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by TigressJaguiar » Sat Oct 29, 2011 11:14 am
I would like some critique on my form please!Username: TigressJaguiar
Link to your form: ClickAdoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: Thurs., Nov 3 at 9PM EST.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?: Eather way is fine
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by Sketchi-Kitty » Sat Oct 29, 2011 12:05 pm
KittenPaws-101 wrote:KittenPaws-101 wrote:I would like some critique on my form please!Username: KittenPaws-101
Link to your form: My form is here.Adoption Agency you are applying for: Silver Lining Adoption Place (S.L.A.P.)
Deadline for your form: I don't know when it's due, S.L.A.P. doesn't give out code drop dates. I want to get it done as soon as I can, though.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.
The drop is tonight, please, anyone who sees this, PM me some critique.
Woukd love some last minute crit, I only got 1 crit so far.
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by Helreith Brynhildar » Sat Oct 29, 2011 12:17 pm
I would like some critique on my poem please!
Username: River's Alter Ego
Link to what needs critiquing: Um. I have no link. I just started on CS; I can post here if you want?
What is it: Short poem
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM. I'm afraid I'd lose this page.
The poem is as follows:
Her flesh was snow-cold;
Supine;
Splayed against her backdrop.
Frozen tears on icy skin.
Anything I mess up, please please tell me!
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by Wesley » Fri Dec 09, 2011 12:42 pm
I would like some critique on my form please!Username: wesleydog
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=21239085&hilit=personality#p21239085
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: No code drop day given, but I would love it ASAP. <3
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM
I'd really like to bring this place back to life, but starting with asking for some help. xD
Wesleyshe/they genderqueer demisexual lesbian
ART FIGHT ||
FLIGHT RISINGHello, my name is Wesley & I have a Juris Doctor!
I collect crystals/minerals, Build a Bears, & stickers.
I am also interested in dinosaurs, Glass Animals, Animal Crossing, Pokemon,
various anime shows, magic, and writing/character collecting!
My birthday is August 8th!
I'm a non-theistic eclectic witch. ♥

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