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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby olivionary » Wed Nov 30, 2011 5:53 am

"Mom, I really don't need to go to Summer camp." I sat on my bed watching her put my clothes in the suitcase. She stopped and looked at me, "Yes you do. I sent that story and they said you were good, you could really learn alot from going there. And it's not really a camp, it's a conference." I rolled my eyes and leapt of the bed.

I trudged along dragging the suitcase behind me, I jumped as someone came up beside me. "Hey, need some help?" Said a husky voice, I looked up to see a tall 'man'. "Um yes please. I'm Kate by the way." I muttered, I looked forward towards the cabin at the end of the track. He took the case from my hands, "I'm Denzil, Cooking staff." I nod.

The cabin was rather large, I unlocked the door and wandered in. He came in behind me, "So, I see you won't be the only one staying here. My sister Tawney is in here, she's in the Entertainment department." I nodded at him, glancing at the clock on the wall I gasped. "I have a meeting in twenty minutes." I rush towards the bathroom, I swing the door open and scream.

Denzil ran over and gulped as he saw the state of the bathroom. Blood spilled across the floor, up the walls, a message on the mirror. 'Kate....Kate....will soon meet her fate...' I glanced at Denzil, he saw something in the shower, he moved forward and opened it. We turned and ran out the cabin.

The shadow chased after them, axe high above his head. Denzil was caught first, the axe swung and hit him deep in the side. He fell to the floor, he groaned. I dropped down beside him, "I'll get help, I promise." I hug him quickly to show I ment it then sprinted away to the community centre. I gasped and said quickly to the man at the desk about everything that had happened. He didn't believe me.

I walked slowly out the small cabin, I stared at the ground, the man was gone. I looked at the glove on the floor. I noticed dark stains, I pick it up and saw something inside. Dark red with white in the middle, flesh and bone. I swallow and ran towards Denzil. I dropped to his and spoke softly, "We have to get to First Aid." He gazed up at me then whispered up. "Kate run. Now." I turned to the an axe moving towards me, I closed my eyes. A sharp pain rushed through me then...nothing.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby climbing{the}world » Wed Nov 30, 2011 6:15 am

XD That's fricken awesome! XD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby amarok. » Wed Nov 30, 2011 6:16 am

s p e l l b o u n d wrote:
"Mom, I really don't need to go to Summer camp." I sat on my bed watching her put my clothes in the suitcase. She stopped and looked at me, "Yes you do. I sent that story and they said you were good, you could really learn alot from going there. And it's not really a camp, it's a conference." I rolled my eyes and leapt of the bed.

I trudged along dragging the suitcase behind me, I jumped as someone came up beside me. "Hey, need some help?" Said a husky voice, I looked up to see a tall 'man'. "Um yes please. I'm Kate by the way." I muttered, I looked forward towards the cabin at the end of the track. He took the case from my hands, "I'm Denzil, Cooking staff." I nod.

The cabin was rather large, I unlocked the door and wandered in. He came in behind me, "So, I see you won't be the only one staying here. My sister Tawney is in here, she's in the Entertainment department." I nodded at him, glancing at the clock on the wall I gasped. "I have a meeting in twenty minutes." I rush towards the bathroom, I swing the door open and scream.

Denzil ran over and gulped as he saw the state of the bathroom. Blood spilled across the floor, up the walls, a message on the mirror. 'Kate....Kate....will soon meet her fate...' I glanced at Denzil, he saw something in the shower, he moved forward and opened it. We turned and ran out the cabin.

The shadow chased after them, axe high above his head. Denzil was caught first, the axe swung and hit him deep in the side. He fell to the floor, he groaned. I dropped down beside him, "I'll get help, I promise." I hug him quickly to show I ment it then sprinted away to the community centre. I gasped and said quickly to the man at the desk about everything that had happened. He didn't believe me.

I walked slowly out the small cabin, I stared at the ground, the man was gone. I looked at the glove on the floor. I noticed dark stains, I pick it up and saw something inside. Dark red with white in the middle, flesh and bone. I swallow and ran towards Denzil. I dropped to his and spoke softly, "We have to get to First Aid." He gazed up at me then whispered up. "Kate run. Now." I turned to the an axe moving towards me, I closed my eyes. A sharp pain rushed through me then...nothing.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby olivionary » Wed Nov 30, 2011 7:05 am

XD

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:58 am

I was walking down the street with my dog. We rounded the corner and I was shocked at what I saw. Even my dog whimpered and jumped back. There was a piece of paper, with "Turn around, go back" in bloody red. But it wasn't the paper that startled me and my dog. What startled us was the paper. It was floating on it`s self, and behind it was.. nothing. I backed away silently, picking up my dog. I turned around and ran into a big man. He had no eyes. No nose. No lips. He had a grey overcoat. Then he reached into his pocket and grabbed out a dagger. It reeked of acid. Blood acid, I thought. I edged slowly towards the road. I let my dog away, and whispered to fetch the police. He ran off towards the local PD. I turned and ran across the road, following my dog, and making sure the man was following me. But then I froze. I knew this was utterly stupid. I heart froze. My eyesight blurred. I managed to turn around and look as the man fastened his dagger around my neck. I turned and heard my dog barking and the sound of sirens. Closer... Then everything went black. I thought I was finished.

When I woke up I was in the hospital. There where gauzes on my arm and my leg. I tried blinking one of my eyes. But I coudn`t see anything out the other. I knew my right eye was gone.
I looked around and saw my mom, my dog and a police officer and a nurse. The P.O. looked at a notebook and then at me. "Well, young lady, I have some bad news. The good news is that your still alive, but the bad news is you`ve been attacked by the `Man in the Overcoat`. He is a supernatural bad-man, he steals part of your soul as well your right eye. This is his sign, and that you will not be able to fully enjoy your life. We are trying to find out why he is doing this, but until now.. Nothing. It was very good that you sent your dog to the PD, we caught a trace of him." That was the P.O. said to me. I looked at my dog and saw that he had a bandage on his left leg. My mom looked at him and said "Nothing to worry. He tripped on a small crack, nothing big."
And with that, I went out.
I woke up to still be in the hospital, but I felt something lost. Lost for all eternity.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby climbing{the}world » Wed Nov 30, 2011 9:35 am

dang awesome!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDX
Because I met my best writing/internet buddy through her signature, I decided to list a bunch of things about me. Not that I like making friends. Or that I'm good at it.

Harry Potter; Lord of the Rings; The Hobbit; The Silmarillion; Anything Tolkien Really; My Little Pony; FimFiction; Fanfiction; AppleDash; TwiDash; RariJack; Writing; Poetry; Camp NaNoWriMo; NaNoWriMo; Rabbits; My Pet Rabbit Nali; Slender; Steam; Team Fortress 2; Minecraft; SkyDoesMinecraft; HuskyMudkipz; PewDiePie; Stephano (duh!); Smosh; Ian is Best Smosh; Woona is Best Princess; The Youtubes; Skypes; Scrivener; Movies; Scripts; Award Shows; Elijah Wood aka Frodo; Pippin is Best Hobbit; Tumblr; Shadowlands MC; Tinq.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Wed Nov 30, 2011 9:38 am

s p e l l b o u n d wrote:
"Mom, I really don't need to go to Summer camp." I sat on my bed watching her put my clothes in the suitcase. She stopped and looked at me, "Yes you do. I sent that story and they said you were good, you could really learn alot from going there. And it's not really a camp, it's a conference." I rolled my eyes and leapt of the bed.

I trudged along dragging the suitcase behind me, I jumped as someone came up beside me. "Hey, need some help?" Said a husky voice, I looked up to see a tall 'man'. "Um yes please. I'm Kate by the way." I muttered, I looked forward towards the cabin at the end of the track. He took the case from my hands, "I'm Denzil, Cooking staff." I nod.

The cabin was rather large, I unlocked the door and wandered in. He came in behind me, "So, I see you won't be the only one staying here. My sister Tawney is in here, she's in the Entertainment department." I nodded at him, glancing at the clock on the wall I gasped. "I have a meeting in twenty minutes." I rush towards the bathroom, I swing the door open and scream.

Denzil ran over and gulped as he saw the state of the bathroom. Blood spilled across the floor, up the walls, a message on the mirror. 'Kate....Kate....will soon meet her fate...' I glanced at Denzil, he saw something in the shower, he moved forward and opened it. We turned and ran out the cabin.

The shadow chased after them, axe high above his head. Denzil was caught first, the axe swung and hit him deep in the side. He fell to the floor, he groaned. I dropped down beside him, "I'll get help, I promise." I hug him quickly to show I ment it then sprinted away to the community centre. I gasped and said quickly to the man at the desk about everything that had happened. He didn't believe me.

I walked slowly out the small cabin, I stared at the ground, the man was gone. I looked at the glove on the floor. I noticed dark stains, I pick it up and saw something inside. Dark red with white in the middle, flesh and bone. I swallow and ran towards Denzil. I dropped to his and spoke softly, "We have to get to First Aid." He gazed up at me then whispered up. "Kate run. Now." I turned to the an axe moving towards me, I closed my eyes. A sharp pain rushed through me then...nothing.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orangelake » Wed Nov 30, 2011 9:47 am

*shiver* i will post some soon you better be watching out ;)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ChrissieFoxStar101 » Wed Nov 30, 2011 10:15 am

This one isn't exactly scary, but I think's its pretty fitting.

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There once was a young newly married couple who were looking for the perfect home for their future child and their German Shepherd. They soon found the perfect home. It was a two story wooden cabin in the woods. It had a nice, rustic, peaceful feeling to it. And not a moment too soon, for merely two weeks later their baby Angela was born. They were happy, but this time was short lived. Some months later they started getting a cold feeling in the nursery that they just couldn't explain. Then one time, the couple was taking a walk in the woods not too far from their house, when they heard Angela crying and their dog barking viciously. They went running, not truly believing that their gentle dog could be attacking their baby. And they were right, because when they got there they heard something else, a cackle. When the couple burst through the door the cackle stopped, but Angela was crying feverishly and their dog was still baring her teeth in vicious snarl, until she saw the couple. When she saw them she started wagging her tail in a sad little way, like she was disappointed she hadn't managed to catch whatever had threatened their peace. They decided the cackle was just their imagination, so they forgot about it until it happened again. The incident happened again and again and again, each time more terrifying than the last, and getting much more frequent, until one time they came running to hear the sound of a fight. Terrifying screeches and angry howls joined together in a horrible chorus. Until they heard something thump against a wall, a squeal, and then silence. It was then when they burst in, and the woman started crying along with her baby. The only thing she could see was their dog, slumped in the corner, dead. After this the incidents seemed to cease, but not for long. Again it happened, but this time the door wouldn't open. The couple jiggled the door-knob and pounded on the door, all the while the horrifying cackle and the baby's cry coming from the room. Then the couple heard a bark that stopped them on their tracks. Their dog was dead! How could there be barking in the room? There were howls and barks and snarls, and beneath them the horrified screeches of whatever had been tormenting their child. Then there was a final scream, and the door finally opened. Behind it they found their child, her face wet with tears but her face brightening with a wonderful smile, the first of many smiles that would follow her the rest of her life. And then the couple knew. They knew that God had allowed their dog to come back, had sent her from above to stop this thing, that the tool God used to help them was the spirit of their dog.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Wed Nov 30, 2011 8:19 pm

That's awsome!!! More!
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