Pound of Hope [CLOSED PERMANENTLY]

[Iŗi]

you can delete it ill find a other pet:)

[Miakemi]

Dreamers, it's not about which character you go for. It's about the effort you put into showing you know and understand that character. Character development is very important in forms wherever you try to adopt pets. Again, I encourage you to look at the examples of winning forms and keep trying.

Also, I can't delete your form. If you really want to drop out for that character, you'll need to edit the form out of that post so Octo doesn't collect it as an active form.

[Iŗi]

I am looking to adopt...
Picture:
Kennel number: 44
Name: Burrows
Breed:Griffon
Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:i want this animal because i love art and i want to put this lovely griffon in my siggy. ill make banners for your pound:)
Personality: he is loving,caring and is friendly to other people
Likes: Burrows likes hockey since he is named after #14 called burrows of the Canucks and he also loves to eat and play and paint art.
Dislikes: he dislikes bully's and hates to dance and eat healthy food
History/Background: He was born by a white and black griffon who took care of him till he got taken away to be tested on his species and he never saw his mom again.He finnaly got away eh could not fly anymore after the people clipped his wings,then i found him and took care of him.
Art: none

[parfom]

Miakemi, will i have chances of winning with my form ?

[Tiikeria]

Dreamers, you need to look at the tips and winning forms. Art means art you drew of the character, not art you've done in the past. You need to beef up your personality and story, as well, as we really look at stuff like that.

[Chlo]

I am looking to cherish and love...




Kennel number:
P125
Name:
Ye zi
Chinese for leaf
Breed:
Dhole
Species information:
*The dhole has many vocal calls:whistle,scream,mew, and cluck like a chicken.

*Forms temporary packs of over 40 animals.

*When hunting as a pack it can subdue prey over 10 times its own body weight.

*It exploits a variety of habitats from tropical rain forest and dry-deciduous jungle, to cold alpine forest and open plains.

*It's jump can reach a vertical height of at least 2.3 metres (7.5 ft).

*It is a great swimmer and often drives its prey into water.

Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:
I am new to ChickenSmoothie,and have 3 characters.I don't like having a lot of characters,because I feel like some would get neglected.I made a character that I decided to donate,so I decided to donate it here but donations were closed.I decided to go ahead and look at what was for adoption(even though I probably wouldn't adopt anything),but then I saw kennel 125.I wondered if I already had to many characters already,but I had to at least try to adopt her.When I saw her it reminded me of a tropical forest and watermelons.(But the inside of her ears somewhat remind me of candy canes) eue

Her design has beautiful colors,and I love how they are playfully added onto her.She will be very fun to draw,and even if I don't win her,I might draw her for the winner.(As a congratulations gift,not because I'm selfish and want the joy of drawing her.>.>)/selfish
Anyway,If I did win her I would order art of her because I know she'll look pretty in all the art she's ordered in.

Personality:
Shy
Shy and polite at first,but once you get to know her,she is the complete opposite.Loud,giggly,and doesn't think about what she says.

Energetic
Hates just doing nothing,and can get hyper at times.

Independant
Does not need to depend on others; is very independant.

Outgoing
Friendly and socially confident.

Open Minded
Willing to consider new ideas and trying new things.

Curious
Likes to learn new things,and can't stand not knowing something.

Likes:
Fruit
Rain
Water
Bugs/small critters
Sunny,warm weather
Clouds
Running
Digging
Eating
Swimming
Cleanness
Dislikes:
Negative actions/chatter
Hunting
Meat
Laziness
Messy fur/messy anything
Hurting animals/critters


Eating Habits:
Only eats fish,some plants,and bugs.Does not like eating meat like deer,etc. because she would feel bad for them.
History/Background:
It was late and cloudy in the rain forest.A distressed female dhole lay in the forest clearing with a small amount of sunlight peeking through the trees.There she gave birth to four pups.
"What little angels." She said peacefully as she lick her pups clean.They squealed and mewled as they hobbled on the ground by their mother."Now I just have to name you all..."She thought aloud.She looked around the forest,as if she was searching for a name.Right then,a beautiful,large leaf fell next to the largest pup.It gleamed with shades of green,and hues of red.It even matched it's pelt colors."I name you Ye zi,after the leaf."The mother anounced.The other pup's design were rather simple,so their names weren't so exotic.She named them Melon,Vine,Breeze,and Ye zi.

A month had gone past,and the pups were growing healthy and strong.Their mother was already teaching them how to hunt,but the only one displeased and wouldn't eat was Ye zi.
"Please eat for your mom,Ye zi.You are getting skinny and weak."Mother begged. "But mommy,the animals that you killed did nothing wrong and I don't want to eat them."Then she began to nibble at the grass by her feet."Don't eat grass"Her mother replied "I'll go get you a bug,please eat it."Within a minuet,Mother retuned with a large,plump bug."Ew!"Ye zi's sister,Melon squealed.Ye zi sniffed them bug,and after deciding it was fine she ate it."That was yummy!Thank you mommy!"
After eating bugs and some flower-like plants,Ye zi got her fat and strength back and was more energetic than ever.Ye zi often would dig holes to find bugs to eat.

Eventually,Ye zi and her siblings got bigger,and began to explore the world and socialize.They learned to swim,hunt,and they had even joined a pack.(Their mother had gotten separated from her old pack before she gave birth)
"Can't catch me!"Breeze said as he was chased around the forest by his siblings."I'm gonna get you!"Melon exclaimed as she was getting closer to her brother.Seeing how close his sister was,he decided to jump in the river."Your not supposed to swim in the river today!The pack leader said that the current's too strong!"Ye zi yelled to her brother.Breeze was struggling to swim and keep his head above the water.Worried,Vine jumped in the river to save his brother."Vine!You'll both drown!"Melon screamed.Vine was the quiet type,he didn't talk much and he never really did anything.But now he is doing something that everyone will remember.They were drifting down stream,the current was pulling them away and under.Vine was pushing Breeze to the land,and then went under water and pushed him to the surface.Breeze staggered to the land,spitting water out of his mouth.He looked at the river to help Vine up,but Vine never came up.Breeze,Melon,and Ye zi raced down the stream looking frantically for Vine.They all had tears filling their eyes and running down their cheeks.Breeze fell to the floor with guilt."It's all my fault..I should have listened to the leader so that I wouldn't have gone into the river.Water was dripping from his dank fur.He began to shiver."It's okay."Ye zi said softly as she curled next to him."Vine never really did anything to stand out,now he will always be remembered."Ye zi began to lick the cold water of of Breeze."Maybe this was the meaning of his life."Melon said as she laid down.They all got in a group and cried together,realizing how much the loved each other.
Eventually they had to go to their mother and tell her what happened.With a reluctant sigh and a few tears,she had forgiven her pups (Even though they didn't do anything wrong,they all felt guilty).Their mother had to tell the pack leader,so that he could announce what the pack had lost.That night,the whole pack got together and stood vigil.After that eventful night,in the morning the pack was traveling elsewhere to get better pray.

Ye zi woke up to the sound of paws thumping on the floor and endless chatter outside their den.She was the first to wake up,so she playfully prodded at her family."Wake up everyone!It's moving time."She was somewhat reluctant to leave the current grounds,especially right after her brother was lost here.Ye zi was somewhat excited though because she heard that there was new types of bugs other than roaches and crickets.The fish were supposedly better there,too.After her family woke up,they rushed outside,hoping they weren't missed.They were just in time!Everyone was just hunting and getting things ready before their long trip.Ye zi made sure that the river's current wasn't too strong before she got in.It was calm,so she went in in carefully,but quickly,snagged a fish into her mouth and climbed out.But for some reason,she almost didn't want to get out of the water.She felt as if she was with Vine when she was swimming.A small tear escaped her eye.The fish was delicious,and then she caught up with her family before they left.They got with their pack,and together everyone ran,fallowing the leader to their next destination.
It was a long trip,the pack had gone quite far,but they all decided to make a camp for the night and continue in the morning.Y zi and her family found a small den made of rocks,with the perfect amount of space for them to snuggle up to each other.
Art:

Other:

[TigressJaguiar]

I'd like some critique!
Username: TigressJaguiar
Number of character you're applying for: F15 and only F15
Link to form: click
Would you like critique through PM, or another way?: PM please
critmehplz

I wish to know what is wrong with my form so I can fix it.
I will not rest until I finally have Flitt.

[Phoenix's Rebirth]

I can critique your form, Tigress.

[Wesley]

I'd like some critique!
Username: wesleydog
Number of character you're applying for: F5
Link to form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=341528&p=21239085&hilit=personality#p21239085
Would you like critique through PM, or another way?: PM, please. :3
I didn't have a very good day, so I'm looking to improve everything. ^^ (Namely my writing and spelling skills and readyness for pop quizzes. c;) So I'd love some ideas of what I can do to see to winning this dollbaby. :3
critmehplz

[The Wolfe]

Aww... P31 has been adopted. I was gonna go for it as well. Congrats to the adopter.