[baylili00]

Username:baylili00
Equidius name:Sparkle
Gender: (Males are stallions or colts, females are mares or fillies. Geldings are sterile males, born that way through anomaly or made so through accident)Filly
Age: (from a yearling (baby) to about thirty years old, which is passing middle age rapidly. Thirty-five maybe, if the horse is on death's door)9 months
b]Size:[/b] [use hands, from 11 (pony) to sixteen (gigantic by these horses' standards)]since still young 11 when older will be from 15.50 to 16 hands
Rank: (see adoptable page for details on this)foal
Personality:[/url]aggressive,timid,frisky,fun-loving,wild
[b]Story or history: This is important! Be detailed.
I will tell you a story about a very special breed called equidius.And this is about a very special equidius named Sparkle but, I have to start from the very beginning when this breed first originated. Humans tried to wipe out disease but while doing it they destroyed everything. A new species survived the horrid human attack that the humans even wiped themselves out. And that was Equidius, a horselike creature but smaller in size. They have horns and wild antennas that help them see. They are amazing creatures but not as amazing as the equidius I'm going to tell you about. Sparkle's ancestor Storm Rider was the first ever leader of the equidius. She was deep in the caves of the new world that was and is known as Earth. Storm rider fell to her knees. Her mate begged her get up. They all saw as she finally got up the first born equidius ever. That was Caroline Sparkle's mother. Caroline once she was grown was more intelligent than any equidius ever known. When she was around 5 she wondered in a cave filled with crystals. She heard something groan. As she wondered closer she saw a small scaly winged creature. As she took a step closer she fell into a bottomless pit. just then something swooped down and grabbed her. She thanked the creature and she said she would pay the creature in dept by giving him her first child. A couple years later she had Crystal they settled that they would have her for 3 weeks each and then they would switch. The creature after having her for awhile thanked Caroline for her kindness and let her keep her daughter because the creature had children of it's own. So that is Crystal's story. There is still more to come. Who knows she might write a book.

[Verdana]

Lovely entry! It's a bit busy, with all of those colours, but very interesting. The story is a bit weird (especially by her giving the creature her first foal) and I'm not sure about her ancestry.