Party Crasher (a ghost story)

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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Sen507 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 2:17 pm

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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Zaphara1 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:05 am

It's good! But I have to ask--are you going to write more?
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Sen507 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:11 am

Well, I have written more and it's on my flashdrive, I just haven't edited it to the point where I really feel like posting it here at least, especially since my friend really wants to critique my work and I know she'd have plenty of horrible things to show me about my next few chapters.
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Zaphara1 » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:27 pm

Oh...phooey!
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Deschy » Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:36 pm

Awesome!
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Hi. Just felt like saying it.
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Noel » Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:14 pm

aibo7m3 wrote:Well, I have written more and it's on my flashdrive, I just haven't edited it to the point where I really feel like posting it here at least, especially since my friend really wants to critique my work and I know she'd have plenty of horrible things to show me about my next few chapters.

Well that's mean! XD What's wrong with me criting it? All is helpful, the harsher the more useful ^_^
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)

Postby Sen507 » Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:16 pm

This old thing, huh? Resurfacing it again, I see? Oh well, I don't really like critiques, I'm just an overly sensitive person and I really don't do well with any sort of criticism, even constructive types. At least my writing's gotten better with NaNoWriMo, still pretty terrible though.
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