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by iPawki » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:05 pm
@snow911; Those all seem really interesting, but I agree with MoonStar: it really depends which story you'd be more comfortable with. :3
Well, I'm drawing something for a contest and I somewhat sketched out the pose, but I know the anatomy's probably faulty... I was wondering if anyone could help me out? It's a wolf, by the way~
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by Yuki. » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:10 pm
iPawki wrote:@snow911; Those all seem really interesting, but I agree with MoonStar: it really depends which story you'd be more comfortable with. :3
Well, I'm drawing something for a contest and I somewhat sketched out the pose, but I know the anatomy's probably faulty... I was wondering if anyone could help me out? It's a wolf, by the way~
Thats beautiful! Though, the only thing I can say in my position is the body should be a tad longer. Id get some other critic because im not that good at wolves
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by Susiron » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:15 pm
iPawki wrote:@snow911; Those all seem really interesting, but I agree with MoonStar: it really depends which story you'd be more comfortable with. :3
Well, I'm drawing something for a contest and I somewhat sketched out the pose, but I know the anatomy's probably faulty... I was wondering if anyone could help me out? It's a wolf, by the way~
I love how flowy it is. :3
A few things I see, though:
The neck is way too short, and the face a little too long. The legs are also too long and the joints are a bit high up.
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by Susiron » Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:38 pm
iPawki wrote:Ah, thank you guys <3 Is this better?
Also, about the tail: I'm pretty sure that's how the character is, but I'll try to make it shorter :3
Yes, much better! : D
And don't worry about critiques on tail length, honestly.
Yes, wolves do have shorter tails realistically, but tails tend to fall into the line of personal preference online.
No one's going to go critique Ninetails, telling Nintendo their fox's tails were a bit too long.
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