Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Wolfin » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:04 am

If you posted a link I'd read it!
On that note could you read my story, New Leaf ?
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Melophobia » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:05 am

Yep, I will!
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Wolfin » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:07 am

Thanx!
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Melophobia » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:24 am

I like it! The names are really nice, too. I've been writing a book in a notebook since september but I haven't finished writing it on here yet.
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Wolfin » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:29 am

Thanx! You should write the story on here!
Could you maybe also reply on the story? No one replies so I think no one reads it.
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby mywashingtonromance » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:37 am

i read it! it was cool!
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Melophobia » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:59 am

As the Tribe of Fire walked through the forest looking for camp for the night, a long howl rose through the forest, followed by a more high-pitched howl. The Fire Tribe wasn't afraid, though; they knew it was their Tribe Guardian, Urie and her newborn, Paytah. The Tribe of Water, Earth, and Air also had Guardians, but the Earth Tribe's Guardian was a deer, the Air Tribe's was an eagle, and the Water Tribe's was a fish. The four Tribes were at constant battle, but their Guardians were always close by to protect them. The leader, Dezba, blew on his reed-whistle, announcing he had found a place for camp. They set up their teepees and hung up their elk skins on a wooden rack to be painted on. Dezba and his son, Kaliska, started a fire in the center of camp. Kaliska was a young man of 14, he was strong and brave, but hi father had stated that he was not yet ready to become leader. Dezba put the elk meat on a stick, which he placed on a spit made of ash wood. He tore off two chunks of meat, one in which he buried in the ground as an offer to the forest to thank for prey and the other to be tossed into the fire for their tribe Guardians. As he did so, two wolf shapes appeared in the blazing fire. A few yips of appreciation were heard throughout camp. A black wolf with flaming legs and ears and glowin orange eyes appeared in the camp. This was unusual for a Guardian. Seldom did they ever reveal themselves in front of anyone. It was Paytah's mother that spoke. "My dearest Fire Tribe, hard times lay ahead. Food will grow scarce and you may have to move to the Green Shore Island." she said, then dissapeared with Paytah in a flurry of flames. Nobody ever went to the Green Shore Island unless they were extremely desperate. There must be worse trouble than scarce food if their Tribe Guardian had appeared.
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Melophobia » Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:20 am

Wolfin wrote:Thanx! You should write the story on here!
Could you maybe also reply on the story? No one replies so I think no one reads it.


yeah, you're probably right. i fixed the picture with the background, but it didn't turn out like i wanted it to.
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby Melophobia » Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:38 am

Forest of Aspen: Book One - Rise of the Fallen
By Angel Caros

Prologue
Long ago, in a forest called Aspen, there lived two packs of wolves. Along with them, there was the outsiders. Now, I know the outsiders don’t sound like much, but they are what saved the forest.
The specific wolf of the outsiders was a scarred female called Fallen Hope. Her appearance could scare even the bravest of the Skydogs away. What is a Skydog, you ask? They are the packs’ fallen members who served with honor and pride. Every night the packs will look to the stars with a moment of silence.
The gruesome stories of what the outsiders did to become outsiders were told from generation to generation. Now, when I saw gruesome, I mean bloody, vicious, deadly, the whole deal. And Fallen Hope is no exception. If you’re wondering what she looks like, she’s a black wolf with a torn-in-half right ear and three scars down the left side of her muzzle, crossing her lip.

Chapter 1 - Our Way of Life
“Is there really gonna be more pups, momma? asked Ulric. “Yes, Ulric. When is there not more than one wolf pup in the spring?” Flower answered. Ulric was a one month old puppy, the only surviving of the beta pair’s litter. He wandered about the packs home, dreading the new pups. I hope they’re boys, thought Ulric. He sat next to Cloud’s den, straining to hear something.
All the listening paid off, for soon he heard whimpers and cries from the den. He ran to the entrance, only to be thrown back by Shadow. “They’ll come out when they’re ready,” he said in a booming voice. “Sorry…” Ulric grumbled. “Don’t be sorry, be careful,” Shadow snapped.
The pups opened their eyes just a few hours after they were born. One was black and the other was brown. “Their names will be,” Cloud said, pausing to think. “Fallen Hope and Rage.” she continued with pride.
Ulric asked from outside, “Can I see?” “Yes but be careful please, Ulric,” Cloud answered. From the moment he laid eyes on the black pup, he knew she would cause trouble. The brown one didn’t look so bad, though. Maybe they could be friends. “What are their names?” he asked curiously. “The brown one is Rage and the black one is Fallen Hope,” Cloud said. “Who’s he, mother?” Fallen Hope asked.
“That is Ulric. You and your brother will be staying with him at the rendezvous when the pack goes hunting,” Shadow answered back. A long, deep howl rose amongst the pack. “Blood, choose three wolves and go north. Kill anything large. Moose, wapiti, and if you find a horse herd, kill a young or weak one,” the alpha male, Star, said.
“Fang, choose also three wolves, but head east for prey. There are large rabbits, possibly fish if you can catch them. Head out,” he said.
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Re: Paytah the Sioux Fire-Guardian

Postby .:Night Fury:. » Mon Feb 15, 2010 2:40 pm

unqie34 wrote:i thought the whole fire idea for the little fire guardian cub was gonna be a fail, but i guess not. i tried to the dodge tool, but that just made the orange yellow. so i gave up. but thanks! the lineart rocks, by the way. u should make another one.

Oh, I see. It is really cool. And don't worry, I'll have more up eventually. XD
And good story too!
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