Deer adoptables -; hiatus

[Flicka]

actually im not sure what it's based off of. so my poem is out.

[Aima]

Water crisp, light clear,
Soaking in the Christmas cheer,
Shine of velvet red bright,
Such as sight fulfills the night,
Waves rush upon the sand,
Even in the earth's land,
White sparkles upon thickened snow,
Are wrapped up inside a bow,

Here is my poem, short and sweet. I hope it gets me this special Christmas treat.

[astrocompass]

It is quiet in the woods beyond my house,
their sounds of life have all fled.
to leave it in the dark,
an empty span of branches above the canopy.
but while the night goes by and by
a silent symphony.
Not one, nor I would and pause and listen.
to a cry heard through the dark,
it's tones weaving through the bare-bark trees
the lark's lament and robin's tale.
that they sing through the chilled air.

If one would pause to listen,
to their surprise they may find the woods
and night not quite so silent as before.
For beyond the lark and robin's singing calls
that sting the winter sky.
another sound does find,
a way to whisper between the pines.
The whistle of a doe,
touched by winter's hand and marked with
blood-red holly.
she sings her song between the roes.
A ballad for the snowy trees.

As she steps into the moon rays,
the only light to pierce this night.
The robins do fall silent their tales,
stopped at an untimely end.
And the larks hold their quaking breath,
the notes of a lament fading quickly from the trees.
This doe is special, this doe of red and ice.
for where she steps a flower blooms.
Struggling into the winter's night,
with leaves and sharp as thorns.

but do not be alarmed,
for as she walks with a quavering melody
her whistle shapes the flower and holly is grown.
A splash of red across the ground, marred only by the snow.
A mirror to that pelt of snow and wine,
of the doe that walks in that forest of mine.
but when she stops her voice,
the icy doe slips back between the trees
and the thorns are all that remains
when twilight blends to light
and dawn goes down to day.
The doe of holly has faded away.

I went way overboard on that X.X
but oh well, chaotic poem is chaotic and fun to write.

[lola843]

{Oh, oh my!! I must write for this dear she is so beautiful!! O.O}
[center]color=#00BFFF]The battle inside me I strive to end
Though the longer it’s fought, I see it will not amend
The world is to stubborn in their ways of hatred
And peace is too placid and her veil, now faded

The rivaling sides are etched eternal in time
The ensuing battle though still not a crime
They torment me and haunt my every thought
But this is my calling and back down I will not

It is my duty to harbor the unceasing rivalry
With the battle still ahead, I now take up new bravery
To face this unseen war of lore
And onward I press now and forever more


The ever continuing warfare racks my body
Hatred has the upper hand and continues still haughty
But peace waits patiently for its turn
To one day take hold of the world keeping, all things adjourn

And now my duty still lags on ever moor
I fear until death is knocking on my door.
Only then will the entire wrath unleash
The torrent that my body has been bequeathed
And then only then will I find eternal sleep

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{Uhh, I went slightly overboard and I think I was WAY off target with what she was based off of, but when I saw her I automatically thought of peace, and then the red on her got me thinking about red, and how red kind of reminds me of hatred.... sometimes... well anyway she had me thinking of peace and hatred and there constant battle it seems in the world.... soo this is what happens when I have to much time on my hands and get inspired lol! }

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[Temperance.]

[lol, I initially thought of the ocean and sharks with this doe, but that didn't seem very wintery and I kind of envisioned her as the queen of winter and icy winds instead XD Bahhh I feel like I should make mine longer....but I dunno, we'll see.]

[lola843]

[lol, I initially thought of the ocean and sharks with this doe, but that didn't seem very wintery and I kind of envisioned her as the queen of winter and icy winds instead XD Bahhh I feel like I should make mine longer....but I dunno, we'll see.]

{Lol, sharks and water.. I guess I could see that lol! But no don change it, I love your poem I was actually just reading it over again for the third time lol! I love it and I don't think a thing about it needs to be changed its beautiful!}

[Temperance.]

[Really? :3 D'awww that makes me so happy! I really love yours as well <3 Poor Concept, having to choose between all the fantastic poems that people have written so far, its going to be really hard I think XD]

[lola843]

{Haha, yes seriously, I love the way you used your words and you you were able to make everything flow so smoothly.... to be honest I had poetry envy ^^ I wish I could make things flow and be as great as that! And thank you... with my poem... I guess you can say thats what happens when your in the car all day and the only thing to disstract you from homework was that poem lol! Oh, I know I would hate to be in Concepts shoes X3 it would be impossible to pick a favourite out of all of these great poems!}

[ɾïṿεṉḋεll]

((Thats a good way to think of it, peace and hate, and sharks. I thought of a little silver bell. I dont have a CLUE why.))

[Temperance.]

[hahaha lol, I like the silver bell idea too :3 Well, I had poetry envy too, mine felt so short and I loved the meaning behind yours <3]