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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby originals » Mon Oct 17, 2011 3:38 pm

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-----"Captain Kay here, Seargent. At ease." I saluted him, after taking my short march forward i had thankfully been toward the front of the crowd, so I had less to march. My hands swung at my side, thumbs down, and I muttered to myself "Left, left, left right left," as I marched. I stopped in "at-ease" position, and realised I might end up adding a light Air Force twist, thanks to my training in CAP. "Seargent Solen, report here please. Your mission is to calm down, and breathe. In and out, Seargent." I laughed at myself, giving such odd commands, then snapped back to attention. I gave myself a quick position assessment, then looked back at him. He was really an amazing creature, and so perfect for my lifestyle. He'd be promoted quickly through the ranks, and maybe I could get him to sign up for the Armed Forces of some branch.
-----"Seargent Solen, I request that you come home with me, and let me be your captain. That is a request, not an order, Seargent." I saluted him, and waited, hoping he would salute me back.


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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby tamed. » Mon Oct 17, 2011 4:16 pm

Ohhh~ A lesser bird of paradise. <3

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby ToastWhisperer » Mon Oct 17, 2011 8:58 pm

I'll be filling out for him aswell <3 My brother is going to be in the marines, so this lil' guy would fit in wonderfully in my home.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby *~*BurningStars*~* » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:28 am

Reserved for woo<333 this is like the first Ahz I had a special connection to since Eithe<333
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby Livalathia » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:38 am

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The vortex started to spin again, the light within it changing from a simple glow to a steady beat. A few seconds later, a brown and green and white ahzenai emerged. Solen marched in step with the light from the vortex, his head and tail high and proud, as if he was on parade. He continued marching through the crowd of suitors who awaited him below. If they were so rude as to get in his way, he firmly stepped over them or pushed them aside. He didn't stop, hesitate, or wait, he simply marched on until he reached Valcyon. Then he stopped, standing still. "Sergeant Solen reporting for duty, Valcyon SIR!" he shouted as a good soldier should, sitting down to he could salute Valcyon.

"Excellent, Sergeant Solen," Valcyon replied, getting into the soldierly spirit. "I have your marching orders. You are to report to your new captain at once. Now," he took a deep breath, and shouted like a drill sergeant: "ABOUT FACE! FORWARD MARCH!"

Solen saluted Valcyon once more, and promptly obeyed orders until he had marched himself back to the group of suitors.

There he sat down again, saluted no one in particular, and said, "Sergeant Solen reporting for duty, Captain-" he paused, and looked around at all the faces as if seeing them for the first time. "Captain?" He asked, sounding a little nervous. Which one of these was his captain? "CAPTAIN?!?" he shouted again, looking about frantically and sounding nervous.

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October was sitting quietly next to Chase and Zeoryler when she head a sudden co motion coming from what seemed to be a new Ahzenai talking with Valcyon. She laughed quietly to herself when she heard Valcyon shout like a drill sergeant at the new Ahzenai who was supposedly a 'Sergeant'. That made her smile and when she heard the males voice sounding a little frantic and scared as he basically shouted out for his 'Captain' she smiled a bit and stood up. Who was to say a female couldn't play the role of a Captain? The challenge made her feel right at home as she brushed her tail across the ground and walked forward, pushing through all the people in front of her as she came to stand in front of the male who's name was Solen it seemed. "At ease Sergeant" October said in a commander like tone as she paced around the male, looking him over.
Solens colors were odd to her but she let it slide as she came back to stand in front of him, only to have Chase next to her now and she looked up at him and gave him an amused look. Chase in turned rolled his eyes and saluted Solen like a true army man would before he relaxed and smiled. October grinned then turned to Solen and sat back on her haunches and watched him closely as she started to speak "My name is October, and that is my friend Chase" she said confidently as Chase nodded his greeting. "I'm wondering how many here claimed to be your captain Sergeant Solen" October said out loud, looking the male Ahzenai in the face, "None of them can really be your 'caption' unless you chose to travel with them". Chase nodded in agreement and looked around at most of the people who looked eager to try to woo this male.
After a moment October spoke again "Of course nor I or Chase is a General in any army and I'm not going to lie to you. I was just testing out my acting a little bit" she said, seeming to be quite happy with herself. "Heck I doubt that half of the people here are really Generals or the general you are supposedly looking for. They are just happening to tell you that they are a general to get you to like them more." Chase rolled his eyes at Octobers comment and sighed "I wouldnt go that far, but I'm not going to stand here and tell you I'm a general when I'm not. In fact I'm a demon who wanted to be in the army but never got around to it" Chase said quietly and October looked up at him with a small smile.
"I know you probably like the army right? Maybe we can go get some type of job with them together" Chase said suggestively as he seemed to think it over a little. October's tail twitched as more people started to move closer, "Keep us in mind. We'll be glad to have you traveling with us and maybe even doing some army type stuff with you if that's what you really want." With that October saluted Solen and stood up and turned to walk back to where Zeoryler was sitting patiently waiting for her and Chase to come back.
Chase in turned saluted Solen as well and gave him a small smile "I suppose ill see you around Sergeant" he said before he turned on his heels and walked back to October and Zeoryler.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby Maddyoll » Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:26 am

I don't want to sound greedy but can I apply for both? I love Solen too D:
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Re: .

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:57 am

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The vortex started to spin again, the light within it changing from a simple glow to a steady beat. A few seconds later, a brown and green and white ahzenai emerged. Solen marched in step with the light from the vortex, his head and tail high and proud, as if he was on parade. He continued marching through the crowd of suitors who awaited him below. If they were so rude as to get in his way, he firmly stepped over them or pushed them aside. He didn't stop, hesitate, or wait, he simply marched on until he reached Valcyon. Then he stopped, standing still. "Sergeant Solen reporting for duty, Valcyon SIR!" he shouted as a good soldier should, sitting down to he could salute Valcyon.

"Excellent, Sergeant Solen," Valcyon replied, getting into the soldierly spirit. "I have your marching orders. You are to report to your new captain at once. Now," he took a deep breath, and shouted like a drill sargeant: "ABOUT FACE! FORWARD MARCH!"

Solen saluted Valcyon once more, and promptly obeyed orders until he had marched himself back to the group of suitors.

There he sat down again, saluted no one in particular, and said, "Sergeant Solen reporting for duty, Captain-" he paused, and looked around at all the faces as if seeing them for the first time. "Captain?" He asked, sounding a little nervous. Which one of these was his captain? "CAPTAIN?!?" he shouted again, looking about frantically and sounding nervous.


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Stepping out of the crowd, Grenadier smirked proudly. "At ease, soldier," he said, the Captain rank on his collar shining. "The name is Grenadier. Ironically, I am a Captain in the United States Air Force Canine Soldier program. And you're in luck, we're recruiting," he gave a toothy grin. "My handler is a Lieutenant Colonel and is here as well, she's resting over by the lake," he motioned with his muzzle to a tall woman with short-cropped brown hair in jeans and a camo bikini top resting near the water's edge, her long legs stretched out and her eyes closed. "She commands our battalion. We're currently 320 teams strong, a team consisting of a handler and their dog. So all in all we have 641 soldiers operating under mine and my handler's jurisdiction. My handler's SIC, or 'second-in-command' just lost his German Shepherd in Iraq and very nearly his own life because of a roadside bomb. After 8 months recovering from his injuries, he's ready to come back to the force. He himself is named John and is a First Lieutenant of the United States Air Force. He was unable to come with us as he's making another quick run through of basic training to restrengthen his body, and he's very excited to find a new partner. I'm sure you'd be perfect for him, and you'd love your job."

The border collie mix turned to look in the direction of the lake. "I must return to my handler, we'll be going running soon. I'll come back here afterwards to await yor decision. Oh, and my handler's name is Lt Col Amethyst Barr," Grenadier smiled. "If it is your choice, then I will look forward to having you on our team." Grenadier straightened and saluted back at Solen, then turned and casually walked over to his handler and sat beside her, Amethyst reaching up and scratching him behind the ears.

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby Onyxeva » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:21 pm

Maddyoll; You can apply for both, but you can't win both. xD
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby Pierce. » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:24 pm

How long will Clockwork be postponed?
Im a little anxious because i finished my form hehe c:
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Solen | Clockwork being postponed

Postby Onyxeva » Tue Oct 18, 2011 1:32 pm

He shouldn't be postponed for more then a couple days. I'll judge him after Solen.
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