Tough as Nails Adoption (Closed for renovations!)

[birdie,]

Can I get som Crtique (SP?) On my form...It's on Pg. 193...

[Ebonpyre]

No offense, but I think chat/asking for critique is supposed to belong strictly in the fanclub, if I recall correctly

[Shiko Hayashi]

(( it wouldn't exactly be fair for the others. ))

[wibeke]

(( it wouldn't exactly be fair for the others. ))

We've done it a lot in the past. People like hearing other's opinions and I don't see it as unfair.. (it rarely gets beyond "that's epic!" though)
Can't think of a story at all right now. Ugh...

[Atwood]

Thanks, Azora. ^^ klepore and wolves12, all chatting goes in the Fan Club, not here, as does character discussion and form discussion/critiquing.

[Lady Masquerade]

((ok, very sorry Atwood to dissapoint you))

[~Butterfly Bones~]

SpotTheTerrier said id be abel to adopt one of here smilils here can i post an order for 2 but also i don't see them up there yet

Yeah they're not up yet because this round is not over. You'll have to wait. As she said on her thread.

ok thanks

[Dogs Can Bark]

I shall post a form sometime today, or the next day. Or a day following one of those. I am determined to find a pet that peaks my interest.

[xXCherryleafXx]

I would like to adopt!
Number: 1
Picture:
Name:Sapphiremoon but likes just Moon or Sapphire
Species: Feline
Personality: she is sweet and loving, she can have a sharp toung at times, and somtimes she gets really angry
Likes: tacos, cheese, nice people, friends, horses, and other cat friends.
Dislikes: and green vegetable, mean guys, people telling her what to do
Background (Optional, but it gives you a better shot):when she was young her mother died and she was left in an ally.She soon found a group of ally cats,and they took her in.One of their femalees feed her and pretended that she was her own.Soon she became one of the allly cats warriors, that gets food and finds things for them and fights.One time she went out to an oold abandoned shack, she didn't notice the large doberman pincer waiting in the corner, and it got her. The dog gave her a scar on her muzzle. When she returned to the home of the ally cats no one was there.She wandered through the streets alone, for 1 whole year surviving on tiny mice an rats.But she will never forget the night when she had to fight of 10 rats.

The night of the rat attack

Moon was walking throught a sewer, it was a foul smelling sewer where all the humans dumped their toxic waste. She saw a small mouse "that woud be good"she whispered to herself. She droped into a hunters crouch, her muscles bunching up. She lept and when she landed on it she killed it with a quick bite to the neck.She picked it up and continued walking, when she was about halfway through the tunnel, she noticed two rats following her,"who are you" she asked kindly."we are the sewer rats.....we want food...."they hissed in a evil voice. Moon heard them "i caught this for myself not for anyone else" she said coldly as she turned around to face them."it will be our foood......not yours..... you will die tonight"the rats hissed again.As soon as they said that eight more rats poppd out of the sewege "haha... now you will die"one of them said, their red eyes glowing with pure bitter hatred. Moon stood her ground, even though she was trembling she stood tall "i will kill you all first"she hissed."attack"one of the rats hissed as it leaped on Moon's back, its teeth breaking Moon's fur.. Moon yowled in pain as the mob of rats jumped on her she hissed and swiped to rats out of the way "that will show you"she hissed. The lead rat jumped on her head an bite down on her ear.Moon swiped her paw up at the rat, it jumped and Moon missed but just barely grazing its face.Moon shook and two rats fell off. Soon the rats noticed that Moon was tireing, she couldnt fight hard anymore, Moon fell backwards, she crushed the remaining rats. They all ran off cursing her "now stay away" she said dayzed, Moon picked up her small and pitiful mouse and walked back to the box that she called "home". When she arrived she ate the mouse quickly, and fell asleep.
(if i need to add more just tell me XD, i really want to win XD)

[Oni-chan]

DONATION!
Picture:
Name: Lollypop << You can change the name...
Species: Bunny Rabbit
Link to lineart: Here.
Any extra conditions?: Not really, other than I don't want you to remove the credit.