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Re: Artist Army

Postby calicotabbycat » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:03 pm

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Re: Artist Army

Postby iPawki » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:05 pm

@snow911; Those all seem really interesting, but I agree with MoonStar: it really depends which story you'd be more comfortable with. :3

Well, I'm drawing something for a contest and I somewhat sketched out the pose, but I know the anatomy's probably faulty... I was wondering if anyone could help me out? It's a wolf, by the way~
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Yuki. » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:10 pm

iPawki wrote:
@snow911; Those all seem really interesting, but I agree with MoonStar: it really depends which story you'd be more comfortable with. :3

Well, I'm drawing something for a contest and I somewhat sketched out the pose, but I know the anatomy's probably faulty... I was wondering if anyone could help me out? It's a wolf, by the way~

Thats beautiful! Though, the only thing I can say in my position is the body should be a tad longer. Id get some other critic because im not that good at wolves
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:15 pm

iPawki wrote:
@snow911; Those all seem really interesting, but I agree with MoonStar: it really depends which story you'd be more comfortable with. :3

Well, I'm drawing something for a contest and I somewhat sketched out the pose, but I know the anatomy's probably faulty... I was wondering if anyone could help me out? It's a wolf, by the way~


I love how flowy it is. :3
A few things I see, though:
The neck is way too short, and the face a little too long. The legs are also too long and the joints are a bit high up.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby calicotabbycat » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:18 pm

Yeah, I think the body should be a bit longer. Of course, I'm no expert either. I study anatomy a lot and I still have a loooooong way to go. Other than that, it looks really great.

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Re: Artist Army

Postby azalea » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:22 pm

Also the tail should be shorter and thicker. Wolf tails are typically only long enough to reach the back heel c:
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Re: Artist Army

Postby iPawki » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:30 pm

Ah, thank you guys <3 Is this better?
Also, about the tail: I'm pretty sure that's how the character is, but I'll try to make it shorter :3
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Susiron » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:38 pm

iPawki wrote:
Ah, thank you guys <3 Is this better?
Also, about the tail: I'm pretty sure that's how the character is, but I'll try to make it shorter :3


Yes, much better! : D

And don't worry about critiques on tail length, honestly.
Yes, wolves do have shorter tails realistically, but tails tend to fall into the line of personal preference online.
No one's going to go critique Ninetails, telling Nintendo their fox's tails were a bit too long.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby iPawki » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:43 pm

Haha, thank you xD I'm not all that great with wolf anatomy, so I appreciate the help~
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Kirimi » Tue Dec 20, 2011 7:34 pm

Does anyone know a good, easy pose yet interesting for a snow leopard? :3 And how would the face look like, at different perspectives? Like front, side, half front/side? :3 Help is appreciated!
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