View topic - Please, just go on without me...

My gallery · by **clip !!** » Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:06 am

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Please, just go on without me...
i'll slow you down...
just leave me...
leave me here to die alone...

i'll bleed to death before anyone finds me...
please, just go...
i don't deserve to be here with you...
just leave me here...

Please, just go on without me...
i'll slow you down...
just leave me...
leave me here to die alone...

just go...
please, go before...
you get killed...
just, leave me here...

Please, just go on without me...
i'll slow you down...
just leave me...
leave me here to die alone...

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My gallery · by **royalty.** » Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:12 am

To much blood >:/

My gallery · by **Rasca1Jack** » Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:31 pm

~Moonlightwolf~ wrote:To much blood >:/

not in my eyes im not tryen to sound mean but i think this is neat and the poem is awesome
id would bring some of the blood off not all of it but just shorten up the puddles

My gallery · by **clip !!** » Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:31 pm

My gallery · by **clip !!** » Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:34 pm

fixed it

My gallery · by **royalty.** » Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:51 am

Thats better

Now its not to violent

My gallery · by **Rasca1Jack** » Fri Mar 23, 2012 3:32 pm

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Artist	clip !! [gallery]
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