Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby Ayramite » Sat Dec 03, 2011 1:17 am

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Gender of the Pup: female
Name of the Pup:Ina
Personality: Sweet, kind, protective of those she cares for, and uses her lyrical voice to sooth even the most high tempered beast
Story:Ina was born with a very special gift like the once great Orpheus who lulled the giant cerberus to sleep she had a very soothing lyrical voice and howl capable of calming almost an creature. As she grew she left her family feeling a tugging sensation to an unknown place. While on her journey she learned that not all great legends were myths, but some of the very creatures they were taught as pups to be just stories were very very real and coveted her gift and wanted to use to control a very powerful beast that had been released from hell itself as the rumors were told. Curious she headed in the direction of where the stories had originated but only to come up short each time she tried to get to where the area was said to be of course it didn't help that the panic was making everyone claim that the very monster lurked in there forest stealing their children and feed stock. As she traveled she learned of other like her, but unlike her they could seek refuge in a realm that was protected by the very beast that used to guard hell's gates, but they were gentled by their mates who were like her. Of course the only way to enter was to find the one that your soul pulled you toward and Ina wasn't having any luck finding where she was suppose to be headed it seemed like she was being pulled in a circle and continually missing her mark.

2 years later

Ina had given up of finding the one that had made her leave her family the persistence tugging sensation never left her and made her a bit snappish to those around her when it became to annoying for her to handle. Laying down on her little pallet of leaves she sighed and looked at the sky wondering why she was cursed to never find the one that at the moment seemed to be making her life miserable because of the difficulty to find him. Starting to drift of to sleep she was startled by a bright flashing light. Sitting up strait and snarling she was startled to see the innocent soul of a girl smiling at her. " Follow" she said turning away and walking down an ally. Thinking it was a trap Ina stayed where she was. She knew demons used spirits to draw those innocent or even those of interest toward them. Feeling a sudden gust of wind she looked at the spirit of the child and chuckled the pouting look on her face was almost to hard to resist. " You help" she said pleadingly and Ina sighed and started to follow the child and suprised to hear the lyrical giggle answer her. " Karan bad" she said not looking back. " Karan?" Ina said puzzled and the child stopped and shook her head. " He saved me, but he is bad" she said starting to walk again her little feet not touching to ground. " How is he bad?" she asked curious where this spirit was taking her and why she was so intent of whoever this Karan character was. " He scare people" she said in a matter of fact tone. " Where is he?" Ina asked and the little girl and she pointed to the high wall that had been built around a forest before disappearing behind the wall. Looking at the wall she felt her soul flutter and tug her towards the wall but there was no way she could get up the wall.

Looking around she found a fire escape that had been left open and made her way to the roof of the house that was level with the wall. Leaping she landing on the top of and wall and looked down there was no way she could make it down there unless she found a place she could jump down. Quickly running she skidded to a halt at the sight of the clearing the trees had been broken of even shredded by something that was obviously very angry. Seeing a broken tree leaning on the side of the wall she jumped onto it and then to the ground and looked around the tugging sensation getting stronger no paying attention she stepped on a branch and it snapped. Freezing she could hear the sound of thundering paws headed her way and there was no place for her to hide taking off she was startled to see a flash of red fur and there was no place for her to hide she was toast. Suddenly a bright light blinded her and the sound of the child met her ears. " NO! Karan need" the spirit shouted at the beast that was only a few feet from her. She'd never thought she'd see a real cerberus in her entire life but the one in front of her wasn't only big but looked to be calm at the moment.
" Karan? Is this why you wouldn't leave me alone" she asked and noticed the males attention was now on her. " Karan need" child's spirit insisted and Ina looked at him curiously the tugging sensation had stopped and she seemed drawn to him for some reason. " I'm Ina" she said sitting down trying not to seem threatening. Ina noticed the little girl pet Karan and then slowly disappear and Ina immediately could sense the rising temper.

Panicing a little she remembered the one thing the others had taught her that her howl was a weapon again these guys. Letting out a howl she was pleased when he came to a halt and became a little calmer. Remembering what the leader of the pack said she couldn't help but repeat to Karan. " It's not often one of your kind is exiled here but when they are we have a place for them" she said and Karan looked at her " How is it you sound like that?" he asked his tone told her he wasn't happy with the effect it had on him. " Orpheus once lulled the original cerberus creature into a sleep and in turn a creature to calm your kind was born" she explained as if it should seem like an easy explanation. " You sent my friend away" Karan growled and Ina could feel his anger rising again . Ina did what her insincts told her to do and licked his middle head trying to sooth his temper. " She was sent to you to keep you company. I would hope you would recognize the one soul you save that in turn has now saved you" she said remembering that the spirit had said she'd been saved by him. " It's time to leave here and go where we both belong" Ina said walking away. Heading toward the wall she was gonna have to figure out a way to gain his trust. Pausing she noticed Karan watch as the little spirit he'd saved pass over and shake his head a tear hitting the ground. Waiting she smiled and he joined her she was looking forward to getting to know Karan.

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Karan:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?t=895226(heres a pic of him.)

Other: Besides art is there anything I could do to make it better?
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby zima. » Sat Dec 03, 2011 3:18 am

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Other: I have a few other bios I wrote for her, and would be willing to post those as well. I thought this one was the most interesting, but, as I said before, I have about 3 - 5 others I can post for you. I really want this girl, and will do whatever it takes to get her. She's just sooooo beautiful! Also, I can give a detailed description of her, if it comes to how descriptive you want her owner to be. One more thing: Will you give the winner an individual picture? If so, I would like one if I win her.


I am willing to give the winner an individual picture of each pup, although it may take a bit. ;) Your bio for her is great love the tension and the uniqueness of her personality and story. :)



Thanks! It took me forever to come up with it! And if I win, I have no problem waiting :)
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby Frosty&Angel » Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:39 am

ty_tay wrote:I would also be willing to do a individual picture for the pups, you just have to remind me :)


That would be awesome!! I have started on a couple of them but I won't post them up until the adoptions are finished! :D

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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby Frosty&Angel » Sun Dec 04, 2011 2:54 pm

Bump!
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby zima. » Tue Dec 06, 2011 1:35 am

Hey Frosty & Angel - Could we decide maybe abit sooner, for number 1 at least? I won't be able to be on over x-Mas break, and I don't want to miss who wins her.....
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby Frosty&Angel » Tue Dec 06, 2011 4:42 pm

Alright, right now there is 2 forums for her and if there is another forum for her I will decide the next week or on the 18th. How about that?
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby rem sleep » Tue Dec 06, 2011 6:42 pm

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Gender of the Pup: Female
Name of the Pup: Solaris
Personality: Solaris was always quite mysterious around the people at the lab. She kept to herself, holding in her slight sense of insanity due to her imense dark powers. She was far to quiet to be normal, but she was also quite feisty. Whenever an exparament was preformed she was always trying to resist. Whenever anyone came near she always shot them a low growl. One day a scientists son came to visit the pup, just to see what his father did for a change. He looked through the first window he saw, gazing in on a large white room with padded walls where Sola was sleeping soundly. He decided he would sneak in, to see the mysterious beast. Being the mischevious teen he was, he did it. He removed the window from it's frame and slid inside when no one was around, he approached her, cautiously as he should. Sola awoke and growled in a menacing tone but the boy ignored it and proceeded. He was soon close enough to touch her magnificent pelt, but she lashed out. Striking his arm with a nasty bite. The other scientists saw and dashed into the room, deciding to ship the dangerous canine off to adoption. "She's no longer my problem. "
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby zima. » Wed Dec 07, 2011 1:58 am

Frosty&Angel wrote:Alright, right now there is 2 forums for her and if there is another forum for her I will decide the next week or on the 18th. How about that?

Alright :) Thanks
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby Frosty&Angel » Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:39 am

Alright there is 3 forums for #1. I will decide on the 15th, please have your forums finished by then, thanks!
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Re: Crimson Flame and Lust

Postby Bip » Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:54 am

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Gender of the Pup:Male
Name of the Pup:Tezaki
Personality:Tezaki is a very outgoing pup.He usually brags about his markings but he also has a soft side,which he brings out to help others.He's also very intelligent,but has a very terrible sense of direction,which makes him glad he was born without wings like some of his other siblings.
Story:Tezaki was born on Halloween,making most of the ones not very close to him think he's creepy and shun him.He soon established that he wasn't creepy by doing something that he never should have done,because it left his right eye blind.One day,a normal one,Tezaki decided to slide down the nearest mountain,with all the other wolves watching,so they would know that he wasn't creepy,but fun and brave.It was a snowy day,so he didn't need a log to slide with.He pushed off against a tree,soaring down the steep mountainside.He thought he was in control for the better part of the time,but he hit a hidden rock and went off-course,hitting a tree,and falling into a crevice.The rocks he fell on her sharp,one jabbing into his right eye.Ever since then,he's always bragged at how good he is so that he'll feel better about himself,but he never takes any of the risks he is dared to do,while not saying no to them as well.(That's not a life lesson,by the way,I hate that it sounds like that. Dx)
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