie, I mean with the boys." Demitri, my father said. "But Dad! You know what happened last time! I got laughed at by every one." I said my light purple eyes widening. "Well they won't this time, besides it's almost time for you to pick your mate, or at least choose to be a loner, romantic wise."My dad said. I just whimpered and trudged to my side of the den so I could sleep.

When I woke up my dad was prodding me with his paw. "Elysiaaa get uuup." He said. I blinked and stretched. "I'm up, I'm up." I said sleepily. He grunted and sat down waiting on me to get all the way up. I did and shook my fur out once letting my wings puff out to their full size. Then I remembered what I was about to have to do. I groaned. "Daaad do I have to go?" I whined. He just shrugged and said "Yep and if you don't do what your supposed to, pup watch for the next month." I shook with anger, he knew I hated doing pup duty while everyone else went and did whatever it is they do. I don't have any siblings so their not my siblings either.

As I walked into the training place, I saw the Alpha and a brute my age I had never seen before. He was gorgeous. It was the Alpha's son. Oops well you dig dong quit staring.I looked down and followed my father silently. I had now idea we were headed straight for the Alpha and his son. Soon we stopped and I looked up. I was face to face with them. I shivered but barely visible. i was smaller than most of the females much less smaller than the males. The Alpha's bloodline was larger built than the rest of us anyways, so I was being towered over, by them. I noticed my paws grow colder and snow to form under my paws. It didn't bother me at all. "Alpha Sorus this is my daughter Elysia Rain." My father said notioning towards me. I stepped up to his side silently and shyly. "Hello alpha." I said softly barely loud enough to be heard. His son was watching me with interest and the Alpha was looking at like 'IS that the same pipsqueak I remember when I saw her birth?'. I almost, almost, sighed. "Well Elysia Rain and Demitri, This is my eldest son Lukien." The Alpha said. I looked at him but didn't meet anyone's gaze. "Nice to meet you Lukien." I said my voice twinkling slightly, as if I were about to use my powers. D*mn it Elysia! Not again. The feeling of my power forming vanished. I sighed mentally. "Well Elysia, I believe I'm training with you today." A voice that belonged to Lukien, said. His voice was really deep, it was almost deeper than his father's. I felt my eyes widen and I looked at my father. He nodded down at me, with a arrogant smile on his face. He just loves getting his way! Grrrrrrr... I almost rolled my eyes at him but then my gaze lowered to the ground and I wouldn't look up no matter who spoke to me at that moment.

"Well Lukien, Elysia, go ahead and go train then." The Alpha said. I nodded and Lukien nodded at the same time. Then we headed off. I was a little bit behind Lukien. As we walked away I heard Alpha say "Boy, she sure is shy." and my dad reply "Yeah maybe spending time with Lukien will help, I worry about her sometimes, being like that." I almost shouted at them, but stopped myself. Suddenly I noticed Lukien had slowed to my pace. "So, Elysia, what do you specialize in?" He said to me. "well Snow. I can't control it very well, that's why my father sent me out here." I said quietly and quickly. He nodded. "I control Lightning, like my dad." He said to me. "Your really shy, Why? Did someone hurt you?" Lukien asked after a few moments of silence. I almost shuddered. Yep someone has Lukien! And I'm just going to spill it to you, yeah ok surrrre, right. Not happening. "I'd rather not talk about it, but if you want to really know, yes, yes someone really hurt me emotionally." I said in the same quiet quick way as before. He looked away. I thought I said something wrong or hurt him. "D-did I say something wrong?" I said now prancing nervously a bit. My wings fluttered a bit. "No, no, not at all. I just don't like it when males do things like that." He said looking me straight in the eye. I looked away. The rest of the day we worked on me controlling my powers and well I enjoyed it actually but I kept my walls up. And my gaurd. I made the mistake of letting my guard down before and was hurt. That won't happen again if it's up to me. When my dad came to fetch me I said good-bye to Lukien and left quickly head lowered just as I had entered. 'You will come back tomorrow too, Elysia, or you can do pup duty." My dad said. I just merely nodded. As soon as we got there I ate talked to my mom and went to sleep. I actually wondered what Lukien was doing. And then scolded myself. Then All I remember is laying down, and I was out.

When I woke up the next morning, I was the first one awake. I walked outside into the forest and found my favorite spot. I danced around and flew a bit using my powers and my wings for a bit. Suddenly I knew someone was watching me. My playful demeanor disappeared. I sat down on my haunches and looked around my gaze piercing and my powers making snow float up my legs. "Well Hello there Elysia." Someone said. The voice regestered as Lukien. "Lukien!? What are you doing here? No one has ever been here but me." I said before realizing how unshy and strong that sounded. I had let my guard down here and now I knew I couldn't again. I instantly looked down and put my walls back up. "Elysia, I had no idea this place meant so much to you I'm sorry. I came across your scent and followed you here. I watched you play. I'm sorry I shouldn't have-" He tried to finish but the I guess he saw the tear fall from my eye, because he rushed over and wiped it away in a friendly manor. I was shocked. I had never made friends easily, and no one had ever made a friendly gesture towards me. It wasn't him that made me cry, I was thinking about how the last time I played in front of anyone was the time I ended up heart broken. "I-It's not your fault L-lukien. I wasn't crying because of you." I said softly and quietly in my normal manor. "Elysia, I know you weren't crying because of me. If you want whenever your ready you can always tell me." he said softly to me. I nodded and almost didn't notice his paw go around mine. I looked up at him carefully after have seeing that. I searched his eyes for something, I knew what deep down, I was looking to see if he liked me the way i liked him, but was to afraid to admit. He seemed to know what I was searching for but also seemed to know I wasn't ready to admit it either. "Elysia you must know this. I like you, a lot. When you feel ready enough you can tell me or just show me what you think. But I'll be waiting for you to trust me." he said softly. I looked back down at our paws his really large one across my tiny one. My eyes teared up. "Lukien, I can't thank you enough, but you really shouldn't like someone like me, I'm not worth it." I said flatly knowing in my mind I wasn't. But you shouldn't always listen to your head.At that Lukien looked shocked. "Elysia, you are so pretty. Someone must have really hurt you." He said to me. I nodded and turned away from him, snow frosting the ground beneath my paws. He sighed. "Come one Elysia, your dad is probably worried sick." He said to me nudging me. I nodded and walked away. "See you later Luk-" I started to say. He walked up and out fur brushed together at that moment. Then I just kept walking beside him quietly.

to be continued.. (That is if I get her, but hey I still like it. Comments crit? Pm me bout' it please. :3)


Art:



I,Ɯιℓ∂ɛƨтѲиɛƨ Ƭнαт Яʋи, Promis to Return This pup To Snowstar1 should I no longer wish to keep it.

[Agent Shark]

Date has been extended, sorry to those who are waiting, But i'll need more time to deside with all the great entrys


WIP Enterys will be counded...depending on what all had been done. I'll give ONE more WEEK for you to add stuff/ finish your entrys.


Scoring Board Below

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Depending on---
Points here

Name

(depending on how unique the name is)
10 - 20 points

Why you want it

Depending on what your reason was
5 - 10 points

Story

Depending on how "fitiing" the story was
20 - 40 points

Art

Depending on your art and how "acurate" it was
5 - 10

Extra

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10- 20 points

[Dawnbreeze10210]

Username: Dawnbreeze10210
Name: Icewing
Pup: 7
Why you want it: I would like her because her markings are unique. I am not one to say "Oh my gosh! because she is so adorable and fluffy!" my reasons are more simplified but good reasons. I'd like icewing (If I may call her that for now) Because she is unique, as stated before. The colours all match and contrast which each other beautifully. I love how she loves the winter, and she has wings which makes her different from others, though she still would be beautiful without them. But the wings to make her more wonderful also. She is neat and I believe her personality fits her beautifully, as well as what she looks like and who she is. For another reason, I personally love simple yet complicated and beautiful designs. Icewing has that, her designs are simply yet beautiful, and her wings just give that extra look to her.
Story/Art:
STORY: Icewing looked around quietly feeling the piercing gaze of the others watching her every step. She ducked her head uncomfortably, her white fur with grey spots shimmering gently in the weak winter sunlight, oh how she adored the snow... The white powder crunched underneath her paws as she shifted them shyly. Her aqua eyes were soft and afraid, yet they were proud. She stretched out her wings, that had begun to cramp. Many gasps and shuffling of paws filled her ears and she quickly tucked them back in close to her body. Icewing glanced at the others quietly, she was the first to find her power and the thing that made her special, she was happy but a bit afraid she was the first. She glanced at her old friends and they awkwardly looked away from her. She sighed softly, her breath coming out in a soft white cloud. the golden earrings on her ears jingled softly as she stood up to go for a walk, a long one, she wasn't wanted here.

Her shy nature told her to run, to never look back and find a place where she truly belonged. Where no one would judge her because she was the first, she to find her true self. It just wasn't fair. She ducked her head again from the stares and kept her gaze fixed on the shimmering snow. At least they didn't mind her, sure they didn't talk but she knew they wouldn't judge her. Each snowflake was unique, and each snowflake different from the other. Just like her and everyone here, why couldn't they understand that? Her aqua eyes were sad and turned shy again as she stepped towards the snow and ice covered forest before her.

As she turned to leave she heard something...something that made her pause and wait to see what it was. Her ears pricked and the soft crunching of snow towards her made her flick her tail confused . She turned her head towards the sound her white muzzle lifted curiously. A pure white wolf, the same age as she smiled at her gently. He layed his fuzzy muzzle on her own, snow covering her nose which made her sneeze. He nuzzled her shoulder playfully with a smirk on his face, his eyes glowing warmly. That broke the ice, the simply gesture, the warmth in his eyes. She yipped happily and jumped a bit spreading her wings, which casted a soft blue shadow over the pure white snow. The other wolves raced towards her and formed a small cluster around her, not afraid or jealous of her anymore. Happiniess and curiosity sparked all of their eyes' as they gazed at her wings and seemed to all want to play with her and find out her secret. The white male wolf smiled at her and his tounge rolled out from his mouth in a friendly jesture. He let out a happy yip and took off, Icewing and her new companions trailing after him with bright eyes. Everything was going to be ok, everything was like the snow. Each snowflake is different, and each snowflake will always be itself. NO matter how many dispise it, it will always be there. And when the snow melts, they will all be together, and when they are all together everything will be understood.

POEM
One whos eyes shimmer a delicate purple,
Who never seemed to fit the circle.
With a winter white pelt,
Which snow under her paws dont melt.
Shimmering wings spread with glee,
For all the other pups to see.
Whos personality is shy,
But she who will always try.
One other who approved her,
set the others to join her.
Now all friends,
and everything is at amends.
To accept herself here,
Is the lessoned learned for all to hear.

Artwork

**Credits to Key!**

I,Dawnbreeze10210, Promise to Return This pup To Snowstar1 should I no longer wish to keep it.

[.jaskier.]

Bump

[LoneWolf-Gage]

So when is the end date?
It has been more than a week.

[Agent Shark]

Heh, yeah sorry About that...

I've been limited to Two hours per day right now,

Though, I AM judgeing the Entrys. Some are hard to choose between :l

[wildwolfspiret]

ohhhhh i cant wait!!!!!!!! I hope i win!!

[Agent Shark]

(Also, forget The point thing, It was for something else))

Winners


The Winner Of Pup
1

It was a close tie bewteen DemzeeDemon & Blazer.Peppermint

DemzeeDemon Wins Pup one

Blazer.peppermint Wins inverted version of pup One


The Winner Of Pup
2

*Deciding*


The Winner Of Pup
3
*Deciding*


The Winner Of Pup
7

a v e n g e!

I Really Loved your form, The others were great but yours had that...Spark I was looking for.