Apsogos by 'paradox

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Apsogos

Postby 'paradox » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:08 am

I can finally color these lines CBDSFGEDNFY so happy!

I put the color codes there too,but I dont think you can read them,lol.

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Name:
Apsogos{means 'flawless' in greek}
Age (from 400):
246
Gender:
male
Personality:
To sum Apsogos up in three words,I would say strategist,truthful,and intense.He is very friendly,though he puts of a vibe that seems to be 'im not in the mood' to other sabers.All you have to do is walk up to him,really.Though,he does choose himself over friends.His opinion changes based on the situation,and his choice is whats best for him.In all his years,he finally just wants to be the one thats on top.His family is dead,but if they were alive they would be the only ones that he would give his life for.For now.He is not very intune with lying,lies,or anything that isnt the truth.Sabers will usually just tell him the truth because most know that he will go into your head and search for the correct answer anyway.When he was young,he was constantly teased,and this made him be the saber he is today.He does not like to be made a mockery of,and will put an end to it immediatly.But he will also stand up for anyone else that he thinks is right.He is often caught day dreaming.Usually day dreaming of something he saw in a vision.He also gives very straight foreward answers.Don't want something?Don't ask for it is what he would say.
Element:
pyschic
Attacks:
Offensive;;
    »power ring;;He places is right paw on the ground,and from his paw markings like his own stripes begin to spread to the ground and glow slightly.They go out farther and farther and then connect to make a glowing ring around him and his apponent.His apponent may not leave and only another pyschic saber may enter.

    »eye opener;;His fangs start to glow brightly,and he bites into his apponent.The apponent will now see the world differently,becoming very disoriented.

    »light slash;;Either his claws,or his metalic claws glow.He takes a swipe at the foe,and the wound shines a bright white for a few seconds as it burrows deeper than it should have been.
Defensive;;

    »seeing eye;;He can predict his foe's next move

    »locked up;;Apsogos can create pyschic,transparent walls around himself.These 'walls' can be taken down by another pyschic saber.These only last a few minutes.

    »protection;;He blocks off his mind from being read from other sabers.
Special;;

    »all knowing;;He can predict the future,though he doesn't know when it will happen.It could be the next day or many years.

    »open book;;He can read the thoughts of another saber.He doesn't use this very often.
Theme Song:
the night's on fire
Armor Type (gold, silver or bronze):
gold
Rank (leader, beta, loner, etc):
leader? Beta,maybe?If not then he can just be a normal warrior,I don't want him to be a loner.
Special Ability (invent, dude!):
»teleporation;;Apsogos can teleport himself to another area.When he has a lot of energy,he can teleport himself in a 15 mile radius.But he will be drained,maybe even pass out if he goes to the brink of that 15 miles.When low on energy,and he only does this when very desperate,he can teleport himself 1-3 miles away.He only does this when in threat of dying.He can take one more saber with him sometimes,but often he passes out after they teleport.

Story:

''You want to know about me?Well,you should know that asking sabers about thier pasts' is almost always a bad idea.But,I'll tell you anyway.I...I was like any other saber.Exept for being stripeless of course!Ha,ha!Well,I guess you've heard enough of this chatting.Ill go ahead and tell you the not so glorious story of me,Apsogos.''

"It begins way back when,little cub.When I was your age.Believe it or not,I didn't have these stripes you see now.I was born with my simple red brown colorings,turqouise eyes.My whole family was bound to be a little off.With my father being a fire saber and my mother being ice.Father was a deep red,with bright orange stripes and even some 'white hot' stripes as I would say.He had a golden cap on each of his long fangs.Mother was a light tan color,coated in pale blue splash like markings that went from her hind legs and stopped at her neck.She bore no markings on her face.My siblings were mostly the same color as me,with slight differences.My sister looked the most like my mother,she had a very light coat.They also had some very faded stripes."

"As we all got old enough to be play together,thier stripes started comming in more.I still had just my plain color.Mother kept saying that I must have been a late bloomer,but I knew she couldn't be right.I didn't even have faint markings.My siblings would always make fun of me,calling me 'no stripe'.Silly as it sounds,it still hurt a bit.It wasn't fair!It wasn't fair how they all had stripes and big sharp claws.When we would play fight together,I'd always be the one getting hurt.But,as any saber would,I just got used to it.It wasn't enough to put me on edge.It was nicks and cuts."

"But then we got even older.All my siblings started getting thier elemental powers.My sister,she was the first one.She was just like mother,her strength over ice wasn't great,but she was young.My brothers,most of them were fire elementals,one was water,though.Many sabers thought it was funny how none of us had a knock off element,one that was totally different.But they guessed it was because I was a non-elemental.They all started to train with mentors with thier elements,exept for me.I was set up with an air elemental,and he always seemed a little bored with me.Maybe it was because he couldn't really teach me anything but to bite and claw.Jump and kick."

"We only trained for a few years,and then we were released.We now had to learn on our own.But...I...I just didn't know what to do.And then it hit me.If I wasn't an elemental saber,than I was going to be the best saber!Each day I ran out into the forest.Each day I trained until my body would no longer cooperate with me.I must say,the clan was very well fed!To train,I often killed the prey that we ate.Sometimes I would kill large game all by myself.But,the hardest thing was patience.To lie and wait until the food came to you."

"After many more years of this business,I was a pretty elite saber.I figured that I would only have one more day of training and I would be done.But you're never done.And so,I set out into the forest.There was something different in the air,I could feel it.Something...something burning.Something that could never be put out.I closed my eyes,trying to figure out where this was comming from.And then something knocked the air right out of me,and I fell to me side.In a flash,I saw something in my head.It was...its was my brother!My eldest brother,the strongest and most feared of all my siblings.He looked like father,but his stripes looked quick and sharp,like pin points.His eyes were bright orange with flecks of red.He was truly a sight to be seen.But,I hadn't seen him in so long.He always was the one hurting me when I was younger..And...I saw him,and me...His large paws were engulfed in flames that went high enough to lap at his shoulders.And me,I was standing,looking fierce as ever."

"I didn't know how long this was,but finally I could open my eyes.I didn't know what had just happened.Had I seen the future?I didn't know that either.I could still smell the burning,it seemed to be caked into my nostrils now.My heart was beating faster as the burning got closer,I could hear the crackling and snapping of it.By now,I knew it wasnt the forest burning.'Who's there!?' I shouted,and I heard the voice of my brother.'I've heard that you've been training,no stripe.'He said to me,as he came out from the thicket of forest.His paws were in flames,the fire lapping at his ankles.I told him that,yes I have trained.And asked why he was here.'Think you're the best,no stripe?' He was getting angry now.He stepped closer,I could see his bright orange eyes,but I saw farther.Into him,I saw the fire under his skin.'Think you're finally better than your brother!?'I always wanted to just be better than him when we were younger.The flames from his paws got higher.'You don't know what your doing!' I shouted at him,but it didn't faze him.He stepped closer again,his ears pinning back against his skull.'You will never be better than me.You...You're just a stupid kitten with no direction.No stripes.No element.You're nothing!Your like a drop of water next to raging waterfall!'He must have gotten inside of my head,because I got very angry with him.It felt like I was that tiny cub again.'No!'I shouted.I leaped at him,but it was a stupid idea."

"He wrapped his paws around me,his flaming claws searing into my back.I yowled in anger and pain,but I delivered a bite into his shoulder.I couldn't take this.I got away from his grasp,trying to save myself from the burning embers of his wrath.And there we stood.We stared,our eyes meeting.My turqiouse and his bright orange.My brother's flames grew stronger until they were at his shoulders.And it hit me that I had seen the future.My training got me to be very patient.My brother was unpredictable,he wouldn't wait for anything.We stood for a few minutes in a silent battle of wills,until he finally cracked.He leaped at me with all his strength,fire singing my fur.We wrestled and rolled,fighting to no avial.'Brother,you're fighting for something that you will never know!' I told him through clenched teeth as he held me down.He said nothing,and I raked my hind claws against his belly.When I had entered the forest,it was sundown.Now it was pitch black darkness and the only light was my brother.The fire illuminated his face and showed his ludicrous expression."

"By now,we couldn't go on for much longer.His flame was dying down.He had used up too much energy too fast,and he started to back away.'No!'I said,'You started this,you have to finish it.Dont you want to be the best,brother?'I told him,a grin going onto my face.He growled at me,but he kept walking.He was out of breath,I couldn't see well anymore,his flames were completely gone.He couldn't leave.He couldn't walk away from this.He was bleeding terribly,but so I was I.And my fur was singed,my skin burned in a few places.I growled loudly,slaming my paw onto the ground in anger and fustration.And then something happened.A blinding glow came from my paw,the glow went up my body,tracing over my skin and fur,onto my face.I closed my eyes,this pain was unbearable.I opened my eyes enough to see a bright,glowing circle form around my and my brother.Designs I had never seen before filled the circle,the glow brightening the night.I felt powerful.This power of my own design cause me,the circle,and my eyes to shine.The light of the circle was cast into the sky.It was celestial sight you had to see to believe."

"My brother was scared now.I could see it.And now I knew.I was better than my brother.My power was unmatched to his.He tried to back away,but this forgien circle kept him bound inside.I lept at him,my glowing body showing the fear on his face.'Brother,your death was of your own design.'I whispered,pressing my forehead to his.A white light transfered into him,you could see it in his mouth and eyes.And then he was gone.Evaporated into nothing.The circle I had created now disapeared,the glowing markings on me faded away,leaving stripes on my body.And I fell to the ground,this power had taken all of my strength."

"I awoke in the forest,my brother gone.I stood clumisly,and then caught sight of my forearm.It had..stripes!I was so happy that I turned in circles,trying to look at my sides and I saw them.Stripes.I relized that the stripes were the design that was in the circle.And now I remembered that my brother....he was gone.He brought his own death apon him,but I still felt like it was me that caused everything.And now...now I am still trying to figure out what happened to him.Why I have this new pyschic power..."
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Re: Apsogos

Postby Lions » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:10 am

looks so..... perfect!
I will never doubt your ability to draw, but also to color!
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Re: Apsogos

Postby 'paradox » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:12 am

LIES.I had to ref all of his stripes.And I had to change the shading because people don't like shading with color now a days?I changed it to purple,whatever.

Hey,can you read the color codes in the little color swabs?
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Re: Apsogos

Postby Lions » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:16 am

So, it still looks amazing, refed or not.
Hmm, not really xD
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Re: Apsogos

Postby 'paradox » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:19 am

PPFFFF IM SO STUPID.
I forgot to post his form,but its posted now.Read it if you wanna <33

Lol,CLOSE ENOUGH.You'll read his color codes if you want to.Strain your eyes,gosh darnit.

P.S. If someone really wanted them and you couldn't read it tell me and I can just PM it to you.
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Re: Apsogos

Postby Lions » Sat Oct 15, 2011 10:20 am

Yeah, ill be reading in an out while I color Cosmis in you amazing lines!!
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Re: Apsogos

Postby Tundra » Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:39 am

you know..oddly..i just realized how similar Fiota's and Apsogos's history's are. Both starting basically with no stripes, gain powers in a fight..and both kill something close to them...just..with Fiota it was a lot of things close to her..her entire Pride...wow..such a lovely pair XD
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Re: Apsogos

Postby 'paradox » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:38 am

Really?{still hasnt read all of Fiota's history}Im up to the part in her history where she runs away from the earth saber.

You know,when they have cubs,which will probably be a while from now,they are going to have some fiesty crazy cubs,xD.Fiota with her attitude,and Aps with this 'snap' thing.Cause he'll snap at you the moment you say anything about him or his family.

I think most of the cubs might be fire though,cause fire runs in Aps family and Fiota is a fire saber.

They're gonna be so cute!I can't wait.<333But I think KaiKen is going first,then I think you have to choose a month or whatever for you to go.

This is really long. Bl
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Re: Apsogos

Postby Tundra » Thu Nov 10, 2011 10:39 am

`nievegato wrote:Really?{still hasnt read all of Fiota's history}Im up to the part in her history where she runs away from the earth saber.

You know,when they have cubs,which will probably be a while from now,they are going to have some fiesty crazy cubs,xD.Fiota with her attitude,and Aps with this 'snap' thing.Cause he'll snap at you the moment you say anything about him or his family.

I think most of the cubs might be fire though,cause fire runs in Aps family and Fiota is a fire saber.

They're gonna be so cute!I can't wait.<333But I think KaiKen is going first,then I think you have to choose a month or whatever for you to go.

This is really long. Bl


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