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Moon by lola843
| Artist | lola843 [gallery] |
| Time spent | 58 minutes |
| Drawing sessions | 2 |
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Moon
by lola843 » Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:16 am
The other night I was driving home and the moon that night was huge and beautiful I just had to draw a picture of the moon. ^^ Time is probably off by a fifteen minutes... Oh well, hope you guys like it! Comments crit welcome! 
Last edited by lola843 on Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
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–Ralph Waldo Emerson
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Re: Moon
by Mattebreon » Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:20 am
I love how you've done the moon, and the shading is beautiful! My only criticism is the excessive use of stars. So, I think less stars, and it'll look more realistic!
It was ice-cream headaches
And sweet avalanche.
When the pearls in our shells
Came out to dance.
You call me a bad tipper
Of the cradle.
With tired yawns
For fawns
On hunter's lawns.
We're the has been
Of husbands.
Sharpening the knives
Of young wives.
Take two years
And call me
When you're better.
Take teardrops of mine
And find yourself wetter.
And sweet avalanche.
When the pearls in our shells
Came out to dance.
You call me a bad tipper
Of the cradle.
With tired yawns
For fawns
On hunter's lawns.
We're the has been
Of husbands.
Sharpening the knives
Of young wives.
Take two years
And call me
When you're better.
Take teardrops of mine
And find yourself wetter.
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Re: Moon
by lola843 » Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:24 am
Thanks! Lol yeah, I did go a tad bit overboard with the stars diddn't I. 
Thanks again *goes to fix overload of stars*
Thanks again *goes to fix overload of stars*[/b]"Riding a horse is not a gentle hobby, to be picked up and laid down like a game of solitaire. It is a grand passion. It seizes a person whole and, once it has done so, he will have to accept that his life will be radically changed."
–Ralph Waldo Emerson
"My horses are my friends, not my slaves."
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Re: Moon
by Mattebreon » Thu Dec 15, 2011 6:36 am
Ah, that looks a lot better now! Lovely~
It was ice-cream headaches
And sweet avalanche.
When the pearls in our shells
Came out to dance.
You call me a bad tipper
Of the cradle.
With tired yawns
For fawns
On hunter's lawns.
We're the has been
Of husbands.
Sharpening the knives
Of young wives.
Take two years
And call me
When you're better.
Take teardrops of mine
And find yourself wetter.
And sweet avalanche.
When the pearls in our shells
Came out to dance.
You call me a bad tipper
Of the cradle.
With tired yawns
For fawns
On hunter's lawns.
We're the has been
Of husbands.
Sharpening the knives
Of young wives.
Take two years
And call me
When you're better.
Take teardrops of mine
And find yourself wetter.
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Re: Moon
by lola843 » Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:04 pm
Thank you SamhokuFoopets. ^^ And thanks Mattbreon!! I like it better too! There was something bothering me about the picture and I couldn't quite put my finger on it, and funny enough the stars were it!
Last bumped by lola843 on Fri Dec 23, 2011 4:04 pm.
[/b]"Riding a horse is not a gentle hobby, to be picked up and laid down like a game of solitaire. It is a grand passion. It seizes a person whole and, once it has done so, he will have to accept that his life will be radically changed."
–Ralph Waldo Emerson
"My horses are my friends, not my slaves."
-Dr. Reiner Klimke
~ Dressage Rider ~ Piaffe ~ Extended trot ~ Passage ~ Flying Lead Change ~
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