[snatcher]

Shi (死) is jape.nise for death. OMG! Why is it comeing up as "I need to watch my languge" It's really anoying. There. A poirod inbeetween should help.

I'm so sorry. I saw demonic and freaked out 'cause I haven't done something demonic in a LOOOONNNG time. So I saw demonic. Then autamaticly everything else was irrelivent. I really hope you like him. If not I'll reastart....

Shi is a wolf that took almost everything seriosly. He had gone through 2 mates already. His first, was terrifide of him and because he was so teritorial she killed her self by ramming her head into a rock really hard. His second, was vary beautiful, however she took control of him and used his taritorialness agianst him to keep wolves she attacked away. One night, there was a large pack grouping outside. They violently slashed growling at him to let them in. He stood his ground. Nothing would move him. Nothing could. He stood his ground for 5 streight days. Then disaster struck. A vary large male from the pack attacked him. He was to drowsy to do anything. But still he stood his ground. The large wolf slashed at him. Big mistake. He ponced on the larger wolf. He dug his claws in deep.
The next morning he awoke tarrifide. He couldn't move his paws. He was being dagged! But by what? Shi looked up to see his claws where still dug into the lager wolf. But something was wrong. (Warning! Blood comeing up!) The larger wolf toppled over to it's side. He ripped his claws out of the larger wolf. Only, he didn't have claws. The marks were still there. Shi slashed at the body corios and scared. Even though they didn't look to be there he was frightend to se the marks slowly appeared. What was going on?! He turned over the body. He jumped back with suprise and landed on his new wings. He was truely frightened now. He ran off the path, through the trees and to the stream. He looked at himself. Yes. He still had the same flame markings on him, the same japen.ise charicter on his side, same pirceing blue eyes. But oddly enogh he had big black leathery wings with bright red skin streached between them.
He coulden't shake that image. It played over and over in his mind. (heres the really bad part I advise all adges 10 and under not to read this) He turned over the corpse and there on the other side of the huge black wolf was his mate. Face rotted away. Markings faded. Half his mate half big scary wolf.(okay, you can read agian) He shuddered. He never wanted that to happen ever agian. He never wanted it to be his fault ever agian. He looked at himself and laughed an insaine laugh as his eyes reddend and went to slits. He welcomed the heat and motion senceing vision. He contined laughing. Was life really that serios? Sure a beautiful wolf was dead becase of him, and he still coulden't shake that image. But really? He himself was alive then that's all he cared about. He didn't care about the splitting pain he felt in his ear that ratteled his ear dums. Next time will be different. He thought. And it was.

Shi is now an outgoing wolf that respects other's needs and wants. The one thing he fears is for his mate to die in his fault. However if he needs to he will interveen however not violently. Unless she asks for help. Or she doesn't admit it but help is needed. He is a vary sweet wolf despite his fearful appearence. He knows when to make a joke and is vary kind. He is four years old. That would be twenty-eight in dog years.

[Minirose96]

I like the basic designs, but some of it is hard to make out with the black background. Could you possible lighten that up so I could see better?

Over all, I like him though.

[snatcher]

I'll do that.

[snatcher]

I lightend up the background and, added another mark. I just can't get enogh of circles, thoughs lines are NOT scares there red markings.

[Minirose96]

much better, and I still love the design ^^

[snatcher]

thanks! ^.^ I also added a background story.