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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Sweetart » Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:57 am

I'm gonna click it with the sound on.....Wish me luck.....
Edit: I got scared after the first twenty seconds. On YouTube, the comments say to go to the 5:00 minute part and I did.....I don't think I've ever been as scared...Please, NO ONE click on the link and go to the part where it's screaming.......PLEASE! I think I'm scarred for life...........Guys, I'm serious. That video is meant to kill people with it's scariness. It's still echoing in my head...Did anyone else watch the video? If you did what was your reaction?
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Let's get out, let's get out
'Cause this deadbeat town's only here just to keep us down
While I was out, I found myself alone just thinking
If I showed up with a plane ticket
And a shiny diamond ring with your name on it
Would you wanna run away too?
'Cause all I really want is you
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Fri Mar 09, 2012 5:43 am

.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:I'm gonna click it with the sound on.....Wish me luck.....
Edit: I got scared after the first twenty seconds. On YouTube, the comments say to go to the 5:00 minute part and I did.....I don't think I've ever been as scared...Please, NO ONE click on the link and go to the part where it's screaming.......PLEASE! I think I'm scarred for life...........Guys, I'm serious. That video is meant to kill people with it's scariness. It's still echoing in my head...Did anyone else watch the video? If you did what was your reaction?

Sadly I saw the link without the sound.. I got REALLY freaked out after the first minute, cos I was scared to know what would happen next. ΔWARNING!Δ THIS VIDEO IS PG-13! (well I guess PG-18)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Sweetart » Fri Mar 09, 2012 5:49 am

Phantom's Shadow wrote:
.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:I'm gonna click it with the sound on.....Wish me luck.....
Edit: I got scared after the first twenty seconds. On YouTube, the comments say to go to the 5:00 minute part and I did.....I don't think I've ever been as scared...Please, NO ONE click on the link and go to the part where it's screaming.......PLEASE! I think I'm scarred for life...........Guys, I'm serious. That video is meant to kill people with it's scariness. It's still echoing in my head...Did anyone else watch the video? If you did what was your reaction?

Sadly I saw the link without the sound.. I got REALLY freaked out after the first minute, cos I was scared to know what would happen next. ΔWARNING!Δ THIS VIDEO IS PG-13! (well I guess PG-18)

Dang, you're lucky. They should rate videos.
ΔWARNING!Δ THIS VIDEO IS PG-13!
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Let's get out, let's get out
'Cause this deadbeat town's only here just to keep us down
While I was out, I found myself alone just thinking
If I showed up with a plane ticket
And a shiny diamond ring with your name on it
Would you wanna run away too?
'Cause all I really want is you
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Blurred » Fri Mar 09, 2012 6:31 am

.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:
Phantom's Shadow wrote:
.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:I'm gonna click it with the sound on.....Wish me luck.....
Edit: I got scared after the first twenty seconds. On YouTube, the comments say to go to the 5:00 minute part and I did.....I don't think I've ever been as scared...Please, NO ONE click on the link and go to the part where it's screaming.......PLEASE! I think I'm scarred for life...........Guys, I'm serious. That video is meant to kill people with it's scariness. It's still echoing in my head...Did anyone else watch the video? If you did what was your reaction?

Sadly I saw the link without the sound.. I got REALLY freaked out after the first minute, cos I was scared to know what would happen next. ΔWARNING!Δ THIS VIDEO IS PG-13! (well I guess PG-18)

Dang, you're lucky. They should rate videos.
ΔWARNING!Δ THIS VIDEO IS PG-13!


That video... Do I really have to say how disturbing it is?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Fri Mar 09, 2012 7:11 am

Heck, thanks All Alone.
@BlurryKat yes please.. :P
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Mar 10, 2012 7:46 am

.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:I'm gonna click it with the sound on.....Wish me luck.....
Edit: I got scared after the first twenty seconds. On YouTube, the comments say to go to the 5:00 minute part and I did.....I don't think I've ever been as scared...Please, NO ONE click on the link and go to the part where it's screaming.......PLEASE! I think I'm scarred for life...........Guys, I'm serious. That video is meant to kill people with it's scariness. It's still echoing in my head...Did anyone else watch the video? If you did what was your reaction?

Yes I watched it with sound, I burst out laughing XD it was so unsuspected it was so hilarious though!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~JellyFish~ » Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:10 am

'Releasing The Darkness, Ch 2'

James and Danny appeared in front of the gates of hell. Fire ran down James's wrists and he blasted the flames onto the gates.
The gates opened. The two young boys entered Hell with no fear at all. Danny was shaking as blood trickled down from his
mouth. "Ugh.." he growled. "I hate this..!" he hissed kicking a demon far away. "Calm, my young brother." James said, "It won't be long
till we find Jackie.." he smirked and kept walking. It took a few hours till they both found Jackie. It was hard since they're eighteen layers of hell! They got to the eighteenth layer: Chamber of Saw
The Function was, Those who exploit the loopholes in the law to cheat and engage in malpractice in business will find themselves being sawed into half. The boys entered seeing Jackie sawing a man in half!

Jackie smirked as the man screamed in pain till he died again, but appeared in a line of other people?
Jackie looked at the line. "Who's next for their punishment?"
The people froze in fear, he was true darkness!
"J-Jackie?" called Danny. "WHAT IS IT?!" Jackie turned with a hiss. His eyes were bright red.
"Oh, it's you." he calmed as his eyes went back to the colour of brown. "What?"
"We need you to embrace the darkness on our village." James said, "They need the darkness.."
Jackie thought carefully. "Come back in a year on June the 6th..."
"What time?" Danny said camely. "six past six, either am or pm..you decide.."
"THAT'S TOO LONG!" James hissed. Jackie walked over, picking James up by the throat, choking him. "DO AS YOU'RE TOLD, BOY!"
Jackie snapped. James suddenly had fear, he whimpered and nodded. "Yes, sir.."
"Good boy," Jackie smirked, dropping him.

A demon crept up behind Jackie and suddenly bit him on the neck. Jackie hissed and threw the demon off, smashing it against the wall. They're was a crunchy sound heard with blood running down its face. Jackie laughed evily and threw the demon to the ground.
"Fool-ish demons trying to take me on...pathetic.." he snarled, looking at the two young boys who were shaking. "Be gone and wait for a year, understood?" Danny and James nodded quickly. "Of course, sir.." they said and ran out. They crawled up the other layers of hell, seeing people who were so miserable, a lot were begging for mercy. Danny and James walked right on past, smirking
with fire running down they're arms. They got the gates of Hell. James blasted the gates with fire, the gates opened as they walked on. The gates slammed shut as they left Hell. They crawled up till they reached the surface, (our world in other words,) and walked towards the village, seeming normal as they could be.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Daisy May » Sat Mar 10, 2012 9:04 am

Suiced Mouse is not that scary people. My 12 year old cousin watched it without a scare. I don't think it was "made to kill people" because I don't think the creaters of the orginal Mickey Mouse actually made it. I think it was just made by a twisted kid who wanted to scare people.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orangelake » Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:29 pm

Well, this story is more creepy then scary, but I'll tell you anyway.
One day, this man rents a house and moves in. He found a hole in the wall; he was about to call the landowner to complain, but he looked outside of the hole, which showed the house across the street, and he saw a pretty girl in a night gown with brown hair dancing outside. He decided against calling the landlord, because he wanted to continue looking through the hole to watch the pretty girl dancing. For the next few days, he kept on looking through the hole to spy on the girl, who was dancing in the night gown every day. Then, one day he looked through the hole, again, but didn't see the girl dancing; he just saw a bunch of red. The next day, he looked through the hole, again, but the girl was no longer dancing outside. Finally, he decided to call the landlord to complain about the hole. On the phone, the man asked the landlord, "Who is the girl who lives across the street?" The landlord replied, "Oh, that is my niece. She has brown hair, she always wears a night gown, and she has red eyes." The girl had been looking through the hole that day

not really scary but yeah...

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One day a man walked into a hotel and asked for a room.
The check-in clerk gave him a room number.
He said, "Here are your keys, and if you walk pass by an unnumbered room, do not look in it."
Once the clerk said that, the man got curious.
He brings his bags to his and room and felt the need to get some fresh air.
He walks pass by the unnumbered room and was still curious.
He decided to look in the room through the keyhole.
He saw a lady in the corner of the room in a fetal position and thought, "Ah, it's nobody."

The next day he looks through the keyhole and saw red. He thought, "Oh, someone must've covered it up."
The man walked down to the lobby and asked the clerk man what happened in the unnumbered room.
The clerk said, "A married couple were there. The husband killed the wife because her eyes were red."

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Life seemed perfect to Mark when the widower brought his new bride Lisa home to the lovely two-story cottage he had build for his deceased first wife. Things were very happy for about a year, and Mark was ecstatic when he learned Lisa was expecting twins. The house was rather small for a double addition to the family, so Mark and Lisa put the cottage up for sale and started searching for a bigger house. That’s when the problems began.
Suddenly, the cottage would be filled with the distinctive smell of expensive perfume. The first time Mark smelled it, he turned pale and told Lisa that it was the scent his dead wife had favored. Then furniture that Lisa had rearranged moved back to its original place. The books in Mark’s study were taken out of their categories and put in alphabetical order, the way his former wife had kept them. The ghost of Mark’s first wife had returned to the little cottage. But why now, a full year after he had remarried?

One afternoon, Lisa was down in the basement doing laundry while Mark was out front discussing the sale of the cottage with their attorney. They had just received a generous bid on the house and had decided to accept it. When Lisa finished emptying the washing machine, she turned to go back upstairs and saw a young woman floating a foot above the staircase.

“This is my house. Don’t sell my house!” the woman said. Her pretty face transformed with rage. She shook her fist at Lisa. Lisa shrieked, dropped the basket of wet laundry, and ran outside.
Slamming the basement door behind her, Lisa locked it and sat down on the lawn, gasping for breath. All at once, the basement door started shaking violently, as if someone were pushing against it.

“Don’t sell my house,” the phantom exclaimed again, shaking the door. “If you sell my house, something terrible will happen to your family! Don’t sell my house!” The roar of a car engine pierced the ghost’s words, as the attorney bade Mark goodbye and drove away. Immediately, the shaking and pounding ceased, as if the departure of the hated real-estate attorney had momentarily appeased the ghost.

When Lisa described the ghost, Mark recognized her as his dead wife. Until then, he had forgotten that he promised his first wife that he would never sell the cottage. Mark and Lisa tried to appease the ghost by bringing in a priest to pray over the cottage. But the house continued to be filled with the choking smell of expensive perfume. Lisa was afraid for her unborn babies, living in such a haunted atmosphere. After much discussion, Mark and Lisa decided to defy the phantom and sell the cottage.

On the night following the family’s move, Lisa was struck with a terrible pain in her abdomen. Mark rushed her to the hospital, where she gave birth to the twins, who were stillborn. On his way home from the hospital, Mark’s car was struck by a truck, and he was killed instantly. At the same moment, Lisa sat bolt upright in her hospital bed, staring at an empty corner of the room. She screamed once in terror at the sight of the phantom floating before her eyes, then she died instantly from a brain aneurism
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Sweetart » Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:27 pm

Nice stories! I'm totally creeped out 0.0
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'Cause this deadbeat town's only here just to keep us down
While I was out, I found myself alone just thinking
If I showed up with a plane ticket
And a shiny diamond ring with your name on it
Would you wanna run away too?
'Cause all I really want is you
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