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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby I have no love » Fri Dec 02, 2011 2:52 pm

(I'll most likely fix up the background and personality later if I win zana. Good luck Frost feather and anyone else who applied for fairytale, may the best form win!)

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Kennel Number:
111
Name:
Zana
Gender:
female
Breed/Species:
Horse/Spirit
Personality:
Caring: Zana will go out of her way to help someone in need. She has spent time learning how to heal the sick and injured and to care for young ones when there is no-one else to look after them
Determined: If Zana makes a promise she will do absolutely anything in her power to keep it, no matter what that promise may be. She won't back down easily from a challenge either. She wishes desperately to prove herself to others and at times can seem a little reckless
Vengeful: Zana may be gentle but there is only so much she can take. If anyone even attempts to harm her friends she will bring her wrath down on them. There are ways to fight with out killing and Zana has spent much of her time learning them so that she may protect the ones she loves while still keeping her promise not to cause harm.
Background/History:

The gentle wind was calm and the sky was clear of clouds when I was born. The grass felt cool when I first touched it with my still-wet body. My first scent was my that of my mothers breath, my first sight was her kind brown eyes looking at me with love and joy. That first day was the happiest of my life, spending my time enjoying the simple pleasure of being alive. With my mother grazing peacefully I met the other foals of the herd. They were all kind to me but the most caring, the most thoughtful, was a small colt named Khalil. He was much older than me, almost a yearling but he was born small and was only slightly taller than me. We became fast friends and spent most of our time together.

That is how the first year of my life went by, playing with Khalil and the other horses, exploring our valley home. We found all sorts of secret places like the pond near the base of the nearby mountain. I loved it there, relaxing in the cool mountain water, and have often returned during my life to reflect on things, for there I felt completely at peace.My life particularly uneventful for the most part, and our adventures consisted mainly of moving between valleys. But when I turned three everything changed.

We were returning to the southern valley, to catch the sweet spring grass that had thrived on the lower slopes during the winter. The still-cold air nipped at our ears as we walked when suddenly Jinjang, the lead stallion, stopped suddenly. Raising his head high he flicked his ears back and forth, listening intently. Immediately I could feel that something was wrong. Then in the distance I heard a long, moaning howl. My legs started to quiver as mother walked over to stand by my side. She was beautiful that day, with her head high and determination to protect clear in her deep brown eyes as the wolf pack slunk out of the mist, their eyes glowing yellow and their teeth flashing white. That is how I remember her best, full of life and love, and not the cold dead corpse that she had been when I left her. I dare not describe in detail all that happened during the fight with the wolves but I will say that we lost half the herd and of my friends Khalil was the only one to leave that fight alive.

The rest of the herd moved about without much purpose for the following years. Living in fear, wandering the mountains without direction until one by one we began to die of heartache until It was just khalil and I left. I was seven and he was eight and we had become inseparable, using each other for comfort and support. Then he got sick. he would cough no-stop for hours during the night and each day he became thinner and thinner, no matter how much he ate. I feared for his life.

Death came for him in during our fourth winter since the battle with the wolves. It came swiftly as he slept and in the morning I woke to find his cold body laying peacefully beside me. It looked like he was still sleeping but I know instantly that he was gone. I cried out in sadness and fled from the clearing where we had been sleeping. I don't know how long I ran but I stopped beside a small icy pond. it was the same pond that khalil and I had found when we were still young and there I knelt down and cried. I cried for my mother and my I herd and I cried for Khalil until I had no more tears to shed. There I lay and as I lay the frost settled on my back, and the moon shone bright overheard, turning the frost-markings silver. I heard a gentle voice whisper in my ear and looked up to see my mother standing by my side, her eyes gazing at my with love. "come with me my sweet" she nickered gently "together we may roam the stars. I looked away back at the pond, glowing like a silver disk in the night "no" I had whispered "no mother, I'm sorry but I can't leave the world, I love it to much". my mother gazed at me "are you sure?" she had asked, trying hard to hide her surprise. I nodded slowly and she sighed "then you may stay but not as you were." slowly she began to fade "I love you....." she whispered and disappeared for the last time.That night I left the living world but never entered the spirit realm. My one chance was gone and now I walk alone here on the earth.

Use:
She is either going to be my fursona or my most beloved charrie.
Age:
Zana was 7 when she passed into the spirit realm. She is currently 130 years old
Appearance:
Zana is a very special horse. Her coat is a normal black by day and during the new moon but at night, when the stars and moon are shining in the sky her markings appear. Their brightness varies, mimicking the phase of the moon. The smaller and dimmer the moon the dimmer her markings glow.
likes:
Zana enjoys taking walks in the moonlight when the sky is clear and the stars are out. She also enjoys the company of wolves and other nocturnal creatures.
Dislikes:
Zana has very few dislikes, one of them is the sun. Being partially of the spirit world the sun hurts her if she is in it for to long.
Art:
(hopefully i will add more)
Lineart by Neara
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Every shipwrecked soul
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Like every broken wave on the shore
this is as far as I could reach




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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Frost Feather » Fri Dec 02, 2011 7:57 pm

Heh good 'luck I have no love
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Twisted_Swallow » Fri Dec 02, 2011 8:51 pm

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Kennel Number:
172

Name [of pet]:
Nuika/Wildshaddow/Wildpaw

Gender [of pet]:
Male

Breed/Species [of pet]:
Cat... breed-unknown

Personality [of pet]:
WildShadow is wild at heart and feels at home in the darkness of the forest with its towering trees and think undergrowth with his big ego and nosy personality he tends to get into trouble quite often, even with all his flaws he always sticks up for his friends and is known as a cat of passion. When he has his mind set on something he will fight until he has it… or he dies. He has an eye for beauty thus appreciating the finer things in life. Stop to smell the dandelions and all that.
WildShadow: An enemy to fear and a friend to treasure…

--- Likes:
As his name suggests, WildShadow has an extreme love for shadows and the forest. He also likes raven meat even though its hard to find Wildshadow loves adventure climbing trees being his favorite past time and fighting his greatest joy.
--- Dislikes:
He hates all clans accept thunder and shadow clan. He wont ever step out of the shadoows because he doesn’t like light at all. WildShadow also despises rabbits and will kill them just because they tend to stir irritation within him.
---Strengths:
His fur and lucid movements help him blend in with the shadows and since he has lived in the woods since he was a pup he knows them well and can use it as an advantage. WildShadow is also strong and brave and wont ever give up.
---Weaknesses:
Water is his greatest weakness next to light, he also has problems trusting and his large ego offends people near him oftenly thus he has a problem making friends. He is aggressive and offensive and thinks to much of himself.

Background/History [of pet]:
Chased away when he was only 2 moons WildShadow has always lived life as a loner and as part of the shadows. At 4 moons he tried to go back home but found his parents and siblings dead, murdered, wildshadow went on a rampage and at 7 moons found the cats who took his family, with the forrest on his side he got his revenge walking away with a scared eye, torn ears and a broken heart. Wallowing in the hurt he lost himself. After he got over the trauma his heart was locked up, his trust almost imposable to gain, his soul was dark. At 8 moons Wildshadow joined shadowclan hoping that the hate he was filled with could be put to good use and now as an apprentice he is still trying to find himself.

Wildshodow stood before his father crouched low to the ground ears flattened to his head the cold wind sent shivers down his spine and down to his paws dug deep into the freezing snow “I...I’m sowwy daddy” he pleaded but his father kept looking at him sternly “leave” his father said “leave and don’t ever come back”. With his tail between his legs Wildshadow crawled away heading towards the only place he didn’t know, the Forrest. Scared and unsure he ran trough the forest the ground hardening under is paws and strange sounds creeping into his ears, fear slowly overtook him as a huge bird swooped over him sending his fur swaying as it pasts and then snatching a rat from a near bush and carrying it into the unknown. After a long night in the hard scratchy trunk of a tree, hiding from the freezing winter winds Wildshadow set out looking for a new family and a new place to stay. Blood red fires that burned him to is core raged and cold winds that stung like shards of ice blew in the two moons wildshodow haunted the forest. The ghost of a warm summer day swimming through the endless shadows cast by the towering trees and thick undergrowth. Blue eyes glistening he crouched as a fat fluffy rabbit bound past a dandelion and sent the sweet smell of fresh meat towards the hungry warrior, ears twitching he started towards it slowly, carefully putting one foot in front of the other when a loud screech echoed, bouncing back and forth against the trees, fear stricken but curious he ran towards the sound. Wildshadow slowed down as his eye caught red covering the grass, the salty smell of blood slowly creeping towards him, slowly he lowered his nose to the ground and anger filled sorrow flooded him “mom” he whispered and followed the smell. Slowly memories flickered in his eyes as he noticed the place that he has been looking for, this was the home he was chased away from. With his nose to the ground Wildshadow followed the scent and found 3 little bodies huddled under some undergrowth, just a little further away lay the bodies of his mother and father. With tear filled eyes he followed the scent of the bandits who raided his family, after four moons of searching he was filled with hate and trained in battle and survival. Wanting revenge more than anything his hate lead him to the murderers and Wildshadow fought with the strength he gained throughout his moons alone, claws at the ready he pounced injuring the first in a surprise attack and without hesitation jumped on the other. The battle didn’t last long and Wildshadow, with his scars stinging and his torn ear burning he stood smirking at the blood filled bodies even though it felt as if exhaustion would defeat him. Feeling worse about himself he ran east and met the leader of the shadow clan, a huge black cat that smelt of mildew and hate, covered in pink marking setting his history of war apart from his thick black coat. Seeing wildshadow as a kindred spirit the cat invited him to join his clan took him in as his own apprentice. Trained to be angry and hate wildshadow became lost even more than he was in the past. Every now and then he would think of the family he had and then realize that somehow even when it seems so far away , the first thing he must find on the road to peace is himself…


Use [for pet]:
He will be my main Cat RP character

Other:
Character Age:
9 Moons

Appearance:
Wildshadow has an orange undercoat and a grey spotted overcoat witch helps him blend into darkness. he crouches low and flattens his ears while moving his tail slightly to look like the sun shining through the trees, his pond blue eyes and white belly distracts other cats in battle and gives him a great edge as a spy. Wildshadow is very proud and that can be seen by the way his round head is always held high and his fluffed tail that never stops swishing.

Random RP(puts his personality in context):
WildShadow crouched low only his ears visible in the long grass as the towering trees cast there endless shadows over him. His ears perked, slowly, visibly. The raven flew closer nearing the hare WildShadow left in his rampage, flapping slowly until the large, gleaming black bird hit the ground with a small thump, the precise moment that the fearless cat leaped through the air, flying. The sound of wings clapping ferociously and the loud squawking of the black bird erupted as the struggle between the animals started, quick as lighting WildShadow clawed at the bird sending a spray of red to the ground. A last squawk set the forest free as the warrior in training snapped the birds neck and headed back to his den the bird hanging sloppily from his mouth…
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Solanum » Sat Dec 03, 2011 4:04 am

I hope that's a WIP. The background is way too short, as is the personality for my liking.
This isn't a rp, it's a character adoption centre, so why you've included an example of your rping I have no idea... x3
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Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


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Look what you made of me
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Shimmerleaf » Sat Dec 03, 2011 7:50 am

@Kaykie_Misfit: I was reading your form, and I'm very confused. Why do you keep saying that he is a pure black cat? The picture of the kennel you're trying to adopt is obviously not black.
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I walked across
An empty land,
I knew the pathway like the back of my hand
I felt the earth
Beneath my feet,
Sat by the river and it made me complete
Oh, simple thing
Where have you gone?
I'm getting old and I need something to rely on
So tell me when
You're gonna let me in,
I'm getting tired and I need somewhere to begin
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Solanum » Sat Dec 03, 2011 7:52 am

Shimmerleaf wrote:
@Kaykie_Misfit: I was reading your form, and I'm very confused. Why do you keep saying that he is a pure black cat? The picture of the kennel you're trying to adopt is obviously not black.

Only just read...
Yeah... That's weird...
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I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Wesley » Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:10 am

Kaykie, your form isn't altogether too bad honestly. Quality above quantity, right? However, the form could do with a lot more of the quantity in the background. I think that if you applied some of your RP skills to the background, you could go pretty far. But I did notice the significant color change. Do you acknowledge that the character must be the same one?
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Re: ♪♫ Symphony Character Adoption Agency ♫♪ - Join Secret S

Postby Discontinued » Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:13 am

Wesleydog, how is my form for Kennel 105 so far? I still need to add a history/background, but what do you think of it? I mean, if I'm allowed to ask that is. ^^
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Re: Forms <3

Postby Darkest.Nation » Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:19 am

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Re: Forms <3

Postby Discontinued » Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:23 am

Fly.With.Me wrote:
wesleydog wrote:
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