The SCAA - Officially Closed!

[Chirai]

I want some critique!
Username: Teardrops in Time
Link to your form: Both, or just one, thanks! They are above ^^;
Who do you want to critique you {Any judge; for example, Pix, Wesley, Ocean, etc.}: AAnyone is appreciated!
How harsh do you want us to be {Soft, Honest, Brutally Honest}:Brutally Honest, go ahead and yell at me for missing some grammar.
Other: :3 thanks!
Banana Cream Pie

[Mozzy.]

I want some critique!
Username: Bubbles.
Link to your form: Click!
Who do you want to critique you {Any judge; for example, Pix, Wesley, Ocean, etc.}: Anyone c:
How harsh do you want us to be {Soft, Honest, Brutally Honest}: Brutal
Other: Thankyou!
Banana Cream Pie

[the d]

Hola!
I'm just posting to let you guys know I changed my username c:
I was formerly Cerulean.

[Wesley]

Breezy. :'D
Okie, I'll soon update that username change on the front page. Revamps and adoptions galore for some of our older kennels, as well as some nice donations. Thank you so much guys. I'm glad this place is picking back up. C:

[Boo.]

WORK IN PROGRESS

Username:
Boo.
Kennel Number:
Sixty Seven||67
Name [of pet]:
Mirror
Gender [of pet]:
Male||Boy||Brute||Baron
Breed/Species [of pet]:
Dog
Personality [of pet]:
Background/History [of pet]:
Use [for pet]:
Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:
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[Darkest.Nation]

Everyone with Banana Cream Pie codeword has been critted. (:

[Jericho]

Everyone with Banana Cream Pie codeword has been critted. (:

Thank you again Fly.With.Me!

Could I do revamps for any characters? I've re opened my Art shop and wanted to get some more practice but I don't know what to draw... If I can just tell me which ones!

[Pengu.]

Username:

penguinluv01

Kennel Number:

#49

Name [of pet]:

Trudel

Gender [of pet]:

Female

Breed/Species [of pet]:

Dog-Specifically a Czechloslovachian Wolfdog x Black Labrador

Personality [of pet]:

Some people have two faces. Trudel has a face for the outside world, and… she lost the other one somewhere. She’s simple. She even admits it. She sleeps through class and slacks off, and she’ll stuff her face at someone else’s house unabashedly because she doesn’t always think things through. However, there is a sort of idiot savant to her logic, at times; it is this simplicity that leads Trudel to accept her friends no matter who or what they are, because they’re her friends.

That simplicity is not to be underestimated, however. With the proper triggers, it gives way into pure, raw determination. Trudel is unstoppable when she wants to do something, and do it right. When given the ultimatum between saving one person or saving the world, she declared that he would find a way to save both. She is not dissuaded by physical or mental obstacles.

Trudel does have some naïve tendencies. She likes to believe in things as they’re presented to her, so she doesn’t always look past appearances unless she’s given a reason. That said, she has an uncanny ability to read people she knows, which frustrates more mysterious characters. Her straightforward, upbeat manner draws people into her company and also makes it easier for her to forgive people for major things like betraying her. Trudel’s terrible at holding grudges mainly because she can see the other person’s point of view, something that came to her with time and experience.

Considering her original opposition to heroic sacrifice of any sort, she’s obviously capable of some regression, and being a hypocrite is a major part of her character; she values honesty yet has no problem lying or picking locks to get her way.

Background/History [of pet]:

At first, Trudel seemed to have the perfect family. Her father was a wild wolfdog, her mother a full blooded and caring black lab. She was from a litter of four, three boys and her the only girl, born on February 13, 2008. Her brothers {Dute, Colad, and Vixit} all seemed to be healthy, active, eager, and loving. Trudel on the other hand, was rebellious and devious. She hated her mother's owner, a human who tried to tame her. Trudel resisted, probably the wild blood of her father showing up in her. At the age of seven months, after repeatedly being scolded and beaten for her behavior, Trudel decided to finally seek freedom. She attacked her human, fled, and went in search of her father. Her family was so distraut, her brothers searched for her, but soon met their deaths due to the wild animals lurking in the forest.

Ever since her family members' death, Trudel has been living deep within the forest. She searched for her father for many years, gaining knowledge and earning her hard but caring personality. At the age of three years, Trudel finally found her father Mokai. Now, Mokai wasn't a normal dog - he was born into the Pack of wawrriors. The wolves in this pack were warriors and fought for their lives. Some say they were sent from Hell, as they can be malicious and merciless, and others say they were a gift from Heaven. They left the pack and their heritage behind, and eventually stripped off their armor. Trudel found the heritage she had so desperately been searching for, and the family she yearned for. Wild wolfdogs, ones worthy of her company.

Use [for pet]:

As a beloved character, to order some art and perfect my own artistic abilities by doing art of her.

Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:

Lineart made for me by Bubbles. Hope it is okay to use.
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Likes: Reading, Studying, Swimming, Playing Poker, Hanging out with close friends, Peaches, Anchovies, Video Games.
Dislikes: The Dark, Spiders, Lava, Bright Colors, Collars, Humans, War.
Age: Four Human Years
Mario Kart
Secretly hope I did this right....if not, ignore my ignorance..

[Toxi+Bbun]

Username:Bbun
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Kennel Number:18
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Name [of pet]:Cocaura Godiva
(a chocolate luxury filled with the colour of a stunning brand)
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Gender [of pet]:Female
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Breed/Species [of pet]:Flemish Giant(a very big breed, its got giant in its name, right?)

Personality [of pet]:

"I'm told to be secretive, since I'm not too much like a chattering parakeet. I can be rushed at momments, since I always want everything to be done in the second. Not many even bother to say a "hello", due to disguise. Disguise is key to living in this harsh condition. Harsh condition of traitors and theives, quickfoots to be exact. I'm not to be toyed with, since I have some foot power, so better watch out! I literally am the smart cookie, since I've taught with lectures since I was a young bunny.

However, discovering those litter critters under that patch of grass or near a nightshade bush is what makes me happy. Comfortable, sweet, kind. I can be considered,"Friend of Nature", but I'm not one of those fairytail hares who have large creature running towards her. No, I actually help animals like insects and baby field mice collect food, and guide them home, since I've been around the parts a lot. Quite a lot."

To sum in down, she's a older rabbit who is secretive, but under that hard shell is a layer of a kindness, but she's not one to be fought with, since she's been in hard times since she was young. If you pesturb her the smallest bit, she will go in rage, but she almost never says that.
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Background/History [of pet]:
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Use [for pet]:
A charrie, of course, where she'll stand with Zekalia in a little thing I might make called Eros(very random). She will still have a mate, possibly, but it might be different.

Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:
Mario Kart

WIP . I've been waiting for a chance to get her, and now its the time!

[maetropa]

All narcissists have specific identifiable personality characteristics but each one is an individual.

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A Femme fatale is defined as a woman who uses seduction and charm to tempt men into compromising and sometimes dangerous situations.

Username:
NotMe

A femme fatale tries to achieve her hidden purpose by using feminine wiles such as beauty and charm.

Kennel Number:
18

She may also be (or imply to be) a victim, caught in a situation from which she cannot escape.

Name [of pet]:
Cacao Dea
(Chocolate Goddess in Latin, related to the name Cocaura Godiva.)

In social life, a more malevolent femme fatale tends to torture her lover in an asymmetrical relationship, denying confirmation of her affection.

Gender [of pet]:
Female

She usually drives her victim to the point of obsession and exhaustion, so that he is incapable of making rational decisions.

Breed/Species [of pet]:
Mixed Bunny Rabbit

The femme fatale archetype exists in the culture, folklore and myth of many cultures.

Personality [of pet]:

Dea, the sweet looking dear, is far from her appearance. For one, she is manipulative to the core, as well as exploitative, self-absorbed and incapable of genuine empathy. If you saw her true personality, you would call her a monster, or a 'Femme Fatale', which literally translates to 'fatal woman,'.

Dea is covert, though. She appears to be friendly, considerate and innocuous, but if you are diligent you will see through her act.

She is an archetype of literature and art.

Background/History [of pet]:
Dea's history is rather ambigous. She was born in a litter of many, never really became attached to any of them or her mother. She was brought and adopted out to a small child, before escaping. Then she was taken in to a rescue center, and adopted out by an older girl.

Her ability to entrance and hypnotize her victim with a spell was in the earliest stories seen as being literally supernatural; hence, the femme fatale today is still often described as having a power akin to an enchantress, seductress, vampire, witch, or demon.

Use [for pet]:
Dea would most probably be drawn for the most part, but I would roleplay her if I found a roleplay that suited her. She'll probably have little writing, but have her displayed through art, showing her history and future as I come up with them as well as any relationships.

Although typically villainous, if not morally ambiguous, femmes fatales have also appeared as antiheroines in some stories, and some even repent and become true heroines by the end of the tale.

Other [Art, Likes, Dislikes, Mate, Age, Appearance, etc.]:

Some stories feature benevolent and heroic femmes fatales who use their wiles to snare the villain for the greater good.

Mario Kart