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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Shop is open | New Ahz Carora

Postby Tiikeria » Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:08 pm

    One hour warning~

    Carora has decided to not take any more suitors. Good luck to everyone. :3
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Shop is open | New Ahz Carora

Postby Tiikeria » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:24 pm

Silently, she considered; many had come before her, offering a life of pranks and fun. Each had their own unique sense of humor, but only one truly stuck out in her mind. She was taken with the idea of this Ahz being able to change and deceive those around them, and be able to play that part so very well. She knew that Ahz would be an excellent partner for her, a decoy for her playful nature and, together, she knew they would make sure Ahzen was never sort on pranks.

Gracefully, she lept from the tree, smirking as she spotted the flamboyantly pink and purple Ahz; she hid in a bush by the creek, waiting until Uralon approached the water, and with a great bounce reminiscent of her entrance into Ahzen, she landed in the body of water, effectively splashing the one she had chosen as her companion.

"Uralon, I'd be honored to effectively prank all of Ahzen by your side. That is, if you'll still have me. What do you say...partner-in-crime?"

Carora has chosen you, ~Bast~.
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Avg Number of Slots: ~4


I just want to say, I loved every entry put in for Carora, and thank Bourdon the RNG chose for me. XD I would not have been able to choose had it not been for that generator. Also, sorry for the delay; I had to run down to my grandma's for a bit. X3
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Shop is open | New Ahz Carora

Postby Bast-et » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:35 pm

*squee*
Thank you Tiki! (and magic random number generator)
Carora is lovely and I feel so lucky to have won her =D
She is my first non-MLV-bought-Ahz

As soon as a get home to my laptop I will type up Uralons response =D

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Shop is open | Carora has chosen!

Postby Onyxeva » Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:48 pm

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That horrible day that Zeonasusaro chose Garon was the day Medli decided it was best that she left the two to enjoy their life together. Medli had always had a little crush on Garon, though she would never admit it. The next day Medli told Garon that she was leaving to pursue someone who was richer, and could offer her more than just adventure. Garon did not even try to stop her, but what could she say, she had always been cruel to Garon. He had never liked her.

Medli's paws soon began to ache and she stopped to rest on a log near the lake. Medli checked each of her claws to make sure they were not broken. Not a single one of her black claws had been damaged and she sighed in relief. Medli noticed her fur was knotted a bit and she tried desperately to comb it out with her horns. It didn't work. Garon wasn't here to groom her when she needed it.

The vain ahzenai looked at the ground with a longing sadness. She needed someone to be there with her. To groom her fur, and to love her beauty. Medli let loose a barrage of salty tears onto the ground below. She never should have teased Garon all those times. He might be here to groom her fur if she was kinder to him.

She looked at her tears on the ground, and couldn't help but cry some more. She wanted someone to worship her, and to keep her safe. Or atleast, think she was beautiful. Someone who would comb her fur and tell her that she was beautiful every day. Someone who would clean her horns, and make sure none of her gorgeous claws got damaged. Medli sat on that log and cried, waiting for someone to comfort her when she needed it most.

Notes: To apply/woo Medli you must not already have an Ahz. You must be Ahz-less. :B

Medli is a vain creature, who cares solely for her looks. She is selfish, and a bit cruel. However, deep undearneath her fur, Medli is insecure and just wants somebody to like her and take care of her. Medli is trying to take a new lease on life and be kind to those around her. It might be a little hard at first, but she is going to try. Medli just want someone to keep her safe, whether it be a friend or mate. Medli can be a little sarcastic, and loves to tease those she thinks are lesser than her. As stated before she is trying to be kind to those around her now that Garon is gone. She likes wealth, as well and most things shiny. She wants to be pampered more than anything.

Cactus Monster will be judging the forms for Medli as she was the previous owner and the results will be posted in approx. 2 days.

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Ahzenai you're applying for:
Short Woo: (2-3 paragraphs is the minimum, 5 paragraphs max)
Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Carora has chosen!

Postby wajas » Mon Mar 05, 2012 3:05 pm

Username: wajas
Ahzenai you're applying for: medli
Short Woo: I slowly walked up to the dark-furred Ahzenai. "Hello, Medli, I am wajas, I would like to be your companion. I will keep you feeling safe and secure, even if you wanted to be alone at some times. I wanted to show you this," I said as I brought out a diamond-covered necklace. I then put it in front of Medli to see.
"I want to pamper you; make you beautiful, feel good, and get what you need. You already seem pretty, but I believe we can make you look marvelous. I can give you more jewelry and things you want or need. I want to make you happy, and to be your companion.
"We could go and get some hair done, washed, brushed, and groomed. We could go to the beach or camp, telling stories or watching the stars. I really want to be your friend, companion, and I want to keep you safe. I really want you to feel right at home-having what you want, so, do you want me to be your companion?"
Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: Because of her markings/coloring, also because she seems to stand out, compared to other Ahzenai.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Carora has chosen!

Postby *~SlyFox~* » Mon Mar 05, 2012 4:10 pm

Username:
*~SlyFox~*
Ahzenai you're applying for:
Medli
Short Woo:
Katherine sat on a bolder enjoying the wide view of Ahzen and the gems stuck in between the rocks making the cave like area glow with brilliant colors.She'd watched the hyper Ahzenai,Carora choose her new companion or rather her partner in crime.She could have tried to woo the bright colored Ahzenai,but she knew she would never be able to keep up with Carora's pranks and her energetic energy.Katherine slowly slid down the bolder ready to head home,till her ears picked up soft sobs coming from away from the vortex."Hello?"she called softly pushing her glasses closer to her eyes as she followed the sobs till she stumbled to find a female Ahzenai,salty tears rolling down her lush colored fur.Katherine gasped softly looking at Medli's coat and her shining black claws in awe,she could have not come from the vortex she was too perfect and very stunning,she must have been a returning Ahzenai."Excuse me miss?"she asked politely to Medli bending down to her eye level,"may I ask what is troubling you? I understand if you wish not to talk about it ,but i'm just guessing that something must have happen between your family.I may not know what had happen ,but it must have been painful for you." she said in a gentle voice hoping not have offended the crying Ahzenai."You have a wonderful coat miss and the markings on your fur are simply wonderful so are your curled horns.I don't see why you would return to here,you look like you have a good heart and i'm in awe of your wonderful colors.Your coat colors make you look strong,like the queen of a large kingdom." she continued with a small smile.Then she paused some trying to figure out what to say next.
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Katherine took out a small piece of purple silk from her back pocket and placed it in from of Medli,"Pretty girls like yourself shouldn't cry miss,wipe those tears away.Things will get better for you,your a beautiful Ahzenai and someone is bound to show up to your liking.Its only a matter of time before someone notices your beauty,I know I have noticed miss." Katherine smiled once more before she stood up fully."Oh,before I forgot here is a little present for you"she placed a silver dagger on the silk which as a ruby on the hilt and a white rose scrupled into the dagger."I hope you find your perfect match miss,also its been a honor to talk to such a beautiful Ahzenai such as yourself"she bows at the waist to Medli,her glasses nearly falling off her face.
Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
Usually I'm not a fan of like personality like Medli's ,but after reading her small introduction it moved me some.She reminds me of a friend I had who was the same way,sadly things went wrong and she is in a better place.I'm not here to put up a sob story so continuing,she is unlike most Ahzenai personality wise and I just felt the need to try out for her.

Using my carved dagger hurr :B
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Carora has chosen!

Postby Irios Atelis » Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:14 pm

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| xX-Nix-Xx |


| N I X |
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Nix is rather proud but despite this she is very kind
She is always getting Ruo out of trouble,
She isn't afraid to stand up for herself and can be fiesty.
|How Medli fits in |
Medli will be a good friend of Ruo and Nix,
There won't be much romance between Ruo and herself
as she finds him cute but not as a mate.
Nix has wanted a companion that will understand
the more complex things in life.
| R U O |
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Ruo is very clumbsy, often tripping over his own paws
He can be a little insecure and will become
aggressive if laughed at.























| W O O |
Nix stepped cautiously back into the place known as Ahzen, a few people turned their heads and a spark of recognition entered the eyes of some, looking away distastefully but Nix was just glad they didn't try to approach her.
Her caution was drawn from their last experience, one where she and Ruo were chased away because they Ahz knocked somone over,
"Ruo, come on! Valcyon won't let anyone get you and neither will I" She spoke exasperatedly to what seemed like a perfectly normal bush until a pink, yellow and blue head appeared from within the leaves.

Huffing Ruo pulled his head out, moving over to Nix with exaggerated caution as he looked around just to be sure no one was going to chase him, pulling a few twigs from her companions fur, Nix smiled,
"See, nothing" She chuckled as her only reply was another huff this time accompanied by a grumble.

As the pair began to make their way toward the vortex, Nix suddenly became aware that Ruo was no longer with her,
"What? Where did you go?" She asked no one in piticular, turning around as she instantly spotted the Ahz, who seemed to seemed mezmerized by something else, following his gaze she noticed a Ahzenai crouched by the


| F I T T I N G - I N |


Not to be included but keeping it here 'cus I don't really want to have to delete it :(
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Carora has chosen!

Postby Onyxeva » Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:01 pm

Hey guys, just a reminder but since Medli is being 'returned' to Ahzen, only those who do not already own an Ahz can apply. ;c
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Medli returns | Carora has chosen!

Postby Irios Atelis » Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:19 pm

Dang, Well there's an effort wasted :/

Nevermind! Goodluck to everyone else!
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Shop is open | Carora has chosen!

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:05 pm

Username:
*Blackberry*
Ahzenai you're applying for:
Medli
Short Woo:



That horrible day that Zeonasusaro chose Garon was the day Medli decided it was best that she left the two to enjoy their life together. Medli had always had a little crush on Garon, though she would never admit it. The next day Medli told Garon that she was leaving to pursue someone who was richer, and could offer her more than just adventure. Garon did not even try to stop her, but what could she say, she had always been cruel to Garon. He had never liked her.

Medli's paws soon began to ache and she stopped to rest on a log near the lake. Medli checked each of her claws to make sure they were not broken. Not a single one of her black claws had been damaged and she sighed in relief. Medli noticed her fur was knotted a bit and she tried desperately to comb it out with her horns. It didn't work. Garon wasn't here to groom her when she needed it.

The vain ahzenai looked at the ground with a longing sadness. She needed someone to be there with her. To groom her fur, and to love her beauty. Medli let loose a barrage of salty tears onto the ground below. She never should have teased Garon all those times. He might be here to groom her fur if she was kinder to him.

She looked at her tears on the ground, and couldn't help but cry some more. She wanted someone to worship her, and to keep her safe. Or atleast, think she was beautiful. Someone who would comb her fur and tell her that she was beautiful every day. Someone who would clean her horns, and make sure none of her gorgeous claws got damaged. Medli sat on that log and cried, waiting for someone to comfort her when she needed it most.


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I rolled my eyes as Serena talked, she can be a real chatterbox if she wanted to. I sighed and placed my fingers at my eyes and pretended to talk but not making any noise. Serena stopped and stared telling me about respect.. and blah blah blah. " Alright, I had enough. " I said, I took out my mirror and checked my hair to see if it was out of place. I rolled my eyes and suddenly she talked about Ahzenai, " Let's check out the Ahzenai and see if we can woo one. " I jumped in excitement and suddenly stopped, " But where? " She raised a paw and pointed towards a cave, " There. Look at this book. " She took it out from her bag and flipped to a page. " That's the map. " She closed it and placed it in her bag before she started walking towards the cave, I walked after her.

I mean seriously, I only walked for 10 minutes and I complained to Serena, " Can we stop? I have been walking for like hours! " Serena said her blue eyes glowing, " It has been only 10 minutes and if you want to woo a Ahzenai, you have to be quick enough.. So char on! " She lashed her tail gently, I sighed, knowing that her word " char on " was move on. I walked for an hour and half and finally we reached there.

Cooling air filled the cave, I breathed in the sweet air happily feeling my energy being charged up. Suddenly a light appeared at the Vortex, Serena spoke, " An Ahzenai is returning... " Her wise eyes turning to sorrow eyes. I looked at the Ahzenai and saw she had beautiful fur and wonderful fur, I stammered in surprise, " Se..re..na. " Serena said, " I think her name is Medli. Everyone here keeps saying that's her name. " I said, " She is so beautiful. I would do anything for her. " My eyes shone with happiness. I walked over with Serena, I took out a comb with jewels on it planning to comb my hair. But when I spotted a tangle part of fur on Medli, I combed it gently letting it become smooth and silky. I said, " My name is Blackberry." I pointed to Serena, " And this is Serena, we are looking for another companion so we can bring it with us to our home... " I paused, " if you are willing to come back with us.. I would pamper you, and do anything that would pleases you as long.. " " As long it comes out from my heart. Do you want to be my friend Medli? " I stopped, I whispered softly, "You are very beautiful Medli, me and Serena would gladly welcome you into our group. " I took out a necklace lined with every kind of jewel. I placed it at her paw and said, " Take this. If you won't want to come with me.. " I paused and choked out my words tears in my eyes, " Please take this, as to remember me. "


Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
Well, I don't have one and she seems to suit me as I am quite vain too. Her fur colors are so beautiful and magnificent. Red is one of my favorite colors and the gold markings are so wonderful plus beautiful. Her eye color which is pink is my favourite color it is the truth.^^I love all her markings, and the thing behind her back makes her look cool.She seems graceful,gentle and very kind to me. It was love at first sight when I saw her,I love all her markings and her personality. She seems to stand out from all the Ahzenai I tried to get.
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