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[ToastWhisperer]

I will be using Dawn again ^_^

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Username: ToastWhisperer.

Ahzenai you're applying for: Clockwork.

Short Woo: Dawn sat beneath the tree, eye's closed. She was resting up a bit. The sun felt nice against her face. A sudden, Clink, Clink, Clink sound rang out from across from her. She opened her eyes, to see a new Ahzenai. As he spoke, she stood up. "Hello! I'm here to find a new companion that can grab my interest. Someone that can support my interests and even would like to join me!"

She tilted her head sub-conciously, seeing him. He wore a brass colored mane, and his markings were quite interesting. Was that, wings, she saw? Interested in the new, but old Ahzenai, she crossed forward to him, forcing the nervous wave in her stomach to lay flat. She took a deep breath, and approached him.

"Hello, Clockwork." She said in a bold, but soft tone. She sat down next to him, laying on her belly the way he did. "I hear you like inventions, and I see your quite the tinker!" It was interesting, to see an Ahzenani working so well with his paws. "Im not much at tinkering and fixing objects, but Im sure you could teach me! I'd love to assist you in anyway I can, though, and come along on your travels." She stood to her feet, lightly brushing the dirt off her front. "I would provide all funds you needed. I'll be waiting right by the tree over there." She said, pointing in the direction of the tree she was speaking out. She gave him one last smile, waved, and walked over to the tree.

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: I love his style. I love steampunk fashion aswell, although I do not wear it. Im not once to take things apart, but depending on what is it, I like mechanics and trying to put things together if it interests me. I also love, love, LOVE art. It's a huge hobby of mine. His personality is unique. Serious, but fun-loving. I like that, aswell.

[jern.]

I just realized I cant get this one... Because I already have a custom... but i worked hard on this woo so.. I Will keep it up, just when judging ignore it

Username: .:~ Shiney Suicune ~:.


Ahzenai you're applying for:


Short Woo: (2-3 paragraphs is the minimum, 5 paragraphs max)

As the sun began to rise, it slowly shimmered through the windows of a small shack, lighting up the area and creeping along each wild and crazy invention. At the paper covered desk sat a young teenager, half covered in gadgets a papers his bronze hair was medium length and shaggy, it fell around his pale face messily. He slowly and peacefully blinked his eyes lazily they shimmered amber in the morning light, he smiled softly and his face was peaceful, at least for the moment.

He blinked, his amber eyes rounding after a moment, he quickly sat up frantically looking from side to side. With a loud gasp he jumped to his feet, after looking at the bronze clock that hung around his neck. He yelled in panic, his voice cracking from the stress "I'm gunna be late!!" He turned pushing past his chair, he ran weaving past his gadgets and inventions right out the door. A few seconds passes before he ran back in, scurrying to the table and scooping up as many papers as he could n his arms before he continued on his way out.

He ran down the streets as fast as he could, his bare feet slapping painfully against the pavement, he bed robes fluttering around him. He charged up to the door of the old university, just in time for the doors to close and lock. The man with navy overalls and a dusty cap looked at him and said with a sympathetic tone. "Sorry kid, The judges are gone... Come back next year." He nodded once before walking off. The boy stood in front of the doors, his eyes sadly flickering over the design of the ancient wood. Finally he slowly turned and began off, head low and hugging his blueprints close to his chest.

He wandered, thinking to himself, too sad to really watch where he walked. Shock split through him as he walked straight into someone, after apologizing repeatedly and getting curse at, he looked around. His heart almost stopped as he saw a large cat like creature standing not too far from him, he notice a person wooing him, almost convincing it to come with him. After the person finished the creature looked at him, his eyes widened and he quickly jumped up and stumbled over his words, speaking gibberish as he frantically began to try and pick up his papers.

After a moment he finally got himself together and he looked up at the creature and began. "U-uh Hello! Um Y-your names Clockwork name... Oh wow... heh thats such a awesome name.." He blinked wide eyes pausing for a moment than quickly began again while gripping his overload of blue prints closely. "OH, uh how rude, my names Arthur... Arthur Derik Brown. It would be REALLY awesome if you would consider joining me, I think we could have a lot of fun... uh.. I see you like gadgets, Well so do I! I'm a inventor, well.. not yet! Im still apprentice, but soon I will get my degree!! ... UH I will stop rambling now... But before I go, heres something i made I think you would like it." He quickly pulled out a shiny dagger fumbling over it and dropping all his papers one more before he quickly gave it to the ahzenai, he scrambled gathering all his papers than backed away.


Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: Not only do I LOVE his art design; the colors are so beautiful together and his markings not to drastic, yet just beautiful. But I also adore his personality, he is so unique. (Its actually kinda crazy because the character I used is actually one of my main characters XD)



Finally one that really gets my attenchion <3
Oh I am .:~ Wonrei ~:.

[Pierce.]

Username:
Tusk

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Ahzenai you're applying for:

The mountain lion sort of colored Ahzenai padded out of the forest, making himself comfortable on a low rock. Though he has a few odd markings. Wings on his shoulders, markings about his eyes and midsection. With him he dragged a couple of his latest inventions, which were not yet finished. He had decided to look for another companion, even though he loved living with Lyncher and the others. He would miss them terribly.

He wanted to find someone that could afford his hobbies and even help him! Someone that shared his interests. With a glance back the way he had come, simply positive that his old family is watching. To make sure that just the right person came to him. That was fine and he felt better with them hiding and watching. Clockwork shifted his frame lightly, looking over the other suitors and creatures. They all seemed confused about him. "Hello! I'm here to find a new companion that can grab my interest. Someone that can support my interests and even would like to join me!"

He spoke loudly enough to be heard, knowing that an array of people would try to woo him. He would not go with just anyone though. They had to meet his requirements. That could take care of him properly. With that said, he dropped down to his belly and started to tinker and mess with the items that he had brought with him. Waiting for those that would be trying to find a way to capture his attention.
Short summary of personality: Clockwork is a serious Ahzenai, with a taste for the steam-punk fashion. He loves to take apart appliances and see how they work. Then try to put them back together again. Half the time they don't work again, but that never deters him from trying. Clockwork also loves molding metal into art, even if they don't make sense. He is fiercely loyal to whoever can grab his attention.

Short Woo:
Written from Ocou's point of view.

I landed swiftly on one of the many tall plateaus in Ahzen. I pulled off my goggles and laid over the precipice, looking down. Dusting off the small amount of dirt from the blades from my large metallic wings, I noticed the shining parts a brown-colored Ahzenai carried with him. "He looks like a smart fellow" I said to myself, with the strong British accent many said I had, flying down to a lower and closer rock.

"Hello! I'm here to find a new companion that can grab my interest. Someone that can support my interests and even would like to join me!" The confused-looking creature announced.

"He must think that the ones who would try and woo him, would be no more than mediocre idiots." I thought to myself.

After the large creature dropped and started to tinker on his many inventions, I watched many try to impress him. In my opinion, no one was better than the other, and none were very good at all. Although some were a little amusing, I wouldn't trust merely a goldfish with them. One may think im being a bit snobbish, but its nothing more than pure honestly.

As night grew in Ahzen, the woos became less and less frequent. As all seemed quit, I flew down to the rock the animal was laying at. I removed my hat, "A pleasure to meet you sir, my name is Ocou".
I brushed my hair to the side of my head and took a closer look at the items he was busy working on. I noticed multiple circular pieces of metal with a smaller piece that seemed to fit into the rest. The smaller piece had two lines and was labeled in Roman numerals. "A watch?" I said under my breath. "Take mine" I said to the Ahzenai as I took off my watch and nudged it over to him, "Hopefully it will save you some time. You surely have some inventions more, important, than a simple watch". With a last single glance, I flew away, leaving the creature to work on his other, hopefully, more important inventions."

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Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
Ive loved steampunk forever and its honestly my favorite, genre if you will, of character. Clockwork displays this more than perfectly. I would also love to have Ocou a partner; they seem so perfect for each other. His design may not be the most pleasing to the eye, but its definitely one that stands out and is truly remarkable.

[anomaly.]

Ahzenai You Are Wooing:Clockwork
Woo:
I sit on the rock by the falls surronded by forest. My white smile beams onto the shower of water.The sun beats down on my blonde head. I smile and look around. The day had been lovely. I step off the rock to see an ahzenai. My mood plummets at thhe thought of reeves. He was the first one i had ever tried to speak to. This one was very nice. I really liked him. I step up to the ahzenai.I look at my feet. I shuffle them around nervous.
H-Hello there. ummm.... Would you like to go on a journies with me?I stare at my watch nervous about the time. I had a meeting to get to. I sigh. i was still very nervous. i jump around. i look up at him.
Oh yes i am angel.I say forgetting to tell him my name. i smile at him. I look aorund in my bag and pull out a sweater that i had painted. Some of my money and metal creations had fallen out. i quickly put them back in the hand made bag. My watch had stopped working yet again. after i took it apart and put it back togather it only worked once in a while.
UnFINISHED!!!!!

[*~SlyFox~*]

Username: *~SlyFox~*

Ahzenai you're applying for: Clockwork

Short Woo:
Katherine entered the cave that led to Ahzen,her cheeks and clothes are caked with motor oil.Unsure why she had come back to Ahzen,she failed many times at wooing creatures of any shape and size even kittens seem to keep away from her.Rejection was something she never got used to then again when your house is cluttered with metal and tools of all kinds who would want to live there.This time she did not bother to clean her oil covered face but she did clean her bright green goggles with her shirt then placed them back on her head kind of like a hairband.Maybe this time she could find a Ahzenai that shared her love for machines and would enjoy her company.Her eyes scanned the cave looking to see if any new Ahzenai had appeared then her eyes spotted a brown colored Ahzenai,'Hello! I'm here to find a new companion that can grab my interest. Someone that can support my interests and even would like to join me!' she heard the Ahzenai say to the crowd of people.She watched as the Ahzenai drop to his belly on a large rock and started to tinker with small bent chunks of metal."I bet i'll get Clockwork"she heard someone say as a small group passed her headed towards the sandy brown Ahzenai.Clockwork,what a strange name yet it seem to fit him as she watched him tinker with chunks of metal and iron.

He was perfect,she could tell maybe she could finally have a partner who shared her interest.She thought of the things she would say to him but her mind went blank,guess she would just have to 'wing it' as she calls it.Kathrine walked up to Clockwork with a shy smile,"Hello Clockwork,i'm names Katherine but i prefer to be called Sparky.I know its a weird nickname but i love it."she said then eyed his strange items he seemed to be putting together."I have to say your work with quiet strange i never seen someone who tries to make art with metal"she tilted her head slightly as if trying to see what he is trying to make."If you don't mind i would like to tell a little about myself.I am the owner of a junkyard but its clean unlike most junkyards and i make small machines out of the metal."she said as she took out a small black box out of her pocket."This was something i was working on but. . ."she went silent and pressed a small button on the box,it makes a soft 'click' and the box opens revealing a small metal humming bird but it has a few dents on it along with a few scourged marks on it."Sadly it catches fire whenever i turn it on but i am trying to fix that"she said a bit embarrassed."To tell the truth i don't spend money on metal because having a junkyard means i get all kinds of metal and its for free.I do polish the metal so it won't rust."she pressed the button again on the box and it closes."I know i can't offer much like other people but i can offer a wonderful friendship,tons of metal so you could make anything your heart desires and. . .maybe a partner who could help with your art"a small trusting smile appeared on her face."You could join me and we could make all kinds of things with the metal i have but its your choice not mine.Also its been a honor to talk to someone who has the same interest as me,i wish you luck with your wonderful art and in finding the perfect companion for yourself".Seeing other people coming towards Clockwork she backs away and sits on a large rock she takes out the black box she had shown Clockwork then began to tinker with.

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: I love his design and his personality.I never had a Ahzenai and after begin rejected by the Ahzenai i tried to woo it did hurt a little trying to woo another one but as people say 'Time heals all wounds'.I would be honored to be called a friend by Clockwork,i would cherish him and i will never return him.He would always have a special part of my heart with him even if i'm not chosen i would always remember him.Yes it does sound sappy but it is true.

[Arouria]

I have a question about returning Ahzenai ouo

I know that you can only go for it if you don't have an Ahzenai, but what if the Ahzenai is different lines? Does it still count as owning one?

So like with Clockwork, who is in the alternate lines, could people who do not have any of the alternate lines, but have an original, apply?
Just wondering ouo

[Onyxeva]

Arouria; Yes, it still counts as owning one. An Ahzenai is an Ahzenai no matter what lines it is on. xD

[Arouria]

Alright, thanks o3o

[Maddyoll]

No longer qualify x3 Please ignore when judging~♥

Clockwork looks interesting and amazing! ♥

Username:
Maddyoll

Ahzenai you're applying for:
Clockwork

Short Woo:

Earlier that week (before my woo)
"Dr. you can't be serious! This is a whole other species! We know nothing about them, you might get lost or worse!"
"Drew calm down. I can do this. I'm going to investigate these... Ahzenai."

Now (Note: This is Dr. (Dr. Angle) speaking~)
"I wonder where all the good ones are? The ones that I could tinker with and paint and remake things with? I need that kind. There must be somebody out there for me." I trudged through the grass until I came upon a couple different ahzenai. I wandered among them until I came upon a medium-sized ahzenai fiddling around with various tools. After several intervals of people applying for what turned out to be named Clockwork, I went up to him with my heart beating faster and faster; just like at the science fairs. I went up to Clockwork, and showed him my latest invention made out of an old can-opener.

I also showed him some of the more hi-tech inventions, and pictures of my laboratory and plans for more inventions. "I can provide you with anything you desire, I suppose." I said softly. "I have a small art room also, and a huge back yard. I love experimenting with household items like this used-to-be can opener; but I never seem to fit them back together properly. I would appriciate somebody to help me with my inventions, though. Please, take your time, and take this." I handed him a small gleaming dagger. "You can use it for many things besides fighting. I'll be over there, examining that tree. I'll be awaiting your descision."

I slowly trudged over to the tree, examining the leaves and mysterious fruit, hoping secretly that he would be... the one for me.

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:

This ahz is quite different from the rest. It definately sticks out according to Dr. Angle, his inventions, and I. Clockwork seems like my type of ahz, fiddling with contraptions, and doing beautriful art. Clockwork is a very special Ahzenai, and unlike most people I don't want him because of his markings or the fact that he has different lineart. I want him for his personality and for him in general. I just really hope he is finally the one for me and Dr. A ♥

Other:
I found a random song that I think he might like~♥
Song of choice- Time Travel by Never Shout Never

Maybe done? ♥ If you would be so kind as to help me out with critique I would appriciate it so much. Thank you!~♥

(Also you don't know how much I wanted to add in a joke from portal (the video game) about the combustable lemons xD)

[Onyxeva]

Quick Announcements:


0. I have not forgotten about judging Clockwork. I'm just keeping him up a bit longer so I can prepare some more vortex Ahz. <3

1. Here's a stamp I made a while ago, it features all the original lineart plasma element Ahzenai before Reeves. Feel free to use it/replace the old stamp if you are so inclined.

2. Just thought I'd let you know/ remind you that there is a design suggestion thread on the proboards site. You can suggest designs for vortex Ahzenai there. <3 Click here. Also don't be afraid to create new topics if you want help working through a design idea you have. I'd love to help.

3. I'm going to be making some of the designs found on the suggestion thread here, feel free to join. <3 Click to join.