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Re: Artist Army

Postby Grace(: » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:06 am

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Could someone redline?
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Re: Artist Army

Postby rheia » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:06 am

I Was hoping one of you guys could give me some Crit. |D

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And, do you think someone could redline this? It looks out of proportion.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Allizia » Sun Jan 15, 2012 4:43 am

@susiron Oh wow that looks sweet! Definetrely not somthing Ive seen before. looks pretty proportional to me, but then again im not one for knowing too much about mistakes whnthey are somewhat small x3

Imma hav a non chibi (hopefully) piece to show later, after I get hom from work.xD
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Re: Artist Army

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Re: Artist Army

Postby orange.c y r u s♥ » Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:12 am

    crits: courage- try to cover the white backround and maybe make the loines smoother, that'll give awsome realistic effects o3o


    anyway, I am looking for some crits or redlines for this pharaoh hound. I want to know where I made the mistakes in anatomy, pharaoh hound wise. http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/ ... 4lzb43.png
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Re: Artist Army

Postby starlord. » Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:20 am

@Susiron I love your design! It's extremely unique and well exicuted(Excuse fail spelling please.) I love the bone parts.

@Spotty That's adorable. I love the design and pose.

@Zeb I love your basic idea. I can't help you though, I'm not that familiar with wolves/dogs.

@Courage I love the first one. The detail is amazing. All I can say is that in the second one, the horse looks like he/she's kicking their head. O.o I can't redline, since I'm horrible at horses. You have potential!

@Orange.c y r u s I love the design. The head seems a little short, and I think this picture might help. Picture.

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Re: Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:38 am

Nebulas wrote:@Susiron I love your design! It's extremely unique and well exicuted(Excuse fail spelling please.) I love the bone parts.

@Spotty That's adorable. I love the design and pose.

@Zeb I love your basic idea. I can't help you though, I'm not that familiar with wolves/dogs.

@Courage I love the first one. The detail is amazing. All I can say is that in the second one, the horse looks like he/she's kicking their head. O.o I can't redline, since I'm horrible at horses. You have potential!

@Orange.c y r u s I love the design. The head seems a little short, and I think this picture might help. Picture.

Hey guys, I need some help with doing linearts. I end up drawing the sketch, but then the lineart never turns out correct. Any help?

What do you mean by "correct?"
If you mean it's not smooth, try zooming in to about 150-200%.

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Re: Artist Army

Postby rheia » Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:41 am

Nebulas wrote:@Susiron I love your design! It's extremely unique and well exicuted(Excuse fail spelling please.) I love the bone parts.

@Spotty That's adorable. I love the design and pose.

@Zeb I love your basic idea. I can't help you though, I'm not that familiar with wolves/dogs.

@Courage I love the first one. The detail is amazing. All I can say is that in the second one, the horse looks like he/she's kicking their head. O.o I can't redline, since I'm horrible at horses. You have potential!

@Orange.c y r u s I love the design. The head seems a little short, and I think this picture might help. Picture.

Hey guys, I need some help with doing linearts. I end up drawing the sketch, but then the lineart never turns out correct. Any help?

The second was done before the first, so naturally it's pretty bad. I'll try and fix that, though. C:
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Re: Artist Army

Postby .Nobody. » Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:42 am

Decided to finish the sketch I left sitting in Paint.net with or without art block but I hate her expression in this she was supposed to look happy but since she didn't I just made a sort of depressing looking backround to match her expression here it is..any comment? I need help on my wolf anatomy too, but mostly with the legs and paws and perhaps body shape
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Re: Artist Army

Postby starlord. » Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:43 am

Marquee Moony wrote:
Nebulas wrote:@Susiron I love your design! It's extremely unique and well exicuted(Excuse fail spelling please.) I love the bone parts.

@Spotty That's adorable. I love the design and pose.

@Zeb I love your basic idea. I can't help you though, I'm not that familiar with wolves/dogs.

@Courage I love the first one. The detail is amazing. All I can say is that in the second one, the horse looks like he/she's kicking their head. O.o I can't redline, since I'm horrible at horses. You have potential!

@Orange.c y r u s I love the design. The head seems a little short, and I think this picture might help. Picture.

Hey guys, I need some help with doing linearts. I end up drawing the sketch, but then the lineart never turns out correct. Any help?

What do you mean by "correct?"
If you mean it's not smooth, try zooming in to about 150-200%.

Aww my SAI trial is almost done... is it worth buying the full version? ouo


It'll be smooth, but I have trouble making it fit to the sketch. The sketch will be just how I like it, but when I try to go over it with the lines, and it just doesn't look like. I just need some tips that others use to draw their lines.
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