Party Crasher (a ghost story)
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Sen507 » Sat Oct 22, 2011 2:17 pm
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Sen507 » Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:32 am
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Sen507 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:40 am
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Zaphara1 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:05 am
It's good! But I have to ask--are you going to write more?
Don't judge a thing 'til you know what's inside it; Don't push me I'll fight it; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; If you can't catch a wave then you're never gonna ride it; Ya can't come uninvited; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; You can't take me I'm free!! (You Can't Take Me, by Brian Adams, from the movie Spirit, Stallion of the Cimarron)
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Sen507 » Mon Oct 31, 2011 8:11 am
Well, I have written more and it's on my flashdrive, I just haven't edited it to the point where I really feel like posting it here at least, especially since my friend really wants to critique my work and I know she'd have plenty of horrible things to show me about my next few chapters.
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Sen507 » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:15 pm
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Zaphara1 » Tue Nov 01, 2011 12:27 pm
Oh...phooey!
Don't judge a thing 'til you know what's inside it; Don't push me I'll fight it; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; If you can't catch a wave then you're never gonna ride it; Ya can't come uninvited; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; You can't take me I'm free!! (You Can't Take Me, by Brian Adams, from the movie Spirit, Stallion of the Cimarron)
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Noel » Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:14 pm
aibo7m3 wrote:Well, I have written more and it's on my flashdrive, I just haven't edited it to the point where I really feel like posting it here at least, especially since my friend really wants to critique my work and I know she'd have plenty of horrible things to show me about my next few chapters.
Well that's mean! XD What's wrong with me criting it? All is helpful, the harsher the more useful ^_^
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Re: Party Crasher (a ghost story)
by Sen507 » Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:16 pm
This old thing, huh? Resurfacing it again, I see? Oh well, I don't really like critiques, I'm just an overly sensitive person and I really don't do well with any sort of criticism, even constructive types. At least my writing's gotten better with NaNoWriMo, still pretty terrible though.
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