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[canis,]

Congratulations! I can't wait for the next one...

[Maddyoll]

Congrats..

Is there any way we could trade back? I only wanted the dagger for Reeves, I don't think I'm gonna go for anything else.. ^^;

[Onyxeva]

Please take your congratulations to the chat- or maybe pm Nuclear.

Maddyoll; My first inclination is to say no, no trade-backs. However, lemme consult my helpers and see what they think. I'll get back to you about that.

You could always hoard it away if you find another Ahzenai you like. :B

[Nyxeva]

--Removed--

Just noticed the rule about having no Ahzenai's.
*waves goodbye to Valakin*

[Horneddragon]

I am sorry if you Onyx, or one of your mods thinks this is spam, but i have no idea were i could post it so anyone who Wishes to apply for them can see...

Demotivated_Bear previously had my permission to use both Vitaloney and Valakin in her story. If the new owners, or if Onyx herself, wishes for them to not to be used It is of course up to them.

In addition, I have a few short stories/woos and introductions written with the two of them. If the new owners wish for me to remove them just ask and i will.

[Onyxeva]

Not spam, and you make a valid point. I'll go attach a notice under Vitaloney for now- though I'm sure most won't mind the stories. xD

[Iridesant]

Username: Amalthia

Ahzenai you're applying for: Vitaloney

Short Woo: The sky was a vast ocean of blue with not a cloud to be seen for miles, emerald green eyes outlined with black were hidden beneath sunglasses with rectangular frames. Long fine blood red hair hung in a high ponytail the end falling to mid back. Onyx lips coupled with pale skin, blood red locks and emerald green eyes made for a stunning sight. I brushed my fringe from over the right frame of my sunglasses so I could see better, I happily walked along the path black boots barely making a sound as they hit the ground. My body lurched as a raised tree root caused me to loose balence, I hit the floor with a thud and ended up getting a mouthful of grass. The grass tasted foul even as I spat it out the taste still remained, grumbling softly I stood up and after brushing myself off fished pack of polos from my pocket. I popped one in my mouth and slipped the packet back into my pocket, it only abolished the taste slightly so I concentrated hard on the minty flavour as I walked.

I came to a halt as a large cave loomed up in front of me. "Well guess there could be something interesting inside so ill go in and explore" I muttered and walked into the cave head held high, the light of day gradually faded until there was only the darkness of the cave. Several times I found myself walking into the walls or tripping up over large rocks so I pushed my sunglasses up onto my head in hopes that would make things better. It only helped a smidge. I carried on walking and noticed that I was gradually seeing what lay ahead, it was faint at first but an odd light began to bathe everything in a glow that swirled gently. I frowned but my curiosity had been snagged, "what could possibly make such a light?" I asked myself quietly.

The path ahead began to get brighter and brighter until I was stood near crystal clear lake, my eyes slid closed as I inhaled the scent of growing things as well as rich soil. When they opened again I had focused them a beautiful female who slowly sauntered out from the dark shadow of the forest making her way over to the lake and gracefully drank her fill. She sat on the earthy floor and inspected her claws with the air of one who loved the rich life. I looked toward the celing where sunlight slowly filtered down and then flicked my eyes back to the wonderful creature who sat at the waters edge.

I lifted my ipod from my pocket and pulled onyx headphones from around my neck and plugged them in, with a soft touch Army Of Me the remix version used for the film Sucker Punch blared out. I set off at easy walk my feet in time with the slow beats, I slowed to a stop just in front of the creature who was quite devoted to inspecting her claws. I stopped the song and slid the gadget into my pocket. "Greetings my name is Vara" I said with a neat bow.

"Honey you are obviously suited for far more then sitting in this cave for the rest of your life, I can see you happily living the rich life, one press of a button and you could have humans on their knees filing your claws to optimum condition" I said with a smile. "Come with me you will have all that and more, oh so much more. What do you say fancy living the rich life?" I asked with a grin hand extended, inky black nails glittering with the waters dancing relection.

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: I read through the short summary of her personality it really caught my eye, I dont see many characters that are so unique personality and looks wise. The part about her loving her claws reminds me of a really good friend I used to know she loved to have her nails long and had so much fun telling people that they weren't fake. I love the way each different colour used for her design compliments all of the ones used. The red base coat really compliments the dark grey parts and I really adore the combination.

I would like Vitaloney becasue it would be a wonderful thing to write from her point of view, becasue her personality is so exciting <3

Here is the song if you would like to listen to while you read through [*]

wip

[bianca. ❤]

Username: NightWhispers
Ahzenai you're applying for: Vitalonely
Short Woo: WIP
Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: WIP

[Maddyoll]

Please take your congratulations to the chat- or maybe pm Nuclear.

Maddyoll; My first inclination is to say no, no trade-backs. However, lemme consult my helpers and see what they think. I'll get back to you about that.

You could always hoard it away if you find another Ahzenai you like. :B

Hmm, I might go for one more, just because I thought of a really good idea ^^
*writes it down*

So hold that thought~

[Maddyoll]

Sorry on the double post, but I suppose I'll use the story idea I thought of towards Vitaloney ^^ I thought of a pretty good one, if I do say so myself. So, here we go? ^^

Username:
Maddyoll

Ahzenai you're applying for:
Vitaloney~♥

Short Woo:
I'd been watching her examine her claws, just looking surperiour among those around her. I could almost see the fish in the cool lake bowing to her. I'd been watching this one, very closely. I sat down, pretending to examine the leaves on the tree as people came up to her. All of a sudden a mysterious man comes up, in a long coat. My instincts kicked in as I went to hide, as I saw the mysterious person with deadly intentions begin to make their way towards Vitaloney. I went to stop them from their evil deeds and he was about to do something terrible when I jumped out..
"HALT!" I yelled loudly.
The man turned to look at me, when I noticed it wasn't a man at all. It was a tall woman, about 6'7", and somewhat chubby. I had seen her almost an hour ago, stalking Vitaloney in the bushes after she had been rejected. I was scared to death then, and even more so now. Why I hadn't stopped her before I don't remember, but it was all that mattered now. I didn't realize that she had been slowly coming closer and closer, until it was too late.

.: About 8 hours later :.

I awoke to a strange noise. I could hear it, but I couldn't see anything. I could feel my hands and feet chained down, and in a helpless effort to move they just got tighter. I stared at the ground, almost helpless as I tried to recall what had happened. I didn't remember anything, and next thing I knew I was set free... how? I whirled around to see when I noticed an ahzenai in the corner, blood all around her. I pushed any other thoughts aside as curiosity overwhelmed me. I stepped closer, but then I faceplanted onto the ground. I shook it off as I came across a golden coin. It occured to me at that moment that there was various silver and gold items all around me, and I picked some up. Then I remembered the ahzenai. I went over to it to realize it was Vitaloney, the one I spotted earlier. Memories flooded into me as I recalled what had happened. I then bowed down to her, and offered the gold pieces, along with a small black pearl I had with me from before.

Just then the woman from earlier came in. I scooted the items toward Vitaloney before I went into a mindless battle. She pulled oout a knife, and was about to stab the Ahzenai when I pulled out the dagger I had offered earlier to Reeves, and stabbed her. Blood gushed out and I stepped back, letting it puddle. I was sure she was dead. I then motioned toward Vitaloney to follow me.
"You know, if you want to?"

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai: I want Vitaloney because she is perfect. I had been so involved in Reeves before, that I barely realized any other Ahzenai was around. Vitaloney seems like the perfect companion, judgemental or not. Vitaloney not only has a beautiful design, but such a well-fitting personality. Onyxwings, her design is beautiful. Demotivated_Bear, I have read your series and I really love it, and HornedDragon, you made the best choice. I would be glad to have any ahenzai, but honored to have Vitaloney as my first. Despite her vain and coy personality, and her carelessness about anybody other than herself, I can tell she has a true heart of gold on the inside. ♥

Kind of a work in progress on the story part ^^;
Done, I'll look over it a few times, but I hope you enjoy it.. ♥

Item used: Dagger ♥