{Ahzenai} New Thread! (Please Lock)

[Onyxeva]

Antinc; If you would. :B I did like it, but it prolly needs to be true to Ahzen. <3 Maybe instead of Valcyon making the custom for you, you had a dream about a candy Ahz and when you woke up there was one that appeared from the vortex.

As for the candy shop, maybe they help you run one outside of Ahzen. xD

[*~*BurningStars*~*]

Antinc; If you would. :B I did like it, but it prolly needs to be true to Ahzen. <3 Maybe instead of Valcyon making the custom for you, you had a dream about a candy Ahz and when you woke up there was one that appeared from the vortex.

As for the candy shop, maybe they help you run one outside of Ahzen. xD

I edited it as if I were really wooing an Ahzenai I cannot thank you enough on how good she looks! <3333 Thanks onyx! <333

[Onyxeva]

That looks much better. :3

[*~*BurningStars*~*]

That looks much better. :3

I also added a poem!

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Durstion (Personality)


Durstion is a "bad boy" as you may call it, he tends to break the rules. He isn't crazy hes more calm then anything but he prefers to keep it real, He enjoys listening to Miz's portable radio which plays Limp Bizkit everytime she turns it on. He joined Solar, Miz, Rainitus, and Cougalter, Ryolier and Shibiu how ever took off with each other they really loved each others company. Durstion enjoys being alone and listening to Angels or Bring it Back by Limp Bizkit over and over again. Durstion also loves the name Valycon gave him because the lead singer of Limp Bizkits last name is Durst therefore he loves the name Durstion.

He's Fun, Enjoys being alone, Loves Limp Bizkit, and enjoys long peaceful walks alone with Miz.


Durstion (woo) xD

I sat in the edges of Ahzenai playing Limp Bizkits Angels louder and louder as I turned my Ipods volume all the way up, Fred Dursts voice rang in my ears as I saw the vortex creating something. It swirled red, greys, and blacks, My eyes twinkled as I saw the amazing Ahzenai pull itself out, I turned the volume down and took out my ear buds just in time to hear Valycon ring his name across the cave "Durstion" he said. I almost jumped out of my skin hearing his name WIP can you add this to storys when Im done? xD I will tell or PM you when I finish if its ok xD

[stiles.]

Hi, I'm Sweet, Vintage Heart's sister. Her account isnt working, since her laptop crashed. All her passwords got mixed up. I thimk she was going to hijack me andpost her woo for Levorith today, so... yeah. XD
Edit... heres the woo for Levorith. By Vintage Heart.

"Pas si vous etes d'etre aussi arrogants que vous semblez," Vercivis replied with a sly grin, stepping up to Levorith. "Garcon naif," she laughed, replying once mor in the French tongue. Vercivis circled him slowly, tippering her head and batting her eyes flirtaciously. She was using oneof her disguises. "I saw you trick back there," Vercivis purred, flicking her tail. "I liked it."
She cocked an ear casually, letting the tip of her tail trail ever-so-lightly across Levorith's paws. "I'm Vercivis, but for someone like you, call me Verci." She grinned to herself. I can play his games, she thought. He's up to something, though. Vercivis noted. And i'm going to find out what!

She had watched as Levorith had stepped, almost regally, out of the color-laden vortex, appearing as though he was just another ordinary Ahzenai. But Vercivis had also taken note ashis eyes lingered on the most beautiful or eye-catching Ahz, and those with the most distinct features. She was slightly taken aback when she realized what he was up to under his playboy facade- judging. He's searching our characters, Vercivis had nodded to herself. How interesting.

Snapping back to reality, Vercivis settled lightly next to Levorith, focusing on the task at hand. Let's see if he can decipher me. She thought smugly, turningher glacier-like eyes to him, and shifting slightly, unnoticabley, so the sun glowed agaimst her mosaic coat. "Levorith," Vercivis began, her tone silky and alluring. "I really must ask, what is it you're looking for?" She honestly hoped he wasn't done figuring her out. "You're a judge of character, that I see," Vercivis smiled, her voice as sweet and golden as honey. "And you're curious, a real go-getter who knows his priorities," she purred, her tail brushing his paws again.
"But is it an act?" Vercivis asked, dropping her smile and warm tone and sighing. "Like I am?"
She really had no idea why she suddenly felt compelled to share with this cheezy, yet probably thoughtful Ahz. She kinda felt there was no use keeping secrets around Levorith, and she liked that.

Vercivis blinked. "So what areyou trying to get out of this?" she asked again, tilting her head with a show of curiousity. "Travel?" she laughed, trying to keep the bitterness that normally infused her voice out. "A companion? Or are you just here for amusement?" Vercivis laughed again, glancing at the other females Levorith had had his eyes on earlier. Se shuffled her paws. "You're different, Levorith." Vercivis spoke again, her voice softer and more caring, though still as cold and deep as the ocean. "You're intruiging to someone like me, who always hides behind a mask. sense you and I are somewhat alike, though hesitate to jump to such conclusions." Another wintry sigh escaped her mouth. I'm telling him everything, yet I doubt he even cares! "I truly believe ypu aren't a chauvinist," she shrugged dismissively. "You just have a lot of tricks up your sleeve."

She stood, shaking her patterned ruff, a welcome relief of tension. "I usually travel alone," Vercivis said, incliningher head towards the tall rock cliffs. A trace of sadness echoed against her indifferent tone and expression. "I don't settle well. But I do see you have a fondness for women," Vercivis said, another short laugh shivering in the air. Picking up her flirty angle again, Vercivis started to pad around him in another slow, calculating circle. "I've probably bored you by now, sinci I'm guessingyou've long ago figured me out, handsome." Vercivis lightly brushed her soft, crisscrossed coat against his swirled navy one. "I'm sure someone will quickley snap up someone as smart and charming as you," she purred again, flattery and charm dripping from her words, but hope glowed in her eyes; pick me!
"I might as well leave you to your flirting," she grinned, trying not to show dissapointment that her chance to be with him was over. She turned to face him one last time bofore his decision, and said clearly; "Mais si vous ne souhaitez plus a cocher, je vais attendre," before letting the crowd of wooers engulf her, blocking Levorith from her view. Her parting words echoed in her mind; 'But if you no longer wish to hide, I'll be waiting...'

[hope that was good! I tried to play a different angleon Levorith, and it took quite a bit of effort and thought to do so. Hopeit shows! feel free to give me some feedback. ]

[spiff]

Levorith looks like he would be really fun to try and woo. x3 I'm gonna see if I can pull it off with Xuen, even if she's not the flirty type.
I'm going to change my wooing format a little, too. The old one was too tedious to maintain. :B

"Oh, don't underestimate me. I'm not as nice as I may seem."

Xuen swept into the cavern, ignoring the outstretched gifts held out to her by some of the humans she passed. She was not for wooing; she was merely visiting Ahzen. Nostalgia swept over her in an almost overwhelming wave as she set her eyes upon the familiar place.
|Ƨακσяιαи · Я α ɢ ɛ| let her come and go whenever she pleased, and she appreciated the freedom she had been allowed. She sprawled herself on the floor, displaying more confidence than she had entered this world with. Living with |Ƨακσяιαи · Я α ɢ ɛ| had emboldened her, given her street smarts. She was treated as an equal, a sister, and encouraged to state her opinion. She was the same old Xuen, but with wits she hadn't possessed previously.
Presently, her brow furrowed as she watched the vortex dance and spin with highly contrasting colors: earthy tones of brown and red suddenly transitioned to shades of teal mottled with pink. Her head spun merely trying to imagine what sort of Ahzenai could come from these colors. Her timing had been perfect; she was just about to witness a new arrival. Perhaps she could make a new acquaintance. She rested her head on her outstretched paws, lazily watching the vortex. Minutes passed while the vortex did nothing new, and her patience began to wear thin. Some of |Ƨακσяιαи · Я α ɢ ɛ|'s impatience must have rubbed off on her.
After what seemed an eternity, she lifted her head as a male Ahzenai slipped easily from the vortex. "Levorith!" Valcyon called. The new Ahzenai's pale gold eyes were wide and innocent, and she pushed herself into a sitting position, watching him intently. Despite his eccentric markings, he seemed quite ordinary. She could help him if he was confused. Levorith looked around, taking in his surroundings. His eyes roved over the intricate spiraling design on her coat for a moment before passing on to the next subject of interest. Noting where his eyes tended to stray, she deemed him as one of the curious types.
Xuen looked on, befuddled, as the naive demeanor was instantly vanquished with a sly wink and purr as Levorith sidled up to a female Ahzenai. When she recoiled and snapped at him, she was even more startled as he retreated with a "You'll be back for more, babe; I promise". Wait, what? she thought bemusedly. He then proceeded to adapt an exaggerated swagger, making his way to the females. Her eyes narrowed thoughtfully as she contemplated him. So the innocence was merely an act. She found herself oddly curious about his character. Wait - was he flirting with those females? And some of them were humans, too! Her snout crinkled in a combination of disgust and amusement.
She eyed Levorith as he strutted in her direction. As he neared her, she heard him repeat the phrase he had used with the other females he had spoken to: "Voulez-vous coucher avec moi?" The words flowed from his mouth like honey, smooth and suggestive. Xuen had gone to France recently, and recognized the language, but only a fewew snippets of it here and there. She had been spending the last few minutes struggling to comprehend what his words meant. Her composure did not slip as she finally worked out what he had just said, but she was extremely offended. She wasn't one of those types! How dare he be so brash!
"Jamais de la vie," she snorted disdainfully, putting on a revolted expression and hoping that what she said meant what she had intended. The last thing she wanted was to make a slip-up and say something really weird. "And anyway, you'll never get anyone to oblige with those pink things on your side. They look like those fruit rolls that humans eat," she continued without thinking.
Suddenly realizing she was being mean, Xuen quickly added in an lame attempt to pad the blow, "But they're particularly intriguing for some." Her voice petered out and she faltered, feeling stupid and foolish. But most of all, furious atherself for not watching her mouth. But he merely stood there looking at her with the same supposedly seductive expression on his face. Feeling suddenly annoyed for some reason, an idea popped into her head and a sly smile curved her lips into a smirk that rarely graced her features. Two could play at this game. Who said she had to be so nice all the time? |Ƨακσяιαи · Я α ɢ ɛ| wouldn't mind if she brought a new Ahzenai back with her, would she? They had been debating over whether or not they should try to woo another one anyway; another companion would be nice, even if he was... constantly flirting with females.
"But I suppose pink can look good on a male," she said with an impish grin. "Do you think you might be one of those select few?" Her voice suddenly dropped down into a whisper at this last sentence, a devilish gleam appearing in her eye. She was surprising herself with this new devious side of her, but hey, you learn new things every day, right? She had uncovered many aspects of her personality ever since she had joined |Ƨακσяιαи · Я α ɢ ɛ| on her travels. "And anyways, you could use a little fine-tuning with those charming skills. I could help you with that." Xuen gave him a slow, deliberate wink. "And I certainly expect that we'll meet many new, attractive females if you join my owner and I on our travels. She'll allow you your... freedom." A suggestive crooked grin flitted across her face. Oh, she was on a rolld now. "So... what do you say, Levorith?" The other Ahzenai's name rolled off her tongue as a serpentine hiss. She stood and made her luxurious way over to him, body undulating like a snake's, ending up directly in front of him. A nagging part of her was telling her that this was a bad idea, and she was already starting to regret having acted the way she had. She wasn't normally like this. She shouldn't be doing this. She wasn't supposed to be acting like a snake, complete with similar voice and body movements. This was one of the worse parts of her, and she wanted to bury it and forget all about it. But, she reasoned, it was too late to back down.
"We have high standards, Levorith. Think you're up to them?" Xuen's voice reverted to its usual tone as she looked him challengingly in the eye. Without another word, she circled once around him, stance much like that of a predatory animal's, before sauntering back to her original space - but not without brushing ever so slightly against him, a gesture made to tease. She set herself down, arranging her limbs artistically and looked back up at him. She flashed him a cocky but nonetheless winning smile and said, "Of course, if you aren't..." Her voice trailed away, leaving him to ponder of the infinite possible endings of that single sentence.
She watched him as he left to approach another female before calling out to him again on a whim: "If you aren't, I guess you can always settle for second-rate, Levorith." She emphasized his name for the third time, reverting to the sultry snakelike hiss she had used previously. She wasn't liking this new side of her, but she might as well carry through with it to the end.
Xuen positively beamed at him, smile sweet and brimming with the innocence that was usually on display, but there was something in the catlike curl of her lips, the purposeful way she lazily reclined on her spot, her languid posture, that suggested the demon inside of her, however reclusive it may be, had not completely faded - nor would it ever.

"I may look, act, speak like an angel, but in my heart is a devil just waiting to break free."

Poo, this didn't turn out as well as I anticipated. I think I strayed from Xuen's personality too much, but I suppose she discovered a new side of her in this woo!
I'm not expecting to win; I just thought this would be interesting to type out. :B

[.Coyote]

Alright, through all of my crazy page searching for forms, I have noticed two things.
One: All that spamming... O.o
And Two: People writing personalities for Ahzenai they get from the portal? I thought that the ones from the portal already had set personalities? Am I to write one for Kavga too?

[Onyxeva]

Nikki; The spamming was a big issue, and still is a problem- hopefully not as bad though. OTL

Writing those personalities are mostly for archival purposes, since we don't write it on the pages ourselves.

[.Coyote]

Hmm... Is there a chat? People could ask you questions and spam on there.
I vaguely remember there being one spoken of in all of that conversation...

Alright, I just wanted to make sure I wasn't doing something out of place or anything, thanks ^_^