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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby RainbowBizkit <3 » Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:50 am

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The vortex seemed to swirl gently, quietly adding its own light to the sun’s. The entire cave seemed sleepy and tranquil. Ahzenai and their companions milled around the cave, no doubt appreciating the warm sun.

Without warning, however, the vortex flashed and boiled madly in shades of gold, brown, and red before spitting out a furry lump.

Said lump shot through the air, landing with a painful-sounding rustle-WHUD in a nearby treetop.

There was a moment where nothing could be heard but the quiet rustling of the trees as a soft breeze made its way through the holes in the top of the cave. A bird chirped somewhere in the vicinity. The vortex swirled innocently as if nothing had happened.

Valcyon cleared his throat awkwardly. “Reeves,” he announced. His deep voice echoed throughout the cave. A moment later, the furry lump slid out of the tree, landing on the ground in a heap. As people murmured and gathered around, they could see that the lump -- an Ahzenai -- was unconscious. Or at least, he appeared to be.

Suddenly, one eye flashed open. Reeves jumped to his feet with a squawk, staggered a little, then leaned against the tree trunk for support while he pawed at the bump on his head. There was a barely audible, metallic, growling groan. He put his paw back on the ground and looked at the people now surrounding him, still leaning against the tree.

“IMMACHICKENIMMACHICKENIMMACHICKEN!” Reeves hopped away from the tree and pranced around the area. “SQUAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!” The Ahzenai leaped around in circles, lost his balance, and fell on his side. “KHEEEEHEEHEEEEEEEE!” He rolled and squirmed in the dirt, obviously still a little disoriented.

Just a little.


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Miz and Durstion laughed at Reeves as he acted like some sort of strange bird. "Really? A Chicken? He couldn't have chosen a eagle or a hawk or something? He has to be the most eaten bird in the planet?" Durstion remarked smiling at the strange bird-ahzenai. Miz busted out laughing, even harder now "I wonder why he wants to be a chicken and not a rooster!" now it was Durstions turn to laugh. The two rolled in laughter literally rofling all over, finally the two dragged themselves to their feet, Miz smiled "Lets go try and woo this chicken" Miz said trying to get to her feet. She grabbed a warm kitten from her backpack as Durstion tried to roll onto his feet.Miz smiled at Reeves "Hey there you big chicken care for a kitten?" I laughed setting the warm kitten alittle ways away from Reeves rolling fit. "You just made my year man, I'm Miz this is Durstion. We saw your quite the funny one so we thought we would tell you some jokes to get you warmed up" Miz smiled nudging Durstion with her elbow. "Why did the chicken cross the road? To get to the other side! Alright alright I got another one for yah Why did the orange stop rolling down the hill? Because he ran out of juice!" Miz smiled watching as Durstion shook his head and turned around acting like my jokes were the worst he had ever heard. Me and Durstion smiled, "We do goofy things daily, Cougalter is a real jokester shes amazingly funny, she might be able to pick up a few pointeres from you if you came back with us. We could use someone whos funning, and hilarious to cheer us up and bring new life into our group, if you decide to come joke the world away with us lemme know" Miz said leaving the wamr kitten. Durstion shrugged as we walked back making funny goofy faces at Reeves.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby nowi » Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:52 am

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Tasu, Vimocidas, and I could use some energy, so let's see what we can do X3

I lay on the ground, watching the vortex swirl calmly around. Tasu was snoring beside me, and Vimocidas was half-asleep on my other side. The sun poured into the cave, gently illuminating our surroundings. My eyes began to droop, and I yawned. Suddenly, the vortex began to swirl wildly around in shades of gold, brown, and red. It quickly shot out a large, furry, lump, that landed in a tree. I sat up, Vimocidas next to me. Tasu was still snoring peacefully.
It became silent, and just as soon as it had come, the vortex returned to its usual lazy swirl.
"Reeves," Valcyon announced, breaking the silence.
The lump slid out of the tree, landing softly on the ground. Vimocidas and I moved forward to inspect.
"An Ahzenai," Vimocidas whispered.
"Is he unconscious?" I asked.
"I don't know," Vimocidas said, craning his neck to see.
We found an open spot in the crowd, and moved in to see the Ahzenai. One of its eyes suddenly opened without warning. The Ahzenai, Reeves, got to his feet, squawking, then leaned against a tree. He felt the bump on his head, then looked at the people around him.
“IMMACHICKENIMMACHICKENIMMACHICKEN!” The Ahzenai bounced away, startling Vimocidas and I.
“SQUAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!” He began to leap around in circles, falling on his side.
“KHEEEEHEEHEEEEEEEE!” He began to squirm around in the dirt.
"Um," a voice said behind us. "Did I miss something?"
The two of us turned around to find a groggy Tasu behind us.
"A new Ahzenai," Vimocidas replied, the hint of a grin on his face.
"Well, shall we see if he likes us?" I began to walk towards the Ahzenai.
"Um, hello, Reeves." I looked at him in the dirt, and I smiled. "I'm Tessa, this is Vimocidas, and that's Tasu. You're quite energetic, and I think we could use some energy. We'd love to have you around."
".....crazy or not," Tasu muttered under her breath.
Vimocidas stepped up. "Hello, fellow Ahz," he said. "I'd like to tell you that it would be a pleasure to have you around.." he said awkwardly.
"Chickens are a marvelous bird," Tasu put in. "It would be an honor to travel with such a fabulous chicken as you."
"Well, good luck," I said to the Ahzenai. "Hope you find a home you like."

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"Well, that went well."
"Be quiet, Tasu."
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby anarchy, inc. » Mon Oct 03, 2011 9:52 am

Vercivis sprang lightly from her place behind a measly shrub before approaching this, uh, chicken. She had been amused at his calamity of an entrance, and almost laughed aloud when Valcyon's voice boomed awkwardly around the land of Ahzen. She had kept to the shadows and came to the new land in her own time, but she was glad she had come when she did, because she would have been quite irked to have missed this side-splitting event.
At least he's pretty cute,
Vercivis jumped and flicked her ears in annoyance. Did I really just think that? she wondered in surprise, almost mocking herself. She sighed and wandered over to the area where Reeves the chicken-Ahzenhai was rolling gleefuly, or confusedly, or... who knows? Vercivis look a little leap and landed lithely next to him. Gathering her courage and setting her shoulders to maintain her emotions, her face transitioned from laughter into a slightly amused, weary expresson a mothr would use with a slightly embarassing child.

"I think you have your animals mixed up," Vercivis chided gently. "You look much more like a hawk, or mabe an African parrot, but I do belive you're an Ahzenai like myself."
She flicked her long tail like a whip before settling lightly into a sitting position out of reach of Reeves's squirming, scrabbling paws. "However must ask- are you alright? That was quite the fall, Reeves." she smiled. "Oh, where are my manners? I'm Vercivis. Welcome to Ahzen."

Vercivis looked up as the sun filtered warmly through the branches of a tree, near where Reeves was strangely regarding his surroundings. The shiny rock she had found on her way here was shimmering lightly from the string around her neck. Hoping it cought his eye-dazed or not- she slipped it fluidly off her neck and held it in her jaws. "Do you like birds?" Vercivis asked, her voice still clear even though she was holding the rock necklace. "I certainly do. Sometims climb a hill and watch them, naming all the types I see. It's very calming, and it clears the mind. Would you like to come sometime?" Vercivis asked with a little smile, tilting hr head cutely. Her voice lacked its usual bitter innuendo and sarcastic edge, and it was replaced with the warm cadence of love and caring. She fought back tears, knowing why. She struggled on. "I also like to read and tell stories. Do you? My favorites are fairy tales. Oh!" Vercivis stopped, excited. Her eyes lit up in happiness. "Have you heard the story of the Little Red Hen? That's about a chicken!" she laughed. "Those stories always get my imagination going, how about you?"

Taking another deep breath, Vercivis gathered all of her courage and laid down next to Reeves. "And Reeves," she continued quietly, hoping she wouldn't offendhim with her nxt words. " If you ever need, help," she said carefully, "That doesn't matter to me. I'll help you. And if you want to pla, I'll pla! or if you want to read, or talk, or, or-" she swallowed heavily, getting choked up. Tears sprang into her eyes again, and she shook her head to clear them. "Anything you want, I'll do it. I'll be here. Just ask, ok?"
With a final smile, Vercivis retreated a few steps and awaited his choice.

[Note- The story behind her emotions is that Vercivis had once been the companion to a human who developed a brain tumor and deteriated quickly. She was simply remebring and becoming emotional. Vercivis would read and pla with the child, and when he finally died, she became the cold person she is now.
And i used a shiny rock.]
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby Sabatea » Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:00 am

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The vortex seemed to swirl gently, quietly adding its own light to the sun’s. The entire cave seemed sleepy and tranquil. Ahzenai and their companions milled around the cave, no doubt appreciating the warm sun.

Without warning, however, the vortex flashed and boiled madly in shades of gold, brown, and red before spitting out a furry lump.

Said lump shot through the air, landing with a painful-sounding rustle-WHUD in a nearby treetop.

There was a moment where nothing could be heard but the quiet rustling of the trees as a soft breeze made its way through the holes in the top of the cave. A bird chirped somewhere in the vicinity. The vortex swirled innocently as if nothing had happened.

Valcyon cleared his throat awkwardly. “Reeves,” he announced. His deep voice echoed throughout the cave. A moment later, the furry lump slid out of the tree, landing on the ground in a heap. As people murmured and gathered around, they could see that the lump -- an Ahzenai -- was unconscious. Or at least, he appeared to be.

Suddenly, one eye flashed open. Reeves jumped to his feet with a squawk, staggered a little, then leaned against the tree trunk for support while he pawed at the bump on his head. There was a barely audible, metallic, growling groan. He put his paw back on the ground and looked at the people now surrounding him, still leaning against the tree.

“IMMACHICKENIMMACHICKENIMMACHICKEN!” Reeves hopped away from the tree and pranced around the area. “SQUAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!” The Ahzenai leaped around in circles, lost his balance, and fell on his side. “KHEEEEHEEHEEEEEEEE!” He rolled and squirmed in the dirt, obviously still a little disoriented.

Just a little.


Mist blinked at the odd Ahzenai as I burst out laughing. "I-I think he hit the tree a little too hard!" I panted through my laughter. Mist glared at me and I stopped my laughing, shrugging at her. I sighed as I looked at him again, "Valcyon said his name was Reeves... Maybe we should go and see if we can straighten him up a bit?" I asked, holding backanother bought of laughter. Mist rolled her eyes at me and stalked off, her tail flicking indignantly. I laughed at her as I padded after her, "Hey, come on I was just kidding!" I defended myself as we neared the disoriented Ahzenai. "Ahzenai's should not act like this!" Mist scoffed as she watched the bird-like squawks of the Ahzenai. "Mist, he just hit his head on a tree. Who knows how hard the vortex threw him?" I asked, shrugging. Mist sighed, "Alright fine, we'll we what we can do.." she murmured reluctantly.

I walked towards the disoriented Ahzenai, watching him make his odd bird sounds. "I wonder what hes like when hes not thinking he's a bird?" I wondered aloud. Mist snorted, "If he can became that then he must be pretty insane.." she retorted, though her eyes showed her own curiosity over the idea. "Well, lets go see if we can snap him back into place." I grinned, walking towards Reeves. "Hello, Reeves." I said softly, hoping not to scare him. I glanced at Mist to see her sitting near the Ahzenai, eyeing him up and down crucially. I sighed and turned back to the gorgeous creature. "I hope I don't frighten you, I know all of this can be a little overwhelming... Especially when you just hit the tree so hard." I added, stifling a small chuckle, "But well, I thought maybe I could help clear up some of your confusion." I smiled politely towards the bird-like Ahzenai, marveling at his beautiful markings for a moment before I continued. "Your in a place called Ahzen, home of the Ahzenai and well, a refugee for humans searching for a companion such as yourself. We come here hoping that certain Ahzenai will join us on adventures or maybe just to stay here and find a few more companions and perhaps go on adventures every now and then." I explained, "Or, like me and Mist, we do both. We stay here for a month or so and try to get a few more Ahzenai to come with us, but as you can see they have chosen other companions to follow." I grinned, "Then me and Mist will go on out for a while and adventure." I added.

"Oh, stop telling him about our lives!" Mist snapped, padding over. "You see, Reeves, when the vortex," she motioned towards the gentle cyclone with her tail, "Created you, you slammed into the tree and well.." she paused. "I think you may have hit it a little harder than was healthy. You're not a bird afterall, your simply an Ahzenai. A little confused I might add, but Ahzenai all the same." Mist grinned, chuckling slightly, "You really should get that bump looked at.." she murmured, eyeing it. "Well.." I muttered, "I guess thats all we have to say. I hope maybe that cleared it up some but anyway, come find us if you feel a little better." I smileed softly and turned, walking off with Mist beside me, her tail high.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby Queen Vivane » Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:18 am

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby Dancing with Bears. » Mon Oct 03, 2011 10:45 am

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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby Kat. » Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:29 am

Reserved for woo :D He is stunning! And almost as crazy as me... I think I am going to use my other suitor for him ;)
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby Maddyoll » Mon Oct 03, 2011 11:29 am

Ahaha this story made me laugh x3 Love him already! ♥♥♥
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Ahzenai you're wooing: Reeves
Woo: "CanIhas?"
"No"I replied correctively. Reeves has always been more of the akward and random type. Reeves was, nontheless, a cute little Ahenzai who often acted a bit full of himself. On this particular day, he was esspecially random.

.:. Earlier that week .:.

"I've heard alot about you" I said softly
I looked down on the animal that had just fallen out of the trees several days earlier. I wandered if he belonged to somebody. Nonetheless I slowly sat down and stared at him, then lifted my hand for him to sniff.
"Reeves" I said "Thats your name right?"

"You know what? Your really cute" I replied to him with a smile
Reeves was adorable, and quite goofy. I was suprised that he hadn't picked somebody yet. I slowly laid down, to see how he reacted. Then I took out a small pouch.
"This belonged to my grandfather" I said.
"You can have it if you want."
I placed the small bag in front of him, and saw him react to (in whatever way ^^;) it. I then opened the drawstring bag.
Inside the small bag was a sharp, glistening dagger. I smiled and said
"You can have it, if you want."
I then sat, and watched to see what he would do.

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:
There are absolutely no reasons why I wouldn't want this Azhenai. I've wanted eveyr azhenai, but this pup is different. He is very goofy, playful, and nice, just like me. It's like I have a special connection to this.. chicken? (lol)
Anyway I love him for who he is, and always will, because he is.. him :) Reeves is special to me, like no other ahenzai. He is fire power, which means bravery and strongness, yet he is a bird of prey. I guess part of the reason I want him is also the irony xD

Anyway I'm trying not to make this a novel, so I'll end right here :3 But there are so many reasons I want him..♥


I decided to add a part? :3

To be continued..~♥

Note: I used a dagger item <3

(My fave part? xD:)
He is fire power, which means bravery and strongness, yet he is a bird of prey. I guess part of the reason I want him is also the irony xD


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Re: .

Postby ToastWhisperer » Mon Oct 03, 2011 12:50 pm

The vortex seemed to swirl gently, quietly adding its own light to the sun’s. The entire cave seemed sleepy and tranquil. Ahzenai and their companions milled around the cave, no doubt appreciating the warm sun.

Without warning, however, the vortex flashed and boiled madly in shades of gold, brown, and red before spitting out a furry lump.

Said lump shot through the air, landing with a painful-sounding rustle-WHUD in a nearby treetop.

There was a moment where nothing could be heard but the quiet rustling of the trees as a soft breeze made its way through the holes in the top of the cave. A bird chirped somewhere in the vicinity. The vortex swirled innocently as if nothing had happened.

Valcyon cleared his throat awkwardly. “Reeves,” he announced. His deep voice echoed throughout the cave. A moment later, the furry lump slid out of the tree, landing on the ground in a heap. As people murmured and gathered around, they could see that the lump -- an Ahzenai -- was unconscious. Or at least, he appeared to be.

Suddenly, one eye flashed open. Reeves jumped to his feet with a squawk, staggered a little, then leaned against the tree trunk for support while he pawed at the bump on his head. There was a barely audible, metallic, growling groan. He put his paw back on the ground and looked at the people now surrounding him, still leaning against the tree.

“IMMACHICKENIMMACHICKENIMMACHICKEN!” Reeves hopped away from the tree and pranced around the area. “SQUAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!” The Ahzenai leaped around in circles, lost his balance, and fell on his side. “KHEEEEHEEHEEEEEEEE!” He rolled and squirmed in the dirt, obviously still a little disoriented.

Just a little.


Created by Onyxwings; Written by nocNoctua.

Judging will occur on October 4th.


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Finally, I was at the front of the group surrounding the new Ahzenai. Seeing the beautiful golds, browns, and reds, I figured that this new Ahzenai would be serene, and elegant. Apon seeing the wild, and, possibly mental Ahzenai, my eyes widened in shock. "A chicken?" Odd. I stepped forward slightly, and squinted at the Ahzenai, my blue-grey-green eyes studying him hard. Maybe it was just a game. Testing those around him to see if they took him as a joke. I chuckled, and stepped forward. Might as well play along. I flapped my arms as if they were wings. I then stopped, and stepped over to him. "Hello, Reeves. I quite like Chickens... They have such lovely feathers, yes? Yes." I gave a nod, talking to him as though he were a normal Ahzenai, who wasn't squaking and making a scene, and embaressing himself. I smiled at him, tilting my head. "Well, Reeves. It was quite nice meeting you. Such a unique chicken! I've never met one so intriguing." I stepped back from Reeves.
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Re: {Ahzenai: MC} New Ahz; Reeves

Postby Nuclear_Angel » Mon Oct 03, 2011 12:57 pm

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I watched Reeves, and I thought to my self " Ouch! He hit that tree really hard.. " . I looked around to see that most of the people where laughing at him or cracking jokes. I shook my head at the fact and walk over to help him up on to his feet. " You need some Help Reeves?? " I asked as I studded him as he squirming in the dirt, " Are you ok?... I think you hit your head a little to hard when you got spat out by the vortex.. " I did not know what to do but I want to help him out as much as I could. I let out a little giggle watching him rolling all around in the dirt as he giggled to him self. I felt bad laughing at him, it was hard to tell if he was hurt or just fine. I scanned his body as best as I could -with him rolling and squirming all around- for blood. I did not see any but was still worried if he was hurt. I tried to get him to stop rolling around and as I did i talk to him. " Soo.. Reeves your a Chicken? " I gave a playful laugh " What makes you want to be a Chicken? "
Him acting like a chicken I remembered living at my old home when I was a little kid we had chickens. I was still work on getting him to stop moving, I was trying to think of a way to get him to stop when I remembered the Chickens that I had like shiny things and would play with them, and so I pulled out my shiny rock. " Hey Reeves, if you will stop for a moment so I can cheek you over to see your ok. I will let you have this shiny rock to play with. " I reached my hand out to him with the rock in it. " Come on what you say, would you like to play with it? and by the way if you come with me you will be able to keep it." I said with a caring voice and stayed there and waited to see if he would stop and reply.
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