Artist Army {old thread}

[Spotty]

soo I made this creature
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/ ... 4ki666.jpg
and he's supposed to be a mega powerful being, based off a quasar, I was wondering, does anyone have any suggestions or tips as to what I can add or remove? I feel he is too cluttered in a way ;u;

Since I'm one of these "less is more" people, I have to agree that it feels quite cluttered^^'. The basic idea is really creative though, and I love the over-all body structure with the chinky chest and strong legs which makes it look very powerful and strong. The slim face makes it look fox-like, cunning yet mild, and I love it together with the body. I wish I would be able to read all those little notes around it, because that would probably make commenting a lot easier, but they are all too tiny to read. Either way, I'm personally not a fan of designs that are floating around the body unattached or with just little connection to the body, I think I see some floating objects in there and it's one of the things that can really clutter up a design. I think that the spikes on the lower back is looking slightly disconnected from the rest of the design, perhaps add some more spikes close to them or remove them? I like the antler like things on it's head, and the beam from it's mouth is really neat.

I drew this for myself, the larger animal is supposed to be a wolf-cat hybrid; does anyone have any pointers on how to make him look... how you say, more flow-y physically, if possible? (Without altering his design)

Aw, it's so adorable, the poses and expressions are just lovely! I'm not sure how you mean with flow-y, but I think that if the tail was less thin near the base it would continue the body a bit longer and making it feel a little smoother. I think that the shoulder to elbow part of the front leg looks a bit long which also might blunt of the body a bit, perhaps try to rise the lower arms up a bit, closer to the chest^^.

[pastel1]

Katara@ the legs dont look like they have bones eue

Kess@ personally when i saw itt i screamed with joy but that was probably just me XD

sorry i cant help anymore but i have alot to do and so little time to do it, https://join.me/569-566-638

[Meredith's Whiskers]

I'm so happy to have PS back so I finally made the ref for my new horses character Vanity.
Kessler~It does look a little cluttered I dunno what you could take off though^^*Is no help*

[Spotty]

<3Aren<3, nice horse and nice use of colours^^. I'm not really the best with hoses but I think that the front half of the horse is too large, and the front legs are little short. The pose would probably look more comfortable for the horse if the hind hooves were placed a little further under the belly instead of behind it. Other than that it's beautiful and you did great^^. Congratulations on getting your PS back too^^.

[Kessler]

soo I made this creature
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/ ... 4ki666.jpg
and he's supposed to be a mega powerful being, based off a quasar, I was wondering, does anyone have any suggestions or tips as to what I can add or remove? I feel he is too cluttered in a way ;u;

Since I'm one of these "less is more" people, I have to agree that it feels quite cluttered^^'. The basic idea is really creative though, and I love the over-all body structure with the chinky chest and strong legs which makes it look very powerful and strong. The slim face makes it look fox-like, cunning yet mild, and I love it together with the body. I wish I would be able to read all those little notes around it, because that would probably make commenting a lot easier, but they are all too tiny to read. Either way, I'm personally not a fan of designs that are floating around the body unattached or with just little connection to the body, I think I see some floating objects in there and it's one of the things that can really clutter up a design. I think that the spikes on the lower back is looking slightly disconnected from the rest of the design, perhaps add some more spikes close to them or remove them? I like the antler like things on it's head, and the beam from it's mouth is really neat.

I drew this for myself, the larger animal is supposed to be a wolf-cat hybrid; does anyone have any pointers on how to make him look... how you say, more flow-y physically, if possible? (Without altering his design)

Aw, it's so adorable, the poses and expressions are just lovely! I'm not sure how you mean with flow-y, but I think that if the tail was less thin near the base it would continue the body a bit longer and making it feel a little smoother. I think that the shoulder to elbow part of the front leg looks a bit long which also might blunt of the body a bit, perhaps try to rise the lower arms up a bit, closer to the chest^^.

I have a HUGE full version if needed, it's 4000x4000 so beware XD
http://www.deviantart.com/download/2763 ... 4ki666.jpg
and yes I see what you are saying, I overkilled on a lot of the floating objects, but yes they are supposed to be floating around him...but there is a bit much o.e
@jthm thank you for the opinion but this was just a sketch forgot to mention X3
@Pastel fff-<3 thank you^^
working on a smaller, neater version ^^

[orange.c y r u s♥]

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/ ... 4lf908.png
anthro of my fursona. My first anthro art of her and I am proud of it, so much that I need some crits, preferable redlines, on how I can improve (becuase I know somethings are off).

sorry i cannot crit right now^^"

[katanatildawn]

thank you spotty, pastel~! Ill try and apply that~! :B

[Atomic Blue]

It's 1:13 AM or something and I'm drawing but my head kind hurts.

click I didn't resize it the initial sketch is gigantic but tinypic probably pulled something magical so yea

This is Mirielle. I care little about how cliche she is. She's an assassin type of chick and she likes to use rapiers cause they're cool, seriously. She hates ugly people and wears her hair up cause she doesn't like getting blood it. her chest is non existent and she wears a mask because I suck at art and I get an A++ in the lazy department.

she only looks eternally pissed because she is.
She doesn't have any clothes yet because I'm about as creative as a pebble in the middle of nowhere.
has a strong will to live. very sleep deprived.

I will whip out some crits/redlines tomorrow hopefully when I can actually think.
Good night everybody.

[Cherry~Chess]

Wow, I never knew this existed, It will come in handy for future reference C:
I have a piece I'd like some comment and critique on, just to see how its....working out so far C:
http://www.iaza.com/work/120107C/iaza18261743498000.jpg

Thanks guys <33

[Calix]

I was wondering if someone could critique this?
viewtopic.php?f=30&t=977051
Thank you ^^