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Who should Lux end up with in the end?

Derek
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34%
Maro
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17%
Shay
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31%
Nobody
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18%
 
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Zaphara1 » Mon Oct 24, 2011 1:40 pm

That's awesome! :clap: I can't wait for more!
Don't judge a thing 'til you know what's inside it; Don't push me I'll fight it; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; If you can't catch a wave then you're never gonna ride it; Ya can't come uninvited; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; You can't take me I'm free!! (You Can't Take Me, by Brian Adams, from the movie Spirit, Stallion of the Cimarron)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Pounce the Cat » Mon Oct 24, 2011 5:08 pm

This is awesome! Write more soon, please!
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby proud.little.wolf » Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:00 am

Lol more coming your way!

Dear SJ,

I sat there, huddled in that alley for what seemed like hours. The sun was starting to set, and Nox City is even more unsafe at night than in it is during the day. I buried my face in my duffel bag, hoping to block out all the scary shadows and voices that began to surround me.
"Get up!" a voice commanded. I looked up and saw that it was Dark Brown again, his eyes menacing. I shot upright, nearly dropping my bag.
"Where are we going?" I asked as he started leading me out of the alley.
"You'll see," he growled in reply, falling behind me and holding a dagger to my back.
We walked. And we walked. And we walked some more. We avoided the busy streets, clinging to the shadows so that nobody would see us. Did I mention we walked a lot?
Finally, we stopped at an abandoned two-story house at the edge of a large suburban area. The dilapidated structure looked like it was about to collapse, and I started to feel sick.
Dark Brown guided me up the steps and onto the front porch, where he reached out a paw to open the door from behind me. I did the unthinkable then: I bit him.
My teeth sank into his arm and he let out a cry of pain, nearly jabbing the dagger into my back if I hadn't moved in time. As he stood there, clutching his arm and cursing, I whirled my duffel bag around and whacked him hard in the gut. He feel to the ground with a sickening thud.
While my assailant was still reeling, a huge dog barged outside, his eyes full of hate and anger. We locked gazes, and then he pulled out a gun.
"Don't move," he snarled."Or I'll shoot." He moved toward Dark Brown and helped him to his paws. When Dark Brown looked up, Big Dog raised a paw and brought it across his face, sending the gang member back to the dew-soaked grass.
Big Dog, satisfied with his work, sauntered over to me and gestured toward the house.
"After you," he said, and as I started walking toward the door, he pressed the gun against my back, ready to shoot if I tried anything.
He pushed me upstairs (yeah, it's possible to push someone UP stairs) and into this small bedroom. Only, there was no bed. No furniture at all. Just bloodstains on the wall and floor....

I gotta go, SJ. Things are getting out of hand at the moment.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby xxazul63xx » Tue Oct 25, 2011 8:19 am

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! suspense! Your killing me here!
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Zaphara1 » Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:05 am

The suspense!! Please write more!! This is awesome!
Don't judge a thing 'til you know what's inside it; Don't push me I'll fight it; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; If you can't catch a wave then you're never gonna ride it; Ya can't come uninvited; Never gonna give in never gonna give it up no; You can't take me I'm free!! (You Can't Take Me, by Brian Adams, from the movie Spirit, Stallion of the Cimarron)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby ~Evenstar~ » Tue Oct 25, 2011 11:41 am

Yes! Please do write more SOON!!! I love it so far ^^
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I tell you, I tell you, the Dragonborn comes


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Believe, believe, the Dragonborn comes


It’s an end to the evil, of all Skyrim's foes


Beware, beware, the Dragonborn comes


For the darkness has passed, and the legend yet grows


You'll know, you'll know, the Dragonborn's come.

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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Pounce the Cat » Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:26 pm

Why did you stop there?! DX
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby proud.little.wolf » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:23 am

XD Alright alright! Here comes more!

Dear SJ,

Well, turns out that things got hectic. I heard shuffling outside the room; sounds in the hallway that sounded like Big Dog and Dark Brown were at it again. I peeked out the door and saw them smacking each other around, cursing and dodging punches.
Finally they broke apart and stood at opposite sides of the hall.
"Dang it, Jerry," growled Big Dog. "I told you not to let our victims outwit us. And look what you did! That little show out in the yard disappointed me, you stupid cur."
I winced at the dog's harsh words, but was awed when "Jerry" replied coolly: "Yeah well, you should've known by now that your gang isn't perfect. Including me."
Big Dog looked like he wanted to slap Jerry again, but he refrained.
"Your mouth is gonna get ya in big trouble someday, Jer," he said, stuffing his paws in his pockets.
Jerry shrugged and stared at the door to my little room.
"I think our prisoner is watching us," he said, starting for the door.
I gasped and backed up, sliding to the floor when my back hit the wall. Jerry and Big Dog came barging in, their teeth bared.

Sorry I can't write more, SJ, but they're about to kill meeeee!
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby xxazul63xx » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:26 am

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US! WHY!
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby proud.little.wolf » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:32 am

xxazul63xx wrote:AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US! WHY!


Hehe, it is my job, dear reader. xD
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