View topic - How I've improved.

My gallery · by **Shiverice** » Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:55 pm

Hola everyone, I drew this with a mouse. I hate the nose, I'll fix it soon. I am actually really proud of it. I'll be coloring it in soon XD

This is my last drawing. I really think I've improved.

My gallery · by **angel23456** » Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:57 pm

No offence, but they both look the same. ^^'

My gallery · by **Shiverice** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:11 am

Oh D:

My gallery · by **CustardFox** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:26 am

angel23456 wrote:No offence, but they both look the same. ^^'

Dont get her too down! the eyes have improved!

My gallery · by **ScarfaceSanguineous** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:36 am

Keep practicing!

My gallery · by **KaiKenNatsuki** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:44 am

angel23456 wrote:No offence, but they both look the same. ^^'

If you take a good look at it, you'll see they actually don't ^^'

Yeah i like the newer one you made, the older one is good too

I'd suggest you fluffier cheeks and the ears should be a little more separated from each other

Other than that is good, never give up!

My gallery · by **Shiverice** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:02 pm

Thanks everyone! Every suggestion helps!

My gallery · by **ScarfaceSanguineous** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:11 pm

Maybe thinning the neck down a bit?

My gallery · by **Shiverice** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:17 pm

Part of it is the cat's back.

My gallery · by **ScarfaceSanguineous** » Thu Nov 10, 2011 12:19 pm

Yes that part can stay, but making the neck a tiny bit thinner'd help.

Making the cat's head a little more triangle shaped would help to, in my opinion.

Artist	Shiverice [gallery]
Time spent	1 hour, 5 minutes
Drawing sessions	8
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