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[Temperance.]

[So, You have to already have an Ahzenai to get Zisis?]

I didn't think about that. Even if that's the case, I edited my post on the page before this one. Mr. Valakin seemed a little more fitting in the end to be my character's partner.

[Nope, as far as I know you could go for either Zisis or Valakin since you don't have an Ahzenai yet. The only limitation is for those of us who DO have Ahzenai. We can only apply for Zisis, since Valakin can only go to someone who doesn't have an Ahzenai yet.]

[Lukina]

Lukina was sitting at the waters edge watching the Vortex swirl around lazily, it then picked up speed and became bright and at its brightest point an Azhenai lept out. Lukina's eyes went wide at the Azhenai's beauty, her pelt was simple but it suited her. "She's beautiful." Lukina whispered. "What are the odds of her choosing someone like me, especially when I have nothing to offer but a life of traveling and silly little shimmering trinkets?" She said to herself. She almost talked herself out of approahing the lovely Azhenai but its pelt called to her as she watch it walk down the bridge and into the forested area of Azhen. The Azh made her think she was a symbol for breast cancer awareness, that made her want to meet the Azh more and because of her elegance, beauty, and grace.

Pulling her feet from the water and standing from the rock she was sitting on, lukina put on her shoes and followed the lovely Azh into the forested area. "Greeting and welcome to Azen. My name is Lukina." Lukina spoke in a friendly tone as she bowed. She had stopped a few feet away as not to invade the Azh's space. She avoided eye contact as she knew in some creatures that was a threat, she didn't want to seem a threat, she wanted to befriend this marvelous creature. She had to hold herself back from reaching out and touching Zisis's luxurious looking pelt, just the way it shimmered in the light and the smell of her pelt was intoxicating. "I hope you're enjoying your stay so far and hope you don't have too much difficulty making you decision." She said make a bit of small talk.

She then took a deep breath and slowlly let it out, she knew she had to get to the point of her being here. "I'm sure you know what brings me to sit in your presence." She spoke and paused for a moment to think. "I would be overjoyed and honored if you chose me to be your companion. I don't have much to offer you except a few small shinny trinkets from my travels, companionship and many adventures from our travels. You'll never be obligate to remain at my side or cooped up in a tiny space, you'll be free to come and go as you please. And we will be able to sleep under the stars as often as we wish." She stated with a warm smile. "I know it's not much but it's all I have to give, and I also have two other companions, Esme a wolf, and Elemo an Ahenai. Both come and go as they please and I'm sure they would love to have you come along with us." She said happily.

Lukina looked behind her and saw that a like of humans and Ahzenai had formed behind her, she sighed heavily for she didn't want to leave Zisis. "I guess I must leave to give the others a chance and to leave you to your decision." Lukina said sadly as the turned to look at Zisis. "I hope that our paths cross again somday, for I'd love to gaze at your beautiful luxurious pelt and see that sparkle of happiness in your eyes. Farewell." With that said she bowed and walked away from the beautiful Zisis. As she walked away she stole a glance over her shoulder at Zisis. Oh, how she would love to have her at her side. Zisis seemed calm and collected, friendly and loving, she also seemed to have a look of care within her soft eyes. Those were qualities she liked.

[Azure23]

Username: Azure23
Ahzenai you're applying for: Valakin
Short Woo: (2-3 paragraphs is the minimum, 5 paragraphs max):

Angel paused, and watched as the vortex swirled to life. A pretty pale pink and purple ahzenai popped out and immediately started to walk off towards the trees. It was gorgeous but almost as soon as it gained it's bareings, the suitors started to follow and swarm the poor thing. With a sigh, he turned away really wanting to get away from the crowd. He heard a deep, growly voice and turned towards the speaker. It was another Ahzenai. This one was a definately much more masculine then the pink one. His white fur was spotted with red filled leopard spots and his red paws looked as if they were soaked in blood. Truth be told, he looked incredibly awesome. Angel ducked down behind a rock as the Ahzenai padded by. It's growly, deep voice called out a warning to all humans. Stay away. It then proceeded to bound up the side of spire and settle on a plateau.

Angel's heart soared and he spread his wings. He definately was not human, and therefore stood somewhat of a chance. He flapped his snow white wings and effortlessly took to the air. It felt so wonderful to fly and he looked down at the groups of Ahzenai and humans clustered below. He felt somewhat superior now that he was much higher and actually in his element. With a few silent wingbeats, he was at the same level as the plateau. He quietly, lightly, landed on the plateau, not to far behind Valakin. He walked towards Valakin, his wings folding to his back. "Hello." He called, his confidence barely able to hide his excitement. Unsure if Valakin would attack because he seemed human, Angel spread his wings. "I am clearly not human, and if you want to, you can travel with me." He said, trying to sound much older. Under the scrutinizing eyes of Valakin, he suddenly felt very young and naive. Angel suddenly puffed up his chest and fluffed up his wings, trying vainly to seem older and bigger. "I have lived many years by myself in the streets of a city. I know the cruelty of humans and I know how to fight. I can prove invaluable to whatever plan you have if you so choose to travel with me." He said, his getting a slight mischevious look in his eyes. "What do you say?"

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
I absolutely LOVE the way he looks. The red on his paws makes it look like blood, and he looks awesome.

[Irios Atelis]

Username:
xX-Nix-Xx

Ahzenai your applying for:
Valakin

Short Woo:

NOTE: This features SkyMelody, she is a bubbly flirty Morukai who sometimes gives her heart out to freely and needs to be protected from that. But she really is a good person and will try to help those less fortunate than her.

SkyMelody flicked both her tails as a Ahzenai marched into the place his fur seemed to flicker with hatred,
"This must be the twin" She said to herself, she had seen the sister not long ago, leave her twin in the undergrowth.

As he made his statement and announced his name, Sky's mind went back to a pretty pink Ahz who wanted the good life, she remembered the Ahzenai saying goodbye to her brother and realized with a start that this must be the brother.

As she thought about this her heart ached for him, for a moment she felt his hate toward humans, his pain at the betrayal of his kin and she remembered all the wrongs the humans have ever done to her and suddenly knew he would understand.

She leaped to her paws, bounding over with her naturally bubbly demeanor, tainted by the unexpected hate for the humans, her blue, white and drag gray fur bristled as she was watched,
"Valakin!" She called skidding to a clumsy stop, sitting before she could skid any further, her twin tails flicking wildly,

"Hey! My name is SkyMelody! Um... I saw..." She said, suddenly unsure of how to go on, her paw scuffed the ground, her head tucked into her chest shyly, nervous for the first time in her life,
"Um... I know you hate humans and I just wanted to say... Um... I know your looking for a fighter but I can fight if I have to.... And um... I can play good pranks on the humans... I would love to travel with you..." She said looking up at him shyly and going on in a small voice, "I won't be too much trouble... Please?"

Just then a man marched up to them, he was tangled in vines and looked boiling mad,
"Never prank me like that again!" He shouted at her, raising his fist to strike.

SkyMelody cried out and tried to move back only to bump into Valakin as the man brought down his fist...

[*~SlyFox~*]

Username: *~SlyFox~*
Ahzenai you're applying for: Valakin
Short Woo: (2-3 paragraphs is the minimum, 5 paragraphs max):

Boris muttered darkly as he watched the vortex swirled slowly to life.He is unsure why Katherine has forced him to come here to see a 'Ahzenai' or what ever they called these strange creatures he just wanted to go back to his studies.He focused his strange colored eyes at a pale pink and purple ahzenai that popped out of the vortex and started to walk off towards the trees.Watching a crowd of people quickly follow the ahzenai then swarm the creature like bees drawn to a flower.He felt sight sympathy for the ahzenai,how it must feel to be surrounded by a swarm of strangers.Boris looked away from the swarm,he would never understand humans and their strange ways.His green and purple wolf ears stand on end as a deep growl echos though the cave and the message was clear to him,Stay way.Begin who he is he turned towards the sound to see another ahzenai but this one was different from the pale pink one.It's eyes seem to burn with deep hatred as it looks at the humans.It's coat reminded Boris of a rare clouded leopard but the red in its spots looked like it was splashed with dried blood.Its tail and paws looked like they were stained with blood never to wash away and remind it of dark times.He was unsure if it was really blood on its paws and tail but the idea of it made him smirk.

Boris knew if he did not try to woo a ahzenai Katherine would make him regret it for years to come.He brushed hieroglyphics off his lab coat which came to life in the forms of small animals that pranced around happily before he crushed them with his foot.His purple and green scaled tail swayed slowly before he got up from his spot and adjusted his cracked glasses.His lab coat was riddled with holes and caked with dried blood in some places but he could careless it kept people away from him.Boris sighed deeply and slowly approached the Ahzenai,"Greetings Ahzenai,My name is Boris"he took a short bow to Valakin in respect."As you can see i'm am no human"he gestured to his scaled tail and the fangs in his mouth."If you would like to, you could travel with me."He said,keeping his voice strong.Valakin's eyes looked as if they were looking into Boris's very soul,a soft growl passed his lips as he looked Valakin dead in the eye then a hint of a smirk showed on his face."I can see you are the manipulating type by the look in your eyes, you seek revenge of some kind but i will not go farther with that"his purple and red eyes dart back to the crowd of people then back at Valakin."I study in the ways of Egypt and i'm what people may call a 'magician' but not those fakers on T.V."He brushed a hieroglyphic off his lab coat which floated in the air,he grabbed it and mutters something.Boris opened his hand to show a gold dagger"I could do more but this is not the place i also fight with weapons mostly Egypt based weapons."he closes his hand then the dagger turns to sand."I can also summon allies such as lions and crocodiles but they are mindless and will only attack on command.Plus they don't die,they just reappear till i stop summoning them."again his eyes dart to the crowd of humans,maybe he would summon a lion and watch the humans scramble away like bugs.No it uses too much energy,"My studies have shown me the cruelty and greed humans have which has caused me to despise almost every human i see"his eyes seem to darken some and a growl escapes his lips."Vile disgusting humans."He whispers softly."If you accept my request i will gladly join in any plan you wish to do and i would be honored to be with such a noble creature as yourself."He bows once again to Valakin,his eyes shine slightly with bloodlust."Do you accept my request?"his fangs shine in the dim light of the cave.

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
I love the way he looks.His coat reminds me of a clouded leopard but the red makes me think of a clouded leopard that had won a fierce battle.

[Onyxeva]

Let's see if I can clear some stuff up.

- You may not 'play'/'woo' as an Ahzenai unless you already have one.
- You may use any type of creature to be your character.
- You do not need an Ahzenai already to woo Zisis, but you can woo her if you do have one.
- You cannot woo Valakin if you already have an Ahzenai.

[jern.]

Let's see if I can clear some stuff up.

- You may not 'play'/'woo' as an Ahzenai unless you already have one.
- You may use any type of creature to be your character.
- You do not need an Ahzenai already to woo Zisis, but you can woo her if you do have one.
- You cannot woo Valakin if you already have an Ahzenai.

just a question, he states that he hates human and not even to try if your not human?

[Onyxeva]

That's right.

[Impossible Reality]

Valakin Let out a low growl, Humans had corrupted Ahzen and now now they had done the unthinkable. They had stolen the only thing he had ever held dear to him, his twin sister. He let out a low roar of pain. The Battle was lost, but not the War, he could rebuild the resistance, but he could not go at it alone. Shaking with anger he rose to his paws, he pushed his way through a group of humans, he stopped turning to address the crowd that populated Ahzen.
" I have decided to choose a companion. Those of you who think you are worthy enough may attempt to follow, but i can guarantee it will not be easy."
He turned and began to trot up a dusty forest path, but paused turning back to the crowd.
"Oh, if your a human, you have no chance with me."
He swished his tail in minor contempt and continued trotting up the path. Soon he came a well enough obstacle, the tallest rock spire in all of the new Ahzen. Due to his size he effortlessly bounded up the side of the spire, and settled on the flat plateau at its top.

Short summary of personality:
Devious, rash, and fierce. His opinions on things are not changed lightly. He is a skilled fighter, and a well worded manipulator, who hates all humans.

Valakin is Vitaloney's twin. This means they both came from the vortex at the same time.

Valakin has a many stories about him, he is also a character in a story that Demotivated_Bear is writing. If you win please let me know if you would prefer him taken out of the stories.

Username
Impossible Reality

Ahzenai you're applying for
Valakin

Short Woo
Hearing Vitaloney's choice of her new partner was like taking an arrow to the heart. Humans. Greedy, annoying, ruthless humans. My entire body shook with rage, filling every cell with it's sweet promise of revenge. Fire burning in my soul, I swore to myself the these humans would pay for what they've done. They will pay for taking my love away. My head lung low, staring at the ground, my vision went blurry as my eyes stung with fire. Tears ran down my snout as a growl slowly built in my chest. Rolling up my throat, the beast within me finally broke as I roared and howled to the sky.

Looking at the crowd of people and Ahzenia staring I could feel the craze slowly seeping within my mind, little by little spreading throughout my body. "You'll pay," I growled furiously. "You'll all pay!" I roared at the crowd. They gave me looks as if I'd gone mad. Hell, I probably have. But that doesn't matter. A roar came from my right, a strong Ahzenia with similar markings as Vitaloney's. They must be related somehow. His roar is what caught my attention, filled with pain and agony. And rage. A small spark of demented hope lit inside my chest.

He pushed through the humans, "I have decided to choose a companion. Those of you who think you are worthy enough may attempt to follow, but i can guarantee it will not be easy. If your a human, you have no chance with me." Perfect. He bounded up the side of the spire and settled on the flat plateau. I confidently strode to the spire. Taking my time, I effortlessly climbed it, smiling at the picture in my head of two beasts fighting against the monstrosity of a race called humans. The very word made my stomach twist and made my lungs ignite.

Reaching the top, I smiled at the Ahzenia waiting. "Valakin, I need to have a word with you," I said, slowly walking to him. He just sat there, staring at me with a face made of stone. "The humans, they're vile creatures. Arrogant, disgusting, annoying pests." I finally reached him and sat in front of him. "Valakin, I'm Volcan. And I strongly believe that we need to fight against the humans together. We'd make a great team, side by side." I paused, my heart clenching at what I had to say next. "The humans killed my entire family. They took my mate years ago. The awful things they did to her..." My eyes blurred and I blinked hard to hold back tears.

"Valakin, if we join to fight together, I wont hold you back." I flicked my wrist, letting my blade slide out of it's sheath into my hand. I stood in preparation, my knife firmly gripped in one hand. Staring into the cold eyes, I confidently said, "Fight me. Let me prove myself worthy to you."

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai
I was so inspired from the relationship between the twins and Valakin's reaction to his sisters betrayal. I adore his markings and colors, but most of all, I think he is an absolutely perfect match for my fursona, Volcan.

P.S. I mean nothing against humans! ;A; Sorry if I was harsh while writing this ^^'

(My Fursona, Volcan)

[canis,]

Username: .:Canis Love:.
Ahzenai you're wooing: Zisis
Woo:
I walk around, exploring this place called Ahzen. I was here because of the rumors of the creatures that live here. The Ahzenai, they are called. I looked around the place, my bright and smart blue eyes scanning the land. I took in every tree and every pebble. I stopped as my gaze landed on a pretty Ahzenai. I had heard she was new too, and her name was Zisis.
Shrugging, I walked over to her. I thought that she might be nice and a good companion. I pause a few feet from her. "Hi," I say quietly, not wanting to startle her in the middle of her exploration. "I'm pretty new to this place, and I thought I could talk to someone. I hope I wasn't interrupting anything," I say, nodding towards the land. I smile myself as I look at it. "I was just looking for a friend actually," I say, turning back to Zisis.
I sit in front of the Ahzenai. My fingers etch a portrait of her into the sand. It squint and continue my drawing. "Hmmph," I murmur, deep in concentration. As I finish, I move over to show her, hoping it was good.