Artist Army {old thread}

[Stonefly]

I'm sorry about mine before. I will now try to comment and critique much more >.<

-Stonefly- That's beautiful. I love how you did the clothing and scenery. I only saw one major fault, the legs. They look like they're sticks almost, there is no bend in them. It's quite hard to walk with straight legs. Perhaps just a small crease line on the back of the pant legs?

-Susiron- I love how you did the shading and light source! The feathers are distinguished perfectly. I only see that at the back of the feet, the two toes seem to merge, though they are on different feet, and the end of the robin's tail feathers seem a bit blurry.

Yes, I have been looking at that for a while..and ok I will fix it now thanks

[starlord.]

I'm sorry about mine before. I will now try to comment and critique much more >.<

-Stonefly- That's beautiful. I love how you did the clothing and scenery. I only saw one major fault, the legs. They look like they're sticks almost, there is no bend in them. It's quite hard to walk with straight legs. Perhaps just a small crease line on the back of the pant legs?

-Susiron- I love how you did the shading and light source! The feathers are distinguished perfectly. I only see that at the back of the feet, the two toes seem to merge, though they are on different feet, and the end of the robin's tail feathers seem a bit blurry.

Yes, I have been looking at that for a while..and ok I will fix it now thanks

Welcome!

[Meredith's Whiskers]

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I don't see anything that really needs crit right now...

[Duh]

The finished result of my livestream:
Too lazy to upload it to photobucket as well, so you get a link to it on dA!

Now to comment on whats been posted the past few pages. ono

@Marmoset - I do have to agree that the legs are too skinny for a koala and are at a somewhat awkward angle. The face is adorable, though, and I love the way you did the background.

@A.K.A Raptor - I can't really explain this very well, I wish I hadn't unplugged my tablet already. I'll try though. First of all, the body is... too tall? See, I can't explain e.e And with the tail, it would be between the backlegs, it looks as though you were trying to put it in front of the back leg closest to us. Also, your backlegs and paws are off, here is a good tutorial for that. You've improved since last time you posted a drawing on here, though! Looking good. c:

[Aura]

I don't see anybody streaming... <3Aren<3's has ended I believe.
So if you want to watch... I'm mostly colouring/shading a human.
https://join.me/696-099-352
FINISHED. >w<

[brian emo]

I don't see anybody streaming... <3Aren<3's has ended I believe.
So if you want to watch... I'm mostly colouring/shading a human.
https://join.me/696-099-352

ouo I'd love to watch but I can't stay on for long~

[Aura]

I don't see anybody streaming... <3Aren<3's has ended I believe.
So if you want to watch... I'm mostly colouring/shading a human.
https://join.me/696-099-352

Prematurely finished. I'll upload my art to show you what I was working on later. :3

[Notichimtoki]

The finished result of my livestream:
Too lazy to upload it to photobucket as well, so you get a link to it on dA!

Now to comment on whats been posted the past few pages. ono

@Marmoset - I do have to agree that the legs are too skinny for a koala and are at a somewhat awkward angle. The face is adorable, though, and I love the way you did the background.

@A.K.A Raptor - I can't really explain this very well, I wish I hadn't unplugged my tablet already. I'll try though. First of all, the body is... too tall? See, I can't explain e.e And with the tail, it would be between the backlegs, it looks as though you were trying to put it in front of the back leg closest to us. Also, your backlegs and paws are off, here is a good tutorial for that. You've improved since last time you posted a drawing on here, though! Looking good. c:

GAHH I LOVE LOVE LOVE the shading on that!! It's gorgeous!!

[CuppycakeArousal]

I just got a Bamboo Wacom a week ago and I need help with it. Gah, I'm planning on watching the videos added on to the set, but I need some few good tips.

[Saikiyo]

made sure no one else was streaming ^^


come watch me make this dragon......thing.....for a contest ^^



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