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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby Queen Vivane » Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:08 am

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I glanced at the red haired young woman as she walked past with Vitaloney they were talking about nail and claw treatments. My gaze was drawn by a pained roar "seems he is not happy that his sister left with one of the creatures they tried so valiently to drive from ahzen" Venom Shadow said his gaze focused on Valakin. We watched him run into the forest "prehaps he will rebuild the resistance when he finds the right companion" I mused as I idly scratched Venoms Shadows neck.

I hadn't explored this new part of ahzen, it seemed like a good idea for me to get a clear picture of the layout, after all it could come in handy for if an aheznai deemed you worthy by engaging in a game of hide and seek. The air was full of earthy smells that had my nose tingling as well as the scent of cool clear water that soothed my soul. I eagerly sprang off on all fours racing toward the forests edge enjoying the wind rippling through my caramel blonde fur, I could see the trees flash by as I ran past.

I saw an ahzenai come around the corner and skidded to a halt throwing up a cloud of dust that made my eyes water and making me cough and choke. When the dust cleared the ahzenai was already of walking around the edge of the forest once again, her pale pink coat was slightly dusty but I could still make small butterfly wing markings on her body. I easily padded caught up and fell into step beside Zisis, "sorry about throwing dust all over you earlier I was having so much fun exploring this new part of ahzen." "I forgot that there could be others wandering around" I said and rubbed the back of my neck in embarrasment.

Venom Shadow crashed into my legs and almost sent me crashing to the floor "ehehh sorry" he laughed when I turned and glowered at him.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby Horneddragon » Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:25 am

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Kiyo sat quietly within the large lake-clearing, She closed her eyes though her element was Plasma, the soft lapping sounds of the water comforted her. She left out a soft Groan, If only HD was here, she would love to share in the Beauty of The new Ahzen. Would she even be able to find this place? Kiyo did not know. She shook her head slowly as if the simple motion would disrupt the thoughts and put her mind at ease. Defeated she sighed, Without HD here she felt lost, almost like a large piece of her had gone missing. A pained howl resounded across the space, Kiyo rose to her paws, she knew who it was, and she knew he had lost so much more than she. With a pained sigh she resolved never again to mope about HD's parting.

On shaking legs she stood, lightly looking herself over, Amaranth had left her on some sort of adventure to find a "play companion" she shook her head knowing that boy he'd bring home a ball or stick. A chuckle shook her thin form, her stomach answered painfully with a growl.. she needed to eat more.

A scowl decorating her face she slowly turned to face the Vortex of the New Ahzen, It mirrored the one that had birthed her and her kinfolk in the old Ahzen but a much different, energy, seemed to flow from it. She let her jaws fall slightly open as the inhaled tasting the sharp scent of the forest air on her exposed tongue. It brought forth once again the pained longing for HD's light caress against her horns. She would love it here, and Amaranths unscheduled absence made the fact that she may never see her companion again hit home.. hard. She sighed, once again shaking her head, she needed someone to talk to, and if Amaranth was gone much longer she may end up driving herself crazy.

totally unfazed by her pain the Vortex continued to swirl lazily, lowering her head she muttered inaudibly to herself. A half hearted growl left her throat as she was temporarily blinded. Staggering back she blinked repeatedly in an attempt to banish the spots that danced across her vision. shaking her head one last time she looked up to see a new young Ahzenai trotting down the land bridge that separated the vortex from mainland Ahzen.

Sighing Kiyo sat, she was not inherently interested in Wooing a new Ahzenai, she had her hands full with Amaranth as it was. With s light scowl she noted a large black shape moving steadily towards The new Ahzenai, out of habit she Called out "Amar-, oh wait." It was not Amaranth, she knew it wasn't he was long gone on his little adventure, she sighed and sat back even harder on her haunches, letting her eyes drift after the New Ahzenai.... She Really needed someone to talk to..

"Eh, What would it hurt" she mumbled heaving herself to her feet.

On Heavy paws she trotted after the New Ahzenai, Remarking to herself slightly that Valcyon never Mentioned her name.

With Pained ease she made her way to the New Ahzenai, who seemed intent on exploring the area, Kiyo trotted up and easily matched her pace. Though She burned to talk to someone, she stayed quiet, enjoying merely the closeness of another Ahzenai.
They had walked for a few minuets when Kiyo finally gave into the seething want to speak.
" Its simply stunning, is it not? The world that we were graced with being born into. In my opinion you are one of the most lucky Ahzenai ever to be born. Not only Do you have the honor of being born into this," She paused moving her head in such a way as to motion to the surrounding area " The New Ahzen, so full of life and all of its splendor, but also you have a choice not many before you have had. Look around you as you walk through The New Ahzen, There are many here, Humans, Wolves, Dragons, Halfbreed, and even some Ahzenai will come forth in an attempts to woo you into fallowing them. Its a choice even I did not have all those years ago when i first crept from the Vortex. " She paused yet again, allowing her words to sink into The Ahzenai. " You can assume I am one of the latter, one of those rare single Ahzenai Who wish to woo you into coming, correct? I guess, in a way, that is true, i do wish to make your acquaintance, but I offer something I believe no other will, to you i will give my knowledge, and i will teach you about this beautiful world we live in." She began to slow her pace until she was falling behind the Nameless Ahzenai, Gracefully She dipped her head in a sullen goodbye and watched her pass on to the next suitor.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby Alhazred » Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:44 am

[[I don't have an Ahzenai, so I'm using my dwarf character, Spellstone. I'm changing my little app to this one, since you mentioned this one specifically to me and I play evil good.]]

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Whispered screams came over the small crevice in the rock facing-the same one that the bloody-red Ahzenai had decided to rest upon. Hardly knowing of the events that were going on today, the dwarf perked his head up from what he was doing in the area. Naturally, the place wasn't to gain the attention of anyone. In fact, this was the reason that brought the both of them here. The short man-humanlike but not human-wanted to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city, to commit his own ruthless acts as a blood mage.

Spellstone stand in the middle of a ceremony; clearly this was all done by the one person standing in this mess. The corpses of human-like beings strewn across red-stained ground. It was not a natural colour; blood of innocents had tainted this ground and made it a fitting area for a ritual.

Or, what was a ritual in the making.

With raised shoulders and shaking body rattled with a slight insanity, the dwarf-dark gray skin riddled with both scars from the practice of his conniving magic and tattoos upon his neck and right hand that signified him unfit to live with his Dwarven brothers for rather obvious reasons-closed the thick, leather bound tome that he was practicing from and shot a gaze at the creature. Through perfectly-round spectacles were orange-coloured eyes that burned with a hatred quite similar to that of the Ahzenai. "You're the one they were talking about. A talking creature should be seen as myth and hide amoungst the shadow, yet you let yourself be seen and care not for what society thinks. My ways are looked down upon, but I practice them. People, they wish to be oblivious to the 'bad' things around them--but they should know that a life such as that is a lie."

Fingers tinted with red opened and closed in thought for the smallest moments, before the brows raised with a sense of enlightenment. Naturally wary and distrustful, there was a strange indication of familiarity that showed in the deepest recesses of his facial features. Calmness now controlled the body of the Dwarf that moments earlier looked slightly unstable-in both physical and mental aspects. Such a quick change in behaviour was not so natural and healthy to begin with. "I am guessing that this is not your home, either? I, Spellstone, did not wish to live in my caste. I wanted to persue knowledge, at any means necessary. And with knowledge, comes a natural power." Even the slightest mentioning of power had the blood user's eyes lit up again with promise.

Why I want this Ahzenai: Nobody seems to want this guy, and while an alchemist, my character has a darker side as a blood mage-though, he's tended to keep that part a secret.
I will be honest: I won't RP 'em too much, but in your honour and to your kindness, Onyx-as well as to be kind to his previous owners-I will two or three times a month if I win 'em. I intend mostly to draw him with my dwarf.
I have been eyeing one of these guys for months and lurking on your thread.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby l o v e l y ~ » Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:55 am

Could I play as an ahz? I don't have one though so I wasn't sure if I could or not... Thanks for the info!8D
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby Noctilida » Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:59 am

~KiteHawk~ wrote:Could I play as an ahz? I don't have one though so I wasn't sure if I could or not... Thanks for the info!8D

Unless you have permission from someone else to use their character, I'm afraid not. ono;
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby l o v e l y ~ » Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:11 am

Ok, thanks for the info. i'll just be a different animal or something. I can be any animal correct. It says on the fron page I can as long as it is creative and original. Does that mean I have to make one up or is it sending the message that you can't read someone else's story and copy them? Sorry for sounding so dumb.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby Azure23 » Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:13 am

[So, You have to already have an Ahzenai to get Zisis?]
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby DecafBunny » Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:25 am

soooo cute
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} Valakin's challenge | New Ahz; Zisis

Postby Alhazred » Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:09 am

Azure23 wrote:
[So, You have to already have an Ahzenai to get Zisis?]


I didn't think about that. Even if that's the case, I edited my post on the page before this one. Mr. Valakin seemed a little more fitting in the end to be my character's partner.
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