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In the rain by Acidic

Artist Acidic [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 53 minutes
Drawing sessions 6
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In the rain

Postby Acidic » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:02 am

YESH.
Anyways, I got bored and I've wanted to draw this for ages.
This is my fursona, she doesn't like it when rain gets through her coat. She is a doggy by the way.
I mainly posted in intermediate to get critisism on my dog anatomy.
I would appreciate if you started your crit with "I think you can..." or "Maybe you can..." or even "I think you can change..."
and not "You can...."
I would also appreciate it if you said a comment about the drawing. Like "I really like this, btw!".
No stealing my fursona, please. She is my design and she belongs to me.
I would also accept art trades and requests to make your fursona using any lineart you like in my gallery- or even a brand new one.
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Re: In the rain

Postby KaiKenNatsuki » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:09 am

It is awesome :3 I like the perspective of the drawing.

Well, about the crits, I think you made a really nice pose for her ^^ But I think you made the eye a bit far from the forehead, and I'm sure that if you just draw it nearer next time, it'll come out really nice! :D
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Re: In the rain

Postby Acidic » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:15 am

Okay then! WOW I'm so glad you commented, Nattie! I'll try making it closer :3
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
*High five* AAAAAAAAAAAAW MY STINGING NETTLE CUT!!!! *Sucks hand and sulks* AAAAAAAAAH
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Re: In the rain

Postby KaiKenNatsuki » Sun Sep 25, 2011 8:17 am

You're welcome :3 It's a pretty picture.
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