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by Ineedatribal » Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:06 pm
TigressJaguiar wrote:Just a short little story I wrote late at night and just now typed on a computer. It's sort of depressing.
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Emberwind and Ashstorm
Granddaughter and Grandfather
Hunter and PreyEmberwind ran through the forest at a quick pase. Soon she stopped, scanning the ground for any sign of the trator. A strand of grey fir was caught in a bush. It still held his sent. She contined moving, following his tracks. Soon she came across a cave. Some of the rocks at the cave's mouth were streaked with blood. She sniffed them. Yes, he had been here. She entered the cave.
"Please don't kill me." He pleaded from the dephs of the cave. The trator was trapped, Ember could hear his claws scratch the back of the cave.
"Ashstorm." She growled. "It is the will of the clan. You must die, you trator."
"Oh Emberwind, how much you have changed." Ashstorm said. He walked out from the dephs of the cave and Emberwind gasped. She had not seen what the other wolves had done as they drove their disgraced Alpha from the clan. He was scarred and had a gaping wound on his flank. He smiled at her. "I remember when you were just a little pup, how we would play games and I would let you ride around on my back. I miss those times."
A tear dripped from Emberwind's eye. "I still love you grandfather, but I must do this."
And with that she ended his life.
Its just so... depressing. I don't know why I wrote it...
I need to agree on that.
It's also amazing. I liked the story.^^
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by . Delirium . » Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:53 pm

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I was thinking about her
Thinking bout me
Thinkin bout us
What we gunna be?
Open my eyes,
it was only just a dream...
So I travel back
down that road
Will she come back?
No one knows
I realize
It was only just a dream.
"You've been fighting again..." she didn't even have to ask. It was true. "Don't just sit there Michael, why won't you stop? It's killing you. I hate it." She didn't try to blink away the tears this time. I caressed her, my Leia. I felt her fear, and the pain that lingered from the day's fights.
"Leia, baby, you know I have to."
"No, you don't! I don't care about the money, Michael!" she tore away from me. "I'm done, I can't take the stress anymore."
"Please, don't be like this," I begged her, pulling her back into my arms. She buried her face into my chest, and I could feel her repressed sobs. It broke my heart. "Soon I'll have enough, and we can settle down finally, then I will be done." Pulling her chin up gently, I looked into her pine green eyes, and kissed her. She kissed back. And that moment, I felt all my pain, gone, she was warm, loving, compassionate. The only thing I ever desired in my life. And in another moment, it was all ripped away from me as she pushed away.
"Goodbye, Michael," her eyes met mine, and all I could do is beg, but something about her gaze stopped me. This was her decision.
"Leia-don't," I didn't mean to do it, but I grabbed her arm pleaingly. "Everything I do is for you. I love you, baby."
"If you love me," she cried, "let me go."
I swallowed. Hard. So, this was it, the end. I let go of her arm, and watched as she walked out the door, and dissapeared down the street, taking everything we ever dreamed of with her. I was at the top and now its like I'm in the basement
Number 1 spot, Now she find her a replacement
I swear now I can't take it
Knowing somebody's got my baby
Now you ain't around, baby I can't think
I shoulda put it down, shoulda got that ring
Cuz I can still feel it in the air
See her pretty face, run my fingers through her hair
My love of my life, My shawty, my wife
She left me, Im tied.
Cuz I knew that it just ain't rightI sat on the edge of our my bed, burying my head in my hands. Everything I ever did was for her, every fight, every blow, cut, bruise, broken bone. It was all for her, to support her. I just wanted to give her everything, and instead, I caused her misery. I hated myself for it. Pulling the box out of my pocket, the one I bought today, I wished that I would never had done it. Never fought. It was too late, even opening the box, I knew it was too late. A gorgeous diamond crowned by amythests, her birthstone. If you ever loved somebody put your hands up
If you ever loved somebody put your hands up
And now they're gone and you wish you could give them everything
She sat across from me in the small coffee shop, idly stirring her cappuccino. She didn't want to be here, but I couldn't take my eyes off her.
"Leia, I'm sorry."
She rolled her eyes "Look Michael, I don't want to he-"
"Just listen," I told her. " I was wrong, about everything. Fighting was the worst decision, and I was too blinded by winning to see how it was hurting you. I thought, by fighting, I could give you everything, I was wrong. I didn'tgive you one thing." I got out of my chair and knealt down beside hers. Heads turned to watch.
"Leia, baby, will you forgive everything I've done, and marry me? Please?" I searched her eyes, which flickered with hope, but then grew dim once more. She stood up.
"I'm sorry Michael, but I've moved on." she walked past, leaving me knealing there, with all eyes of the room on me. Hey, she was so easy to love
But wait, I guess that love wasn't enough
I'm going through it everytime that I'm alone
And now I'm wishin' wishin' she'd pick up the phone
But she made a decision that she wanted to move on
Cause I was wrong.
I gasped, sweat was beading on my forehead. Fratically, I looked around me, trying to find out where I was. I was in bed, and Leia was next to me, I moved over to embrace her, and felt a sharp pain in my thigh. I reached into my pocket, pulling out a small black box.
"Leia," I whispered, "I'll stop, right now." I was thinking about her
Thinking bout me
Thinkin bout us
What we gunna be?
Open my eyes,
it was only just a dream...
So I travel back
down that road
Will she come back?
No one knows
I realize
It was only just a dream.Lyrics by Nelly,
Just a Dream
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by Inatae » Thu Oct 20, 2011 2:59 pm
. Shawna . wrote:
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I was thinking about her
Thinking bout me
Thinkin bout us
What we gunna be?
Open my eyes,
it was only just a dream...
So I travel back
down that road
Will she come back?
No one knows
I realize
It was only just a dream.
"You've been fighting again..." she didn't even have to ask. It was true. "Don't just sit there Michael, why won't you stop? It's killing you. I hate it." She didn't try to blink away the tears this time. I caressed her, my Leia. I felt her fear, and the pain that lingered from the day's fights.
"Leia, baby, you know I have to."
"No, you don't! I don't care about the money, Michael!" she tore away from me. "I'm done, I can't take the stress anymore."
"Please, don't be like this," I begged her, pulling her back into my arms. She buried her face into my chest, and I could feel her repressed sobs. It broke my heart. "Soon I'll have enough, and we can settle down finally, then I will be done." Pulling her chin up gently, I looked into her pine green eyes, and kissed her. She kissed back. And that moment, I felt all my pain, gone, she was warm, loving, compassionate. The only thing I ever desired in my life. And in another moment, it was all ripped away from me as she pushed away.
"Goodbye, Michael," her eyes met mine, and all I could do is beg, but something about her gaze stopped me. This was her decision.
"Leia-don't," I didn't mean to do it, but I grabbed her arm pleaingly. "Everything I do is for you. I love you, baby."
"If you love me," she cried, "let me go."
I swallowed. Hard. So, this was it, the end. I let go of her arm, and watched as she walked out the door, and dissapeared down the street, taking everything we ever dreamed of with her. I was at the top and now its like I'm in the basement
Number 1 spot, Now she find her a replacement
I swear now I can't take it
Knowing somebody's got my baby
Now you ain't around, baby I can't think
I shoulda put it down, shoulda got that ring
Cuz I can still feel it in the air
See her pretty face, run my fingers through her hair
My love of my life, My shawty, my wife
She left me, Im tied.
Cuz I knew that it just ain't rightI sat on the edge of our my bed, burying my head in my hands. Everything I ever did was for her, every fight, every blow, cut, bruise, broken bone. It was all for her, to support her. I just wanted to give her everything, and instead, I caused her misery. I hated myself for it. Pulling the box out of my pocket, the one I bought today, I wished that I would never had done it. Never fought. It was too late, even opening the box, I knew it was too late. A gorgeous diamond crowned by amythests, her birthstone. If you ever loved somebody put your hands up
If you ever loved somebody put your hands up
And now they're gone and you wish you could give them everything
She sat across from me in the small coffee shop, idly stirring her cappuccino. She didn't want to be here, but I couldn't take my eyes off her.
"Leia, I'm sorry."
She rolled her eyes "Look Michael, I don't want to he-"
"Just listen," I told her. " I was wrong, about everything. Fighting was the worst decision, and I was too blinded by winning to see how it was hurting you. I thought, by fighting, I could give you everything, I was wrong. I didn'tgive you one thing." I got out of my chair and knealt down beside hers. Heads turned to watch.
"Leia, baby, will you forgive everything I've done, and marry me? Please?" I searched her eyes, which flickered with hope, but then grew dim once more. She stood up.
"I'm sorry Michael, but I've moved on." she walked past, leaving me knealing there, with all eyes of the room on me. Hey, she was so easy to love
But wait, I guess that love wasn't enough
I'm going through it everytime that I'm alone
And now I'm wishin' wishin' she'd pick up the phone
But she made a decision that she wanted to move on
Cause I was wrong.
I gasped, sweat was beading on my forehead. Fratically, I looked around me, trying to find out where I was. I was in bed, and Leia was next to me, I moved over to embrace her, and felt a sharp pain in my thigh. I reached into my pocket, pulling out a small black box.
"Leia," I whispered, "I'll stop, right now." I was thinking about her
Thinking bout me
Thinkin bout us
What we gunna be?
Open my eyes,
it was only just a dream...
So I travel back
down that road
Will she come back?
No one knows
I realize
It was only just a dream.Lyrics by Nelly,
Just a Dream
Love it. <3
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by . Delirium . » Thu Oct 20, 2011 3:00 pm
whiteouthorizon wrote:. Shawna . wrote:
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I was thinking about her
Thinking bout me
Thinkin bout us
What we gunna be?
Open my eyes,
it was only just a dream...
So I travel back
down that road
Will she come back?
No one knows
I realize
It was only just a dream.
"You've been fighting again..." she didn't even have to ask. It was true. "Don't just sit there Michael, why won't you stop? It's killing you. I hate it." She didn't try to blink away the tears this time. I caressed her, my Leia. I felt her fear, and the pain that lingered from the day's fights.
"Leia, baby, you know I have to."
"No, you don't! I don't care about the money, Michael!" she tore away from me. "I'm done, I can't take the stress anymore."
"Please, don't be like this," I begged her, pulling her back into my arms. She buried her face into my chest, and I could feel her repressed sobs. It broke my heart. "Soon I'll have enough, and we can settle down finally, then I will be done." Pulling her chin up gently, I looked into her pine green eyes, and kissed her. She kissed back. And that moment, I felt all my pain, gone, she was warm, loving, compassionate. The only thing I ever desired in my life. And in another moment, it was all ripped away from me as she pushed away.
"Goodbye, Michael," her eyes met mine, and all I could do is beg, but something about her gaze stopped me. This was her decision.
"Leia-don't," I didn't mean to do it, but I grabbed her arm pleaingly. "Everything I do is for you. I love you, baby."
"If you love me," she cried, "let me go."
I swallowed. Hard. So, this was it, the end. I let go of her arm, and watched as she walked out the door, and dissapeared down the street, taking everything we ever dreamed of with her. I was at the top and now its like I'm in the basement
Number 1 spot, Now she find her a replacement
I swear now I can't take it
Knowing somebody's got my baby
Now you ain't around, baby I can't think
I shoulda put it down, shoulda got that ring
Cuz I can still feel it in the air
See her pretty face, run my fingers through her hair
My love of my life, My shawty, my wife
She left me, Im tied.
Cuz I knew that it just ain't rightI sat on the edge of our my bed, burying my head in my hands. Everything I ever did was for her, every fight, every blow, cut, bruise, broken bone. It was all for her, to support her. I just wanted to give her everything, and instead, I caused her misery. I hated myself for it. Pulling the box out of my pocket, the one I bought today, I wished that I would never had done it. Never fought. It was too late, even opening the box, I knew it was too late. A gorgeous diamond crowned by amythests, her birthstone. If you ever loved somebody put your hands up
If you ever loved somebody put your hands up
And now they're gone and you wish you could give them everything
She sat across from me in the small coffee shop, idly stirring her cappuccino. She didn't want to be here, but I couldn't take my eyes off her.
"Leia, I'm sorry."
She rolled her eyes "Look Michael, I don't want to he-"
"Just listen," I told her. " I was wrong, about everything. Fighting was the worst decision, and I was too blinded by winning to see how it was hurting you. I thought, by fighting, I could give you everything, I was wrong. I didn'tgive you one thing." I got out of my chair and knealt down beside hers. Heads turned to watch.
"Leia, baby, will you forgive everything I've done, and marry me? Please?" I searched her eyes, which flickered with hope, but then grew dim once more. She stood up.
"I'm sorry Michael, but I've moved on." she walked past, leaving me knealing there, with all eyes of the room on me. Hey, she was so easy to love
But wait, I guess that love wasn't enough
I'm going through it everytime that I'm alone
And now I'm wishin' wishin' she'd pick up the phone
But she made a decision that she wanted to move on
Cause I was wrong.
I gasped, sweat was beading on my forehead. Fratically, I looked around me, trying to find out where I was. I was in bed, and Leia was next to me, I moved over to embrace her, and felt a sharp pain in my thigh. I reached into my pocket, pulling out a small black box.
"Leia," I whispered, "I'll stop, right now." I was thinking about her
Thinking bout me
Thinkin bout us
What we gunna be?
Open my eyes,
it was only just a dream...
So I travel back
down that road
Will she come back?
No one knows
I realize
It was only just a dream.Lyrics by Nelly,
Just a Dream
Love it. <3
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by honeydukes » Thu Oct 20, 2011 3:09 pm
Tawny224 wrote:Just a little story I wrote based on The Hunger Games. Morbid so beware.

(Alania) (The Little Girl)
She looked up, her brown hair falling matted around her face as she stared into the sky. A sky of soft white clouds, a sky of blue birds, the ones with the sharp teeth, the ones who kill. Her green eyes that once glimmered with happiness were now dull. The games had killed her spirit. Around her blood coated the grass, her brother who joined the games with her lay at her feet, his blue eyes wide and glazed, her own knife sticking from his chest. She looked over to see a twelve year old girl stammering to her feet, her whole body shaking. The girl clutched a hand to her shoulder which had been pierced by an arrow. Alania stepped back as she stared into the determined gold eyes of this little girl, whose family no doubt were screaming with joy as she gripped onto the life with cold fingers.
“Help me” the wracking whisper of the girl filled the air as she stared at Alania.
Suddenly the girl seemed less like a threat and more of a small child with a want to live, something everyone deserved. Alania stepped towards her and soon was rushing to where the girl stood, Alania noticed her whole body shaking and her lips turning blue.
“Its okay..” soothed Alania.
The girl grinned at her, blood covererd her teeth. Alania stepped back in surprise as the twelve year old whipped out a dagger and plunged it into Alania’s stomach. Pain blossomed through her body as she spit out blood.
Then the little girl dropped the dagger and stared up into the sky, tears streaking down her face.
“I’m coming home Mommy! We can all live in a grand house and Sam won’t ever have too little to eat,” the girl smiled up as she stared at where she knew the cameras would be watching her. “I’m coming h-”
The little girls excited speech was ended abruptly as Alania shoved the sword through her heart.
She watched as the little girl crumpled, her mouth still open to form the words that would never leave her lips. A tear splashed onto the little girls forehead as Alania leaned over her, reaching down gingerly Alania closed the little girls eyes for the last time. As she closed her own eyes the last thing she whispered to herself was “No one wins the Hunger Games” then she collapsed and drifted into darkness.
Sorry if you don't like it D: It's not very good.
That's amazing <3
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by Tawny224 » Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:14 pm
♪♫Ħαʋитιиɢ♪мɛℓσ∂ʏ♫♪ wrote:Tawny224 wrote:Just a little story I wrote based on The Hunger Games. Morbid so beware.

(Alania) (The Little Girl)
She looked up, her brown hair falling matted around her face as she stared into the sky. A sky of soft white clouds, a sky of blue birds, the ones with the sharp teeth, the ones who kill. Her green eyes that once glimmered with happiness were now dull. The games had killed her spirit. Around her blood coated the grass, her brother who joined the games with her lay at her feet, his blue eyes wide and glazed, her own knife sticking from his chest. She looked over to see a twelve year old girl stammering to her feet, her whole body shaking. The girl clutched a hand to her shoulder which had been pierced by an arrow. Alania stepped back as she stared into the determined gold eyes of this little girl, whose family no doubt were screaming with joy as she gripped onto the life with cold fingers.
“Help me” the wracking whisper of the girl filled the air as she stared at Alania.
Suddenly the girl seemed less like a threat and more of a small child with a want to live, something everyone deserved. Alania stepped towards her and soon was rushing to where the girl stood, Alania noticed her whole body shaking and her lips turning blue.
“Its okay..” soothed Alania.
The girl grinned at her, blood covererd her teeth. Alania stepped back in surprise as the twelve year old whipped out a dagger and plunged it into Alania’s stomach. Pain blossomed through her body as she spit out blood.
Then the little girl dropped the dagger and stared up into the sky, tears streaking down her face.
“I’m coming home Mommy! We can all live in a grand house and Sam won’t ever have too little to eat,” the girl smiled up as she stared at where she knew the cameras would be watching her. “I’m coming h-”
The little girls excited speech was ended abruptly as Alania shoved the sword through her heart.
She watched as the little girl crumpled, her mouth still open to form the words that would never leave her lips. A tear splashed onto the little girls forehead as Alania leaned over her, reaching down gingerly Alania closed the little girls eyes for the last time. As she closed her own eyes the last thing she whispered to herself was “No one wins the Hunger Games” then she collapsed and drifted into darkness.
Sorry if you don't like it D: It's not very good.
That's amazing <3
Aww thanks soo much <3
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by Alina_Mau » Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:27 pm

Autumn ♂ - ~~~~~ -
Twilight ♀
Their lives revolved around the end of things
The end of vibrancy, the end of light
But as they both fell to darkness
They chose to fall together
And a love was born anew
Well I'm not much for poetry as I'm sure you could tell X3 but I felt like arranging something for my moody patch pup XD I hope you guys like them o.o
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