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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby Xhat » Mon May 14, 2012 2:56 am

Slystar
.:She-cat:.:Leader:.:Excited/Nervous:.:None.:.Getting ready to lead patrol:.

Sitting a couple tail-lengths away from Shadowfur and Russetpaw, Slystar flicked her tail, signaling Shadowfur. She let out a yawn, and her light pink tongue poked out of her mouth the slightest bit. Dropping down, Slystar started to stretch, letting her long, hooked claws slide out. "Ready to go?" she asked the duo, starting to smooth down her fur. "I was thinking, that we should bring Sunheart... since Flametail in unable to attend." she meowed after, flicking her ears.

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.:Tom:..:Warrior:.:Happy/Calm:.:None:.:Getting ready to patrol:.

After finishing my small chat with my apprentice, I turn my head slightly to see Slystar. "Greetings, Slystar." he meows, dipping his head slightly. With the slightlest nudge, he nudged Russetpaw. "Ready to go?" he purrs with amusement. "After we come back, shouldn't you appoint a new deputy?" he asks soon after, cocking his head. The leader nods slowly, and I get up on my paws.
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby Cloverstream » Mon May 14, 2012 10:01 am

(Ya its nice reading long posts. Your like... Beyond advanced lol. But personally if my posts are dragging I cut them shorter)
Sweetpaw
She feels a prick of guilt. "Oops. Sorry did I scare something away." She is almost postive she did. "Oh sorry. But yes! I smelled a wired animal. it was a fox! I think. It dident smell at all like prey at all." She said getting excited about it all over. Then thinks whouldent it be so cool to see a real fox? Or fight one?
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby kivr & fireflii » Mon May 14, 2012 2:35 pm

Russetpaw

At Slystar's signal, Russetpaw wiggled a little bit, eyes filled with mirth. She yawned and stretched before finally addressing the two. To the question, Russetpaw eagerly nodded his head, tail waving in the air. "I was thinking, that we should bring Sunheart..." Russetpaw tilted his head at the name. Of course, he knew who Sunheart was, and he had talked to the warrior quite a few times. He was very kind, and didn't seem to mind Russetpaw's tales so much as the others. Still, the russet cat was slightly nervous to have the leader, the actual clan leader, and two warriors with him, the only apprentice! Surely he was nervous, but Russetpaw took it like a brave hero. He puffed out his chest slightly, more so to prove he was worthy to himself, and continuously told himself he would be like them one day.

Waiting for Shadowfur to greet Slystar, albeit a little impatiently, Russetpaw turned his body and took a few steps toward the camp entrance. "Of course I'm ready, Shadowfur!" A little disbelief leaked through his voice, warriors were always ready! Russetpaw flicked his gaze between the two warriors and the entrance as they spoke. "After we come back, shouldn't you appoint a new deputy?" Few things distracted Russetpaw from a mission, as he liked to call them. However, this question was certainly one of those things. He snapped his head toward the two, just barely enough to see Slystar nod her head.

The new deputy! Of course, how could he forget after Mudstar passed only last sunhigh. Russetpaw's face turned determined, and his claws unsheathed to shred the weak grass stems from the ground. Part of him was saddened, anyone would be for the clan leader. However, a little part of him was angry. He wasn't there when the header had lost his last life, all because of another clan cat! Russetpaw vowed to be the best warrior to make the first leader he had ever known proud. He would show all the cats how strong he could be, how much he could help others, and other cats would surely look up to him for it.

((I just made up Mudstar since no one actually played the leader. I figured his name fit Swampclan. c;))


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Sunheart

"Oops. Sorry, did I scare something away?"

Sunheart flicked his tail absentmindedly, brushing off the loss. "That's quite alright, Sweetpaw." He reassured her in a kind voice, lightly purring as emphasis. "There will be other prey." As it was, Sunheart diligently listened with patience as he heard his apprentice perk up about a fox. The orange tabby tilted his head at the claim of it: a fox? His eyes slightly narrowed as he thought how uncommon it would be to see a fox in a swamp. Snakes? Of course. Toads and frogs? They were plentiful. Occasionally they even saw an alligator far off into the waters of the nearby river that twisted through their territory. A fox worried him a bit though, they were usually in Oakclan. Yes, they did wander over here sometimes, but not all that often.

Sunheart blinked down at his apprentice as he brought his tail to rest on her shoulder. He chuckled at her enthusiasm, nonetheless. "Perhaps it may be, they are quite uncommon in Swampclan territory. Though, I am curious, where did you smell this scent? You know, you should be cautious about going places without a warrior. While you are an apprentice now, you are still young, and a fox could make easy prey of you." Sunheart did not want to frighten his apprentice, little Sweetpaw who he hated to upset more than anyone it seemed. Nonetheless, he felt that he was very important that she know not to run off by herself. He would hate to be burdened should she be harmed because of his carelessness to teach her to be wary.

He aimed to teach her, not to frightened her. So as to make sure she heard his words, but wasn't too nervous about them just to be sure, he added, "Why don't you lead the way to where you found this scent and we can examine it further, together." Flicking his tail off her shoulder, Sunheart pulled himself to his paws, patiently waiting for a response and at the same time, hoping he didn't crush her excitement.

((Ahha, thank you. ^^ Don't worry about your posts dragging, in fact, there's lots of ways you can improve it. c: Aside from making sure to check for grammar, spelling, etc. mistakes, it may help to explain what your character is experiencing in their senses. For example, what do they see, hear, or smell? How do they feel at the moment, or what do they think about something another character said?))
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby Cloverstream » Mon May 14, 2012 3:42 pm

(Ya spelling and grammar need work. I have Disgrapsia and that gives me a hard time with that. But I'll try)
Sweetpaw
She is only dissapointed for a second hereing there not so common. Then doubts her self for another second. "I know there not common here, but it's not Impossable. I think its a fox but I don't know...Plus , I want to see what they look like!" She said since she had only heard story's from elders about such creatures. The tails of things like badgers ,foxes and alligators scared the kits. But often made her more curious. Suddenly she's snapped back from her world of kits tails and remembers the second thing he said. "Oh ya. I'll be more carful to not go far with out you or another warrior." She said feeling a prickle of guilt she had gone out so far with out a warrior.
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby kivr & fireflii » Mon May 14, 2012 4:05 pm

Sunheart

Sunheart purred at her exclamation. "Of course it's not impossible, I don't doubt you. We should just be sure to check that it is not to close to the camp, and if it is, to make sure it is gone." Sunheart did not mind seeing a fox, he himself had only seen one glimpse of one, and it wasn't much of a glimpse. Nonetheless, he had heard from several senior warriors what they were like, and while he also would like to at least experience one, he knew the two of them alone would not be able to fight it if the fox were at full health. Hopefully, it would not be there. Still, he was glad that Sweetpaw had taken in his words.

Hopefully that would help avoid any future problems; she was a good apprentice that liked to learn and he was ever so grateful. Sometimes she got a bit excited, but luckily she listened. That is, not that she didn't have a few times of lack of thought, all apprentices did. However, Sunheart was glad she was not at the point that it sometimes put her or another cat in danger, much like another apprentice he knew of. Poor Shadowfur, having to keep a stern eye on his apprentice, Russetpaw. The young apprentice was always so excited to please he tended to act before thinking.

Sunheart peered down and studied his apprentice for a moment, thanking Starclan for his luck on this one. Still seeing her shuffle her paws in the mud out of nervousness, it seemed, he leaned down and gave a quick lick to her ear. "Not to worry, I'm just saying to be careful in the future, as I know you will be." Sunheart ambled back toward the direction Sweetpaw sprinted from, thinking that was where she scented the creature. He tilted his head in the direction, urging her to lead. "Now, shall we?"

((Oh that's quite alright. ^^ I wasn't trying to criticize that hard, mainly just tips if you're having trouble. c: Anyway, I'm not sure what you're planning, but just so it's easier... I was thinking the fox scent [which could possibly actually be the new prey?] was back toward the camp [but more off toward the east/west so not necessarily near the camp, just the general direction] and then the two could meet with Shadowfur, Slyclaw, and Russetpaw [and of course, Sunheart would request that Beepaw come for experience as well]? By the way, if this font color is a bit bright, let me know. c:))
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby Cloverstream » Mon May 14, 2012 4:42 pm

(Thanks. Ya I know your not trying to be rude lol. And that sounds like a grate idea!)
Sweetpaw
She looks up at him from her paws. "Ok.Thanks Sunheart." She purred happy he trusted her even if it might be rare to find a fox here. Of corse there's still a possibility it's not a fox and something else. What ever it is she whould like to get going to see what he thinks.She nodded at his other comments feeling really lucky to have him as her mentor. He is one of the most experenced young warriors and very kind.Even if she can be loud and scare away prey. She is almost positive he will be the next deputy.

She nods when he start to go off."Let's go!" Then she quickly snaps into her senses. It's still fairly easy to tell where she came from, even with the mud masking all smells and the wind blowing them. But since it's such a recent path, it shouldn't be to hard to go back to where the possible fox is. Though it's pretty deep in there territory reminding her again she shouldn't have gone that far. It's hard for her not to loose track of time.
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby kivr & fireflii » Tue May 15, 2012 11:46 am

((Would post, but it would just mainly be Sunheart following Sweetpaw and thinking. XD Not very exciting. I think I'll wait until Peeta posts and once the patrol is out, they can meet together if that's cool with y'all? c:))
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby Xhat » Tue May 15, 2012 12:34 pm

Slystar
.:She-cat:.:Leader:.:Excited/Nervous:.:None:.:Leading Patrol:.

Slystar scrapes the ground with her curved claws, and leaves deep marks in the earth. Her ears angle towards some distant croaks and ribbits. "Let's go." she meows, her eyes seeming distant. Waving her ebony tail to the entrance, she trotted over. Her head titlted back, waiting for Shadowfur and Russetpaw.

Shadowfur
.:Tom:..:Warrior:.:Happy/Calm:.:None:.:Getting ready to patrol:.

I smile, and flick my tail anxiously. His ears also angle to the distant croaking, and he watches as Slystar scrapes the earth. My smokey grey tail sweeps around my apprentice Russetpaw, and I start to pad towards the entrance.
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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby Cloverstream » Tue May 15, 2012 12:42 pm

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Re: Swampclan||The Clan of the Marshes|| !ACCEPTING!

Postby kivr & fireflii » Tue May 15, 2012 12:56 pm

Russetpaw

Russetpaw was ready to bolt the moment he heard Slystar called for them to leave. She seemed a bit off, but Russetpaw ignored it, too intent on trying to pin himself to the ground. Normally, he would have bolted off toward the entrance, eager to just wait for Shadowfur on the other side. However, since Slystar was here, Russetpaw wanted to make a good impression. So, as a good apprentice, he waited for her and Shadowfur to lead, albeit rather impatiently. Finally, feeling the light feather-like touch of Shadowfur's tail wrap around him, Russetpaw eagerly bounced behind them. The pace was not hurried, but as long as he was moving in some way, Russetpaw was sure that he wouldn't feel the urge to run off.


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Sunheart

Sunheart dipped his head at Sweetpaw and waited until she was ahead before trailing behind. As he followed patiently, Sunheart tipped his head back and scented the air as they went along. As they moved, Sunheart began to be able to differentiate the scent that was the supposed fox. Moving to the side of her now, not necessarily as a show of being a warrior, but rather to keep her safe against any ambushes, Sunheart made conversation. "Hmm... it wasn't that close to the camp was it?" He recognized the trail in the general direction, but wasn't actually sure where yet.

((Sorry for short post, just waiting until the moment they encounter each other now. XD))
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