Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Ayramite » Wed Mar 14, 2012 8:54 am

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How many RAWs you currently own: none
Name: Zareen
Gender: Female
Personality: Very out going always trying to one up her siblings and sometime getting herself into trouble luckily most of the parts she damages are replaceable. She also is curious about the scientist that share the forest with them. This usually gets her in trouble with her parents and the leader, who doesn't find her curiosity the least bit amusing and has made it quite clear the boundaries that she tends to keep pushing. She's a confident fighter when it comes to learning how to take down the scientist that wish to harm her and the rest of the pack, but she still thinks that there has to be one different human that wishes to help them after all didn't they think like they did?
Story: The sound of the forest was the first thing she heard as she became aware of the world around her. As she grew she became aware of the odd metal that covered certain parts of her body and her also her enhanced senses as she learned the battle that her generation faced. The humans had created them and experimented on them with no knowledge of the pain they had caused the very things they had created they were suppose to be friends allies and yet they had been used and abused through years of observation and poking and prodding and still they wished to eradicate the very things they had created this is how her kind saw the humans and how she would soon learn to view them if her parents had anything to say anything about or the alpha he was a no nonsense party pooper as far as she was concerned well that was her view of him when she was pup and all she wanted to do was have fun, now she was grown and was still curious about the humans that had created the very first of their kind.

Zareen looked around and slunk back deep into the forest before anyone could notice that she was missing headed to the part of the forest she had caught the scent of human and followed it. Coming to a stop she heard a commotion. " They're smarter, faster, and their in their element we need a way to shut them down" one yelled pacing back and forth ranting on and on about what an abomination her pack was. Huffing she went back to the pack grounds and of course the alpha caught her on her way back in. " Where have you been" he asked sternly and she looked at the ground. " Just went for a walk in the forest" she replied and quickly went to her normal lounging place for the day when there wasn't much to do. The hunters has already hunted. The scientist hadn't made any moves to attack so everyone was still on edge waiting for the next attack and of course the alpha was still the no nonsense no funny alpha as always everything was going normal as far as she could tell.

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Okay well ignore the paws they look terrible I think the only thing I like is the face the face looks good the rest just kinda blah.
What the metal parts do:
metal around eyes enhances site
metal on neck is for protection
The chest piece is wired to the lungs ad heart and help stamina
leg metal is more durable and weather resistant still stiff and can be uncomfortable, but helps speed for short burst.
List 4 things about RAWs:
1. The first RAW was a house hold pet that was given up when the personality was altered by the experiment
2. There are a total of 10 RAWs that have identification the 1st one with tags the others with collars
3. They have metal parts that take the place of simple limbs, but no organs as of yet
4. They have a human intelligence and can speak english

I'd do more on the story but I'd like to develop it more in the RP if I get her. As far as the art do we have to do actual metal or can we make a new one since they're second generation I was thinking of doing a metal that more resistant to the elements and a little stronger since they've inherited in the genetics but I wanna make sure it's okay before.
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby ~Nonexistant » Wed Mar 14, 2012 8:59 am

starry-knight wrote::( someone will love him/her! Otherwise he won't be given out. Don't want no hater taking Smith's and mercury's pup!

Yeah, Im not even picking an end date until at least one lover finishes a form ^^♥ I know at least one person will (cuz personally I like him/her)
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Pety » Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:46 am

I love Pup Nr 2!<3 But I don't have the time to aply. : ( ( Stupid school! ;F )
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Ayramite » Thu Mar 15, 2012 3:41 pm

Finished my form :D
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Mozzie » Fri Mar 16, 2012 8:04 am

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How Many RAWs I Own: Hoping this will be my first.

N A M E :
Vixen.

G E N D E R :
Female.

F R I E N D S :
Hawk, Poppy, Cougar.

E N I M I E S :
Every wolf besides Hawk, Poppy, and Cougar.

F A V O R I T E ~ C O L O R :
Black.

P E R S O N A L I T Y :
Vixen is ferocious and snappy and not afraid to fight. She is very smart and it is very hard to trick her. Most stay away from her but some become her friends. It is like swallowing a bone to become her friend but if she trusts you with her life and you are very close, she'll be nice and not try to bite off your head. She has a bad temper but usually manages it. Enemies Beware: She's a Hazard.

S T O R Y :
{WIP}

Four Things About RAWs:

~ Have increased strength and speed.
~Very intelligent.
~ Rain is very bad for them because of them having robot parts.
~Pups aren't born with robot parts.
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby ~Nonexistant » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:29 am

Yay! Ill decide an end date now!♥
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Siriro » Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:29 am

*stalking this thread from now on*
The puppies are so cute! Lufflez all of them!
Hope this 'lill guy gets a grat home! Otherwise I'll get kinda pissed of...x3
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Pety » Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:22 am

Congratz Ayramite! C;
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Ayramite » Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:26 am

Yay! *hugs Zareen* I promise to take good care of her. Thanks Pety I'm so glad I got her
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Re: First ever RAW litter!

Postby Pety » Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:42 am

Ayramite wrote:Yay! *hugs Zareen* I promise to take good care of her. Thanks Pety I'm so glad I got her

You'll be an greate owner!<3
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