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[Twisted_Swallow]

I want some critique!
Username:
Kaykie_Misfit
Link to your form:
viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&p=23501140#p23501140
Who do you want to critique you {Any judge; for example, Pix, Wesley, Ocean, etc.}:
anyone... more than one opinion would be great
How harsh do you want us to be {Soft, Honest, Brutally Honest}:
Brutally honest
Other:
the background/history is a WIP and I'm wondering how it is so far? Looking for crit on that spesiffically, having some trouble with it...
Indian Horse

Sorry about quoting but I'm on my phone so I edited my old form... But this counts as a new one

[the d]

Guys, this place is getting really spammy.
There is no reason to post your form more than once, if you haven't reccieved crit within three pages, then it would be okay to give a little reminder. Do not repost your form for adoption, it confuses the judges.
Also, two word replies don't contribute to this thread at all, they're spammy. If you want to chat, there's a link for the SCAA chat room on the front page.
Let's try and cut back on the spam, shall we? I know no one wants this thread locked.

[je ; t a i m e]

Don't hate me Wes, but I believe I'll be dropping out for every kennel I'm going for except for forty-four and one hundred sixty-five. Sorry. :'< I just don't have the time.

[Jericho]

Hey SCAA, is there a way to see if anyone else has posted a form for the character I want? If not its ok, I was only wonder so I can see if I should add to my form to make it better. I REALLY want Skyerunner.

[H o w l i n g]

Kennel 40
Blazer.Peppermint - Skyerunner
-Ichigo- - Skyerunner
Kayla - Skyerunner
Cerulean. - Skyerunner
❀ qυαятz ❀ - Skyerunner
Roxine - Skyerunner

I don't believe you've been added yet, Fox. Hope this helps, though.

[SarahLovesMusic]

Hey SCAA, is there a way to see if anyone else has posted a form for the character I want? If not its ok, I was only wonder so I can see if I should add to my form to make it better. I REALLY want Skyerunner.

Hey! Type it's kennel number in the search box.

[the d]

I'm dropping out for kennel 92, I've lost muse for them. </3

[Jericho]

Hey SCAA, is there a way to see if anyone else has posted a form for the character I want? If not its ok, I was only wonder so I can see if I should add to my form to make it better. I REALLY want Skyerunner.

Hey! Type it's kennel number in the search box.

I doesn't show any for the character i want!

[Discontinued]

Username: ChaosHog
Kennel Number: 44
Name [of pet]: Ayumi Sato
Gender [of pet]: Female
Breed/Species [of pet]: Human, duh. XD
Personality [of pet]:
Background/History [of pet]:
Use [for pet]:

Interesting and Need-to-Know Facts
Pokemon: Her starter Pokemon was an Igglybuff. Though she wasn't thrilled about getting one at first, she began to see just how strong that little pink puffball could be. One day while she was traveling to a nearby town, a group of male Nidoran attacked her. Her Iggybuff, not knowing what to do, began to sing by instinct. Instantly, the group of Nidoran ran, knowing exactly what would happen if they stayed. When Ayumi's Iggybuff stopped singing, she was overjoyed to see the group of attacking Pokemon had fled. However, when she turned around, she saw that her trainer had fallen to the ground, asleep. A couple years later, her Iggybuff grew into a Jigglypuff, then into a Wigglytuff. Ayumi and her Wigglytuff, Petal, have a strong bond and are best friends.

Ayumi's second Pokemon she came across was a lone little Abra. It had been dumped by some trainer, obviously useless to them because he was deaf. He couldn't hear the trainer's orders, thus not being able to fight in Pokemon battles. Ayumi felt so bad for him, and loved him so much, that she took him in, naming him Leonardo. He became a great fighter with Ayumi's special training for him. She was able to teach him sign language, and he showed he had great agility, so he could look back at her for an order and still dodge an incoming attack. This helped him with his psychic abilities, improving better than anyone would've thought he would. Sadly, for some reason, he couldn't evolve. However, Ayumi doesn't mind. She actually prefers him as an Abra than a Kadabra or Alakazam.

The third Pokemon to join this lovely girl's family of misfits is a fun-loving, gumdrop eating Deerling. It was Springtime when Ayumi came across this little fawn. She simply fell in love with it, giving the little one the name Amy. Little did she know, but the Deerling was male. With it being Spring, the Deerling's color was pink. If it had been any other season, maybe Ayumi would've thought about it because a boy, but sadly, she didn't know that a Deerling's fur changes with the season. She just assumed it was a girl, since it was pink. After she talked to a group of scientists who were studying Deerling, she found out that her little baby was really male. Because his name was Amy, she switched the words around so that his name would be "Yam". The Deerling still didn't appreciate it, but it was much better than "Amy".

As for the forth, it was a Rufflet. She hadn't planned on keeping anymore Pokemon, but when she entered a small town during her travels, she came across this little guy. Ayumi was hoping to get a female Pokemon soon, but she really didn't mind. Anyway, how she ended up meeting the young Rufflet was when she decided to feed it a piece of bread. Obviously, that wasn't a good idea, because it began to follow her everywhere she went. She tried to lose it by ducking into alleys, but she failed horribly. It just kept following her everywhere. Finally, she couldn't take it anymore and took him in. Though she acts like he's a pain, especially after he evolved a few months later into a Braviary, she loves her little bird with all her heart.

Favorite Pokemon Type: Nobody really knows what her favorite Pokemon type is. She seems to enjoy Normal type Pokemon, but that doesn't mean it is her favorite type. So, you could say the one she seems to like most of all is the Normal type.

Appearance:

Where She Lives: Ayumi lives in Anville Town, a quaint and peaceful little place where trains park for an overhaul. Not many people go there to visit, so it is pretty quiet most of the time there, which has made Ayumi like the sounds of trains, since they were the only things that ever really made noise in Anville.

Boyfriend:

Favorite Color:

Age: 16

Birth date: September 8th, 1995 (to today's date she's sixteen)
Turkey Wolf

Another BIG WIP for now.

[Chasing Rabbits.]

I want some critique!
Username:
SarahSapphire
Link to your form:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&start=4140#p23037785
Who do you want to critique you:
Anyone who has time to look at it would be perfect.
How harsh do you want us to be {Soft, Honest, Brutally Honest}:
Okay I'm a bit scared to put this down but...brutaly honest.
Other:
I'm still working on art for Mael so ignore that for the time being.
Nevermind on that last part but I would still like some critique please, and thank you very much
Indian Horse

wOW! amazING!

Thank you, Indian Horse. Would anyone else mind looking through it? Any comments are helpful.