Tracker Dog Facility [V 3.0]

[LaChromaticDragonfly]

Shimmerleaf:
First two questions are a no and the second two are a yes. c:

Becca:
It's mainly the 'Why do you want it?', personality and story. But other factors count too. c:

[Temperance.]

[FINALLY finished my rough draft of my form XD I wasn't too sure about the communication bit between Tamani, my Ahzenai, and Valeda, the Tracker, at the end of it though. I plan on fine-tuning it tomorrow so I would hugely appreciate it if someone could tell me whether the form of communication I used and how I incorporated it is acceptable or not. Thanks soooo much <3]

[Firefly_Dreamer]

Tracker Dog Application Series 21
Username:Emo-Cat

Tracker Dog you want: #68

Name you'll give it: Datoru

Reason why you want it: I like his design and have wanted a pet tracker for a long time, but first applied last series.

Will it be used in any kind of story? Yes ^^

Describe its personality:

Intelligent


Write an introduction for your Tracker:wip

[LaChromaticDragonfly]

Judging for Tracker Dog #68 will begin in around 8 hours.
Get your forms done!

[Pierce.]

Tracker Dog Application Series 21



Username:
Tusk

Tracker Dog you want:
Tracker Dog #69

Name you'll give it:
At first, my natural instinct was to name him 'Mare Nostrum' because of his aquatic theme and learning about it in Latin class. Then, the name 'The Light One' struck me. His lack of camouflage and bright colors would make his name suit him well. After multiple times of reading his description the name
Scopulus
struck out at me.
Pronounced;
sco • pu • loose
It is the Latin word for 'reef'.
It also sounds like 'scope' which I found a bit ironic because of his poor ability to see.

Reason why you want it:
Hes simply stunning.
His colors are just glorious, how they match the coral reef. I can just image him becoming part of the art work of nature himself. His fins moving in such a unique manner as he playfully skimmed through the water in such a unique fashion. Blending in perfectly in with the fish and his markings, reflecting astoundingly against the sun. His salmon colored mane grazing his back, swiftly, but with great poise.
His personality also matches mine. Im extremely laid back majority of the time (when im a alone), but playful at other times (when im talking to my friends). Im also pretty stubborn like him. I never settle for less than what I want and if I want more ill get it. A few people do find me rude, but its mainly because people are just (can be) dumb. It really does irritate me and it seems like it would for this tracker as well given his pre-written personality.
On my recent trip to the Cayman Islands for my birthday, I visted the Grand Cayman Island Green Sea Turtle farm. There, they have a scuba diving area where you can visit a man-made coral reef. It was undoubtedly the most beautiful thing in the world, just like this tracker. It was also a new experience for me (because of my fear of salt water). Even though I grew up in California on the beach, coral reeves and ocean water were both new to me. Im still afraid of the salt water, mostly because of my fear of moving fish, but the coral reef there definitely made it worth the risk. I also hope that applying for this tracker will be worth the risk of my time, effort, and disappointment. Even though its a lot of fun to try out for him, the risk makes it that much better.


Will it be used in any kind of story?
I hope so
^_^
Ill definitely want to RP with him (hopefully with other trackers). Im semi-lit so im excited to see what I can come up with for him. It would really be a lot of fun to RP with some other aquatic trackers and see how their personalities mix in with his.

Describe its personality:

.:Curious:.
This tracker is very inquisitive about the coral reef he protects. When something seems new, or doesnt seem right, his curiosity gets the better of him and he goes after it.

The new scent flushed through my nose. My brain pounded, separating the new scent from the other ones I had already encountered. My legs were already coursing through the thick coral and lively fish by the time I realized I was moving. My ears soon picked up a sound, a sound like, something I couldn't describe. I soon realized I was on the outer edge of the reef, a place I had only gone once and had my damaged badly, taking them years to heal. With a large stroke, my tail got caught in old rope. "Why is there rope in the sea" I wondered. As I turned back, I realized what I had stumped upon, a sunken ship.

.:Protective:.
His mission is to protect the reef and he does it very well. He would rather risk his life and die, then have even the slightest harm to the reef or any of the creatures living in it.

Getting out of the rope was my second priority, protecting the reef was my first. As I tried to get out of the rope, the sound came again. But this time much more louder, clearer. It didnt sound scary or deadly-in my opinion. but swarms of fish quickly flew out of the ship.

.:Relaxed:.
Even in the tightest situation, this tracker is able to remain relaxed and calm. This trait can also be a bit negative for him. He tends to under-react to situations.

I remained calm and relaxed. Figuring out what was disturbing the peace was crucial and stressing out about it wouldnt help the situation. I looked through a broken window in the ship and saw two dark figures. I knew I had to get a better look. I gnawed through the rope that was holding back my hind leg and swam around the ship, hoping there was an opening.

.:Intelligent:.
This tracker will always find a way to get his job done. Hes very good about figuring out situations that arent in his favor and his 'schemes' rarely backfire on him.

After swimming around the ship multiple times, I couldnt find a way in that didnt include the dark figures noticing me. Then I figured, if I cant get to them, then they'll have to come to me. I quickly swam back to the window next to where I was trapped before. The shadows of the towering ship allowed me to blend in with the dark water around. The 'fins' on my back could be disguised as a sharks dorsal fin in the dark. With a thump against the side of the ship and a quick show of my back, the two figures swam quickly out onto the deck.

.:Playful:.
Playing rather than eating. This tracker loves to play with anything that wants to play with him. Hes especially friendly to other trackers and humans.

I followed them, curious to what they were. They had a large cylinder like tube down their back, and seal like flippers on their feet. They also had a plastic protection mask over their face. As I separated their scent from everything else around me, I realized they were humans. I immediately wagged my tail as I swam up to them. As they ran their hand down my face, I nuzzled them gently. They held out small treats they had for any fish that they encounter and I ate them up happily. Humans were a friend to me.

.:An All-Round Great Tracker:.
Knowing how to do this job, doing it right, and making the best of himself is what makes up this tracker.

Hours went by as we played under the water and the humans sadly had to leave. With a final goodbye, I swam back to the reef, knowing that everything was under control.
You see, the reef is my life. I feed off it, live off it, and thrive off it. Without it I wouldnt be here, and I am forever grateful.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:

A glazed sky stood over the divine reef as the Australian sky showed colors of red, pink, orange, and purple. Fish of every color swam along the coral that made their homes, food, and lives. Everything there just seemed perfect. The coral grew freely, the fish were rarely hunted, and there was never a shortage of anything.
At the center of the reef, there was an unusual spot. It was larger than the others, more colorful, and vibrant. Colors of pink, orange, white, and green made it unique. At first glance, one would think that this was just another piece of coral, but after further examination, you could realize it was something more.
The coral wasnt made of just coral, there was an animal living in it. The fin like opening on the tip of its tail dug under the ocean floor and into the heart of the coral. The creature seemed to feed off of this, only detaching it to protect the entire reef itself, or play with its master. Its mane-like fins flowed through the water, appearing as shelves on a normal reef. A long tongue gave the appearance of an eel, and could be deadly to the touch.
As the stunning creature rose from its spot, his full appearance was shown.
A true tracker.

[LaChromaticDragonfly]

One More Hour~
I see two very good forms, but I'll wait a bit more to see if either of the contestants will add more to it.

[LaChromaticDragonfly]

Tracker Dog Application Series 21


Username: thorrissia

Tracker Dog you want: 68

Name you'll give it: Cyber

Reason why you want it: I have been trying for a tracker for a while now and I guess I'm pretty sucky but I don't care I just want to keep on trying for a tracker, because I like them so much. The only thing I ever really win in a story comp is a pity prize, and I don't want that. I really want to improve my writing, and by applying for trackers I'm very sure it helps. I really love this tracker dog I'm applying for, and I hope he gets a good owner. I hope you enjoy my writing LCD and thanks for your consideration. It means a lot to me.

Will it be used in any kind of story?: hmmm.... most definatly

Describe its personality:
Cyber loves his computers, hence his name.
He adores to spend his free time devising new computer games,
and having fun playing on them.
However, he is a virus de-coder, therefore he is very smart.
The first sign of a big bad virus, and out he goes, to save
the day. He doesn't take on anything to big, due to a
fear of failing, and well, exploding due to system
overload.
He hates the outdoors and would much rather be inside doing
some cyber-netics related thing.

Write an introduction for your Tracker:

Alarms blazed in my ears deafeningly, threatening to burst my ear drums. I did the logical thing. I ran. Dang, how could I set them off???? I was so careful!!! My feat pounded down the metal corridor, making a clanging sound. My ears sharpened at the sound of other footsteps. Dang again! They had found me. I decided to take out the "Borrowed" skate board I had taken off that kid on the way into the building. I had a feeling I would need it. Unfortunatly I had only ever been on one once, so I found it kinda hard to use it.

"SHE WENT THIS WAY!" I heard the security gaurd yell. I poked my tongue out at the end of the corridor then sped away going "WWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I then realised my mistake "whoops." Now there were people chasing me. Again, for the second time today. Meh, I didn't care. Hey, I had the cyber blue prints I wanted, and the likelyhood was, that they would never catch me anyway, so I didn't care. At least, not until the skate board crashed unexpectantly. I had forgotten my most important annoying saying. Expect, the unexpected.

After crashing into one of the metal walls, and getting a very sore nose, with the gaurd's catching me up, I jumped to my feet and I was off again. WHoooooooooooppppppppppeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! I yelled in my head. Then the bog, fat security gaurd in a large black suit ((that was really to small for him, and didn't suit him)) appeared from the end of the corridor, looking really out of breath. In fact he looked practicly dead from exaustian.
"CAN'T CATCH ME, I'M THORRY!!!" i yelled back at them, laughing. I didn't know why I was laughing. I hated running. In fact I hated all exercise. That's when I noticed the large metal pipe coming up. Oh great, now I would have to do a flip. How dare they make me do exercise!!! I jumped with a spiring, and swung around the pole. They slowed just in time for me to crash back down to earth, just in time for me to crush them.

After probably killing a few gaurds with my weight, I ran on. I spotted some large stainless steal double doors, with shiny, circular glass panel's in them. I burst through the door, and the first thing I saw was, to my suprise, A tracker. Expect the unexpected. The Tracker seemed to be, well, playing on the computer. My suprise soon wore off as I heard the gaurds coming. I quickly found a small tiny, bolt lock, and I pushed it into the catch. I then gave myself time to look around the room. There were huge glass windows. That was good. I could break out of those. Then my eyes slid slowly but curiously to the Tracker. Next to his computer were the words:[/colour]

[color=#8080FF]CYBER

Ok, I had to admit he was really cool.
"Hello." I smiled at him. I slowly walked over to him and sat down next to him. I studied him with facination and aw. He studied me back. Sniffing curiously at me. I slowly and gently put out my rand and stroked him. He was a wonderful Tracker and was probably very hard to make. He gave a small yip/whine and lay his head down on my lap. He seemed lonely. I heard a noise, that made me jump. It was a mario "Game Over" noise. Cyber growled in annoyance, but not at me. He hissed at the screen and stuck his nose up at it. Ok I thought. so, he plays virtual mario games. So what? He is still awsome.

He turned back to me and gave a soft whine again. "Don't worry Cyber. I won't hurt you." He looked longingly out the window. It took my brain a few seconds to kick in to what he was really whining about. "You're lonely aren't you? You want to leave! Well" I began "I've got what I came for." I waggled the little tube of blue prints. "So I guess I wouldn't mind if you came along" This was a down play of the whole thing. I would love it if he came. He was so calm, and well... just plain genious. Oh come on! What Tracker dog can beat me at virtual super mario? ((Ok, anyone can beat me at that but still... that defeats the point I'm trying to make))

Just then a massive bang exploded in my ears. Looks like security dudes were back, and they were trying to break down the door. Ok, that's just plain rude! I mean, have they never heard of knocking. Thieve's have feelings too you know! I jumped out of the swively chair I had just been sitting upon, and sprinted to the door. Security dude had brought a swat team, or something of that nature. I pulled a funny face and stuck my tounge out at him and laughed. "Ok Cyber, you wanna leave?" I asked him. He jumped excitedly yapping. "Ok." I chucked the chair at one of the clear glass window's, shattering it into tiny pieces. "Then let's go." I beckoned for him to come, but strangely, he ran into the corner of the room. He confused me for a second, but then I realised what he went for, because he came back with a Game Boy in his mouth. I rolled my eyes then shouted ((because the swat team were breaking in)) "Let's go! Come on!"

I fastened a rope to the broken window, put Cyber on my back and looked out at the long drop from the window's, into the large forest below. Hight's didn't bother me much, but Cyber didn't seem to like it, because he clung so tight to me, he almost choked me. I stood at the top of the window, and fastened the rope to me. I jumped into a climbed position and began to climb down carefully. The large red bricks were good grips for my feet, so there was not to much trouble getting down. As soon as we were around half way down the climb, the sound of doors being ripped off their hinges could be heard, and shouting followed it. Soon I saw the faces of the swat team looking down on me

"They're getting away!" One of them shouted angrily. Well duh! How obvioust was that? Cyber yapped at them from my back, growling at the swat team guy. Then he gave a large yowl as the game boy fell from his mouth, crashing into pieces on the ground below. When we were almost at the bottom, wires streamed out the window, and swat team guys began to quickly sail down them, much faster than me. As soon as my feet touched the ground, Cyber leaped off my back and sniffed sadly at the game boy.

"Don't worry buddy, I'll buy you another one." I said comfortingly. I gave him a pat on the head, and with that we were racing off into the thick forrest. tree's raced around us. The swat teamed would never find us now. We were free!

ART SECTION:

Congratulations~
It was a close tie between Thor and Becca, but Thor had completed the form during the period of time given.
I also like the added touch of having him a video game addict! 8D

[Not me nope]

I ahdn't finished! I was just posting it when you annonced"! noooo.. I'm gahhhhh. -_- ''

-sighs-

[diamonds;;]

congratulations!

[orange.c y r u s♥]

congrats, the first tracker won c: