The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Sketchi-Kitty]

Thank you very much! <3

[TigressJaguiar]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: TigressJaguiar
Link to your form: Click
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: Thurs., Nov 3 at 9PM EST.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?: Eather way is fine

[eternalglitch]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Wolves Run free
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=58&t=788955&p=21263617#p21263617
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tracker Dogs V3.0
Deadline for your form: It's due October 31, but I would love it in about three days or less so I can type and edit <3
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

I have about one more day. I would love some critique.

[Desmond]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: -3B-
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=788955&p=21282107#p21282107
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tracker Dog
Deadline for your form: I'd prefer to get input back by 9PM Oct 30.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM.

I ask that others going for Tracker 77 not critique my form. In return for crit, I will critique one of your forms, as long as I am not going for the same character.

[Sketchi-Kitty]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: KittenPaws-101
Link to your form: My form is here.
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Silver Lining Adoption Place (S.L.A.P.)
Deadline for your form: I don't know when it's due, S.L.A.P. doesn't give out code drop dates. I want to get it done as soon as I can, though.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

The drop is tonight, please, anyone who sees this, PM me some critique.

Woukd love some last minute crit, I only got 1 crit so far.

[Helreith Brynhildar]

I would like some critique on my poem please!
Username: River's Alter Ego
Link to what needs critiquing: Um. I have no link. I just started on CS; I can post here if you want?
What is it: Short poem
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM. I'm afraid I'd lose this page.

The poem is as follows:

Her flesh was snow-cold;
Supine;
Splayed against her backdrop.
Frozen tears on icy skin.

Anything I mess up, please please tell me!

[Memories]

I'll trade a critique for a critique. You critique mine, I'll critique yours? :D

Edit: Sending you some critique, TigressJaguiar :)

[Wesley]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: wesleydog
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=21239085&hilit=personality#p21239085
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: No code drop day given, but I would love it ASAP. <3
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM
I'd really like to bring this place back to life, but starting with asking for some help. xD

[Papyrsatyr]

Bump. Remember to critique other forms for a chance others might return the favor!

[Shine]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Shine
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&p=23414828&hilit=Turkey+Wolf#p23414828
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Symphony Character Adoption Centre
Deadline for your form: The code drop is Dec. 22 so it's due in by maybe the 21 (final reading)
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM of that's ok =)