I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:Bbun
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&p=20847322&hilit=3+Trick+treat#p20847322
Adoption Agency you are applying for:Symphony
Deadline for your form: Finished, and December 22nd is when it will judged.
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Toxi+Bbun » Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:55 am
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by byyrde » Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:57 am
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
Festus(CH)
Link to your form:
Aaron's Form
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Symphony Character Adoption Agency (SCAA)
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due)
Tomorrow, December 22, 2011
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Please PM me with it :3
Username:
Festus(CH)
Link to your form:
Aaron's Form
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Symphony Character Adoption Agency (SCAA)
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due)
Tomorrow, December 22, 2011
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Please PM me with it :3
Last edited by byyrde on Fri Jan 27, 2012 11:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Jericho » Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:03 pm
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Foxtrot55
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&start=4310#p23642930
Adoption Agency you are applying for:SCAA
Deadline for your form: Tomorrow, need this critique FAST!!!
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please!!
Username: Foxtrot55
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&start=4310#p23642930
Adoption Agency you are applying for:SCAA
Deadline for your form: Tomorrow, need this critique FAST!!!
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please!!
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Jericho » Sat Jan 28, 2012 2:41 pm
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Foxtrot55
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&start=4880#p26667420 <---- both forms in this post if someone has time, or you can just do one!!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: SCAA
Deadline for your form: I need this Critique ASAP but I have no idea what the end date is...in around two weeks I think.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM or here, I honestly just care about the critique!
Thanks!
Username: Foxtrot55
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&start=4880#p26667420 <---- both forms in this post if someone has time, or you can just do one!!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: SCAA
Deadline for your form: I need this Critique ASAP but I have no idea what the end date is...in around two weeks I think.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM or here, I honestly just care about the critique!
Thanks!
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Medusa72 » Sat Jan 28, 2012 2:56 pm
I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: krl5
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1003888
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc)... Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Feedback.
Thank you!
Username: krl5
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1003888
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc)... Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Feedback.
Thank you!
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by TigressJaguiar » Sat Jan 28, 2012 3:32 pm
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
TigressJaguiar
Link to your form:
click
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Bright is Better (BIB)
Deadline for your form:
The judging occurs on the 30th of this month.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM Please
Username:
TigressJaguiar
Link to your form:
click
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Bright is Better (BIB)
Deadline for your form:
The judging occurs on the 30th of this month.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM Please
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Jericho » Sat Jan 28, 2012 3:37 pm
krl5 wrote:I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: krl5
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1003888
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc)... Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Feedback.
Thank you!
I sent you a critique!
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Medusa72 » Sat Jan 28, 2012 4:31 pm
Foxtrot55 wrote:krl5 wrote:I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: krl5
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1003888
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc)... Novel
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Feedback.
Thank you!
I sent you a critique!
Thank you sooo much Foxtrot!!!
i will not sit down
i will not shut up
rivers and roads, rivers and roads
rivers till i reach you
did you ever make it out of that town
i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened
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Love on the Merrium / The Arrangement / Poetry.
Love on the Merrium / The Arrangement / Poetry.
rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster
rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Lady Masquerade » Sat Jan 28, 2012 4:34 pm
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Lady Masquerade
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=26635674&hilit=Dapple#p26635674
Adoption Agency you are applying for: A Goennec {June Bug's species}
Deadline for your form: Two days, On Sunday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine
I warn you, the form isn't finished. I just want to know how it is so far.
Username: Lady Masquerade
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=118117&p=26635674&hilit=Dapple#p26635674
Adoption Agency you are applying for: A Goennec {June Bug's species}
Deadline for your form: Two days, On Sunday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine
I warn you, the form isn't finished. I just want to know how it is so far.
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