Max by Offended Cockatiel

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Max

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Tue Sep 13, 2011 3:40 pm

Finnally my Dolphin charecter. I was looking for one to adopt since yesterday,and now I just decided I should make him. Wich I really didn't want to do for spacific reasons,but I decided I should just get it over with.

Max is my human shifter,he shifts from Dolphin to human and is in my story:
As the main charecter...mite add some sort of deep sea bakground,or something different as the bg.
His theme song: Feel the rain on you'r skin

~Dolphins and Sharks~


:..'//1//'..:
"Dolphins are just Gay sharks"


I herd Albert DeFranko say to the group crowding his desk this morning. The sun beamed through the window hitting at his desk softly and making his black rimmed glasses shine along with his soft blond hair that was cut shortly in the front. Growling to myself as I sat my things onto my desk with a soft slam wile they all chatered away,I couldn't help being peeved. Albert stuck his head through the circle of people and gaized at me curiosly "hey Max" I pushed my empty headed pencil against the white painted wood of my desk grudgingly glaring towards him. As if my pencil was the one at fault for me being so angered. "Woah Max relax" mummbled Anya watching my trembling hand against the pencil. My pencil almost brocken I sighed slowly placing it wear it belonged in the small slot infront of my desk and glancing at Alberts direction once more before sitting. They all went back to what they were doing pretty quickly but I found that one comment stuck in my head as our math class went on. I'd have to get Albert for that,Dolphins were beauitfull creatures. Certinly dazzling. Sharks weren't too bad eather. I wouldn't say i'm a dolphin fanatic,more as i'd like to pride and bring respect to my own speacies. I'm what you mite know as a shifter,I can shift into two animals in parituclar. Human and Dolphin. Slowly stretching in my seat as the first period ended and so did math class. Now onto science. I noticed Albert glancing at me as the class went on. Finally as the break came I stood up quickly racing to the door. First to the door I still couldn't take my breath of relief as someone grabbed me by the shoulder. I flinched glancing back stiffly. Claine. "Hey" she said taking the first step out the door along with me. I hadn't talked with her much today in class,wich was unusual if anything. I finally took that sigh letting my shoulders sink as we started to walk towards our lockers. "Well you see Max...I have some weird knews for you. Albert wants to see you and when I asked why he smiled evily,his eyes glinting with some hence of a devilish plan" Claine wanted to be an author and I couldn't blaim her with the skills she had. Claine knew I didn't care about a meeting with Albert so there was no need for small chat on locations. I glanced back curiosly as if he mite be fallowing,before going on my way again. Cocking my head at her when I reached my locker I asked "so why does he want to see me?" voice holding curiosity. She shrugged at me as I turned the lock,my three numbers quickly came after one another untill the lock unhached and let me slowly pull it open. Next class would be gym. Oh how fun I thought sarcasticly wile grouning. It's suprsing,in elamentary most say gym as the best subject but when you get to junior high. Well lets say oppinions change.

Closing my locker I sprinted towards the locker rooms. "I'm going to change now Claine" I mummbled towards her waving before I pushed the door open using my whole body. Opening another locker,my gym locker I grabbed my gym cloughting changing into them quickly. I was quickly out before anyone had even come in,watching for the sign of anyone suspiciose. As if one of Alberts...'friends' as he calls them were to come behinde me and through me into a duffle bag. Opening the gym doors that were conveniently really close to the changing rooms,I peaked in. Noting my teacher was in I walked in and sat down like most of the other early kids. soon the others came in. Claine sitting beside me like she always does,glanced over beaming a slight smile. Ms.Harvard looked over us,as if a radar set on high. We did of course have a tendacy to sneak our cell phones in,even if it was gym class. Ms. Harvard had just started to talk when Albert burst through the door panting,mouth open and drizzling with soft dabs of sweat. As eyes turned onto him including mine,we all waited for the next thing to happen. He sprinted to sit down wear he usually did,remotly far from the group,but still it was considered close enough. "Ah hem" Ms.Harvard coughed making us quickly turn our gaizes over at her. Her talking dronned on and finally it was time,we were playing ping pong and had to choose partners. As always I looked at Claine and she looked at me,almost simotaniosly in fact. But of course it wasn't going to go that smoothly. People came inbetween us and Albert grabbed my arm. "Come on bud. We'll have fun" he teased snickering softly,I was the only close enough to hear. "Dude...let go!" I said,but when Albert had his grip on something he kept it for as long as he needed. Someone bumped into him and with an oof he fell to the floor. There was my chance,I could run now...but I didn't. Slowly putting my hand to Alberts hard I tugged him up sighing at myself as the feeling of defeat washed over me. Albert and I glanced over at each other and catching one anothers eyes we blushe quickly turning away and franticaly trying to find ourselves new partners. Enemys weren't as big and bad as they seamed. "Hey Claine" I said waving. She waved back and from just that we were partners.


:..'//2//'...:
"People who are enemys aren't all that different from each other...even though they still seam as different from one another as anything,there the same in many ways too"




Claines voice was herd over the bustling of everyone else as lunch came. "You bouth feel pain and you bouth smile at moments. Right?" I scoffed at her talk of Albert in a fation that he's simlar to me. The thing is...he really is simaler to me in alot of ways. I shack my head as I think of that plus the fact of how gentle I had been to him when he fell onto the gym floor. Sighing I look at Claine and say "Claine lets just talk about a subject not making me puke. Okay?" Claine huckles wrinkling her nose at my rude comment and then she grins. "What Maxy-waxy you don't like me talking about who now?His name started with...A. Right?" I smiled at her. "Nope" I said rolling my eye and slowly bitting into my cold turkey sandwich. Next class was French. Unfourtunatly for me i'm paired with Albert in French. For the whole year infact. What a pain. 10 minutes into class i'm already hiding my head in my arms and drouning out the teachers voice. Almost to sleep I give a yawn the tired feeling sinking in. Then I feel a sharp pain in my arm,somones elbowing me and I can guess who easly. "What" I hiss peeking slightly out from the protection of my arms,Albert snickers and says "you didn't meet me today at lunch",his comment makes me grumble in agitation. "Well...!" I turn and watch the teacher not finishing what I was going to say. We were doing some kind of activity with our partners,that would require working...together. I sighed as the paper was passed to us reading it catiosly. Albert tried to snatch it from my hand making me grumble even more..."hey...stop it!" I said as Albert tried to climb onto me to grab the paper. When Albert...or as most call him Alby got into something he didn't even relaize what he was doing,or what his actions were. I pushed him away and he pulled himself closer. "Alby...I swear!" I growled eyes quickly turning to us,the teacher had stepped out to get a call and thank god because I already died when my class mates saw the next thing happened. I didn't need a teacher,telling this story in the future to there student or others eather. I flung the paper onto him,pushing it against his cheast,and he yelped falling back. Grabbing the first thing in sight for suppor he held onto my side as he went down,making for a very uncomfortable situation. Aspeacle since he still hung on. Sighing I tried to pull myself up but no use. I gazed down at Alby eyes going wide as I noticed what was happing. Alby was panting cheeks red as he trembled. Alby...there of course was a reason he was my...enemy. Supringly it wasn't because of his annoyingness,and him being a total butt. I could hanlde that,I have for so many years it was...

I sigh lifting him up to sit on my lap and whisper into his ear. "It's alright now. So let's get up atleast before the teacher gets in here" he flinches out of his trance and were bouth quickly up and sitting at our seat pretending that nothing happened. Everyone cocked there heads in curiosty and then chidded into chatter,no doubt about what had just happened. Alby had a trauma...a phobia of falling. Augh...why was this happening to me...and all over again. I can't have this. I can't handle this!...but I have for so long...and I can still,indurence isn't something I wasn't born with,I have indurence flowing out of me,I have so much to spare really. After a few secounds the room went into silence then the teacher came in. A coughed in the silence and just with that people were glancing our curiosly. "Well...let's get started" said our teacher clapping his hands together exitedly. "Uh...Alby how are we supposed to...wich one should we do?" Alby glanced at me and then turned his head grumbling and blushing softly. He snatched the paper from my hand and made a terrible line under the one thing he wanted to do. A video about ourselves using French. I shrugged but I voice nagged in my head mainly repeating 'is he trying to kill us!?' I didn't get how a video in French could kill us,and I didn't care to know eather. "Alright then...at you'r house at 3 today?" he shrugged off the question,but gave a nod that was barely a bob of the head. Finally! The bell rang and we all ran out as the teacher dismissed us scurring to our lockers. School ended apoxamitly at 2:30,sighing I thought about 3...how bad could it be?but I noticed I was answering my own question.Very,very bad. Coughing softly I headed for the bus stop,autumn chill cooling my skin and giving me goosebumps. It only too atleast 7 minutes to get home,meaning more time for alone time before going to Albys. Slowly I opened the door and said "i'm home" in my sort of quiet and strong but firm voice,slumped shoulders walking in. I noticed long gangly brown hair,and smiled. My older sister,then I saw short hair,more short hair now,before little faces apeared. My smile didn't fade though as my 6 year old twin sister and brother ran over shouting my name and hugging my leg. "Hey Day. Hey night. Hey Sarority" my name seams so blank compared to them doesn't it?It isn't nautral that I see my siblings all the time actually,my fathers dead and my mother takes care of me. My silbings and I live in the same house,but i'm the one who visits her the most. She lives in the oceon. She swims,as the dolphins do because thats what we are. Were dolphins after all. Well actually shape shifters but we have two forms in particular,dolphin and human. Humming I threw my bag over onto the bag and walmked to my bed,the twins still holding on and making it a strain. Finally when Sarority took them away I sighed glancing up at the plain white cleaing before closing my tired eyes. I saw Albert smiling at me and we were bouth laughing happily. Then Claine skipped over holding a pick-nick basket,the blanket was set down onto the remotly wet grassy ground of the high hill we were on. Albert and I had brought something too. I had some cake for dessert and Albert brought a boom box for music and the blanket. I knew it was his,it wasn't mine and it was'nt Claines and there was the reason that I knew what he owned. It was all so confusing...everything seamed bright and cheery but in the real world it was all a mess. All.
I jerked myself awake. It had already passed three. I jolted myself more awake,and grabbed some random clouth. I couldn't go in my school clouth,they probably stunk and it would seam like I didn't care. Wich I didn't,but it didn't have to seam like that. Right?

:..'//3//'..:
"Oh God what have I gotten myself into?"


My voice was strained as I tried to fix myself up quickly. I woke up at 3:15...now it was already 3:30 wile I was running over to Albys house,peace of touste in my mouth and an apple in my hand. Panting only half way there,I put my hands onto my knees panting,trying to get my breath back. Bitting into the apple hard I chewed walking to regain myself,I again after a wile went into a sprint,finishing the toust and the apple,crumbs still stuck on my face. Whiping the crumbs I was about to knock on the door when it creaked open on it's own. It probably hadn't even been closed properly. On the cement infron of the house,there was a note. Picking it up scpeticaly I read it silently out loud "Max i've left the door open for you. Close it when you get in" sighing at myself I hoped Albert was sleeping...or something. Or maybe just releaved I showed up?maybe...he mite be pissed. I probably would be. I don't know. Slowly I locked the door behinde me and snuck silently through all the rooms. No one. Was this a joke or something? Only one room remained,slowly opening the slightly creaking door to Albys room I staired in suprise seeing how vaulnerable he looked,laying there softly on his bed. I just couldn't beleave it. "Albert...Albert!" I said shacking him slowly. Bringing his head up eyes half closed and him half asleep still,Alby looked so tired,very long wrinkled white shirt falling off his shoulders. As messed up as he looked I got to say my heart spead up a level,like a car on a speed track with the last lap and only 5 minutes to go. Bringing his head up even more I can remeber everything so clearly,as our lips touched. But...we didn't stop it,we kissed each other atleast for a few long sweet secounds,that seamed two short. His lips were soft and firm,and he tasted like chinnamon sweet but a little spicey thing. I fell back taking Alby with me. Bouth our faces turned unespeakably red and we were bouth panting akwardly,Alby looked up at me and I looked down at him. Our eyes met and they locked,we bouth moved foreward as if readying for another kiss. Then a small thonk made up bouth jump. From outside I herd an older then life car noise,and then we glanced at each other again. Oh God...we were just about to kiss...again. And on free will too! We bouth got up sitting on oppasit sides of the room. Alby sitting on his bed,arms wrapped around him legs catiosly,and me leaning against the widnow as one secound ago I was curiose of the noise of course. And that car was older then life it's self,or atleast it seamed that way. "Sorry" Albert burst,face filled with blush. I nodded my apology. What was going on with us? With all of the things happening,it was almost as if fait was drawing us closer. Ah...silly idea,stupid thoughts. I never bleieved in such things anyways,so why start now. I had no clue though what was happening to us,and neather did he,it just felt so confusing. I wonder...does he feel this confusion too? Everytime we were near each other,something wierd would happen. I can't deal with all of this. My life...it's being turned upside down. Well my self restraint went away for a moment. I guess. "Uh...Alby" I took a moment to sigh and regain my energy. "Lets forget this even happened" my voice an order. He nodded bashfully in agreement,blush exeding how much he showed,he wanted. Oh God,please let me get through this without any inconciderate slips. I prayed silently.

An hour had already passed so quickly. I waved at Alby my good bye,contending with a sight happy that nothing else had gone wrong. I scoffed walking home,stretching tiredly and consulting myself pridefully at the decisions he had made. The whole day,they got the project done,and northing else happened after that kiss. So there was no need to worry. Right? I endulged myself in the bright sunlight,fading from the sun lightly,pace slow. It was like my pride. A glimmer of happy. But it soon faded. Not like my pride. I hope atleast. Stepping on the pavment,arms folded behinde my head eyes glimmering just for a secound as I saw my house.



:..'//4//'..:
"What happened is a secret"

I told myself over and over again. Must.Not.Let.It.Slip! I fiddle with my fingers laying on my bed in my dark room, the blinds are lightly opened and I doubt anything good is going to happen today. I can still feel that kiss on my lips and my heart flying to the moon. Tightly squeezing my finger against the other I sighed. This was all so dangerouse, but I reminder of what had happened before.
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Re: Max

Postby ubiquitous » Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:33 am

So pretty :D ANd I took your siggy quiz. Can you say 100%? XD
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Re: Max

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:37 am

You got it huh?...mwahaha I didn't know you knew me that well Summer?...-cofuzzled face-
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Re: Max

Postby Solanum » Fri Sep 16, 2011 7:02 pm

Ooo Max <333
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I will be here
when you think you’re all alone
Seeping through the cracks
I’m the poison in your bones
My love is your disease
I won't let it set you free
Til I break you

You’ll never know what hit you
Won’t see me closing in
I’m gonna make you suffer
This hell you put me in
I’m underneath your skin
The devil within
You’ll never know what hit you


I tried to be the lover to your nightmare
Look what you made of me
Now I’m a heavy burden that you can’t bear
Look what you made of me
Look what you made of me
I’ll make you see
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Re: Max

Postby Offended Cockatiel » Sat Sep 17, 2011 10:52 am

Hi Teshy 8D
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