okay... uhm I can't decide between

and this
it's not that I'm NOT into your design... I just find some markings a bit messy...
I really love how the adults wing turned out (except the grey markings... they aren't clear enough...)
And I really like the idea..
maybe one or two tips how you could help me to come to the decision of a

(cause I really don't wanna give you the other... ):
did you use the smoothing tool? I'll allways put it on 75% or more (not more than 85 or you can't draw properly ^^)
try to make small and filigran markings like stripes or facial marking in an extra layer... like this you can easily sharpen them with the eraser brush ^^
and... well that's it =)