Deer adoptables -; hiatus

[Bast-et]

Oh gosh miune, that's so beautiful... And suspenseful

Also Quail, I have a custom deer (as seen in my siggy) named Nirotep

[Firefly_Dreamer]

~WIP~

[Kat.]

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These were the dark days.

The times were Uprights (humans) came in their large rollers (cars), and took away our families. They step out, holding massive metal machine-like objects. Saitune tells me they are 'weapons'. But why do Uprights take away our freedom at one of the most peaceful times of the year? With lights dancing like fire around the old Sycamore trees, and the new small fawns are enlightened to the world.

But those wretched beasts don't care. They come clomping around, making loud bangs and making our previous species die. Did you know that that is the reason I'm out here alone? Once I was roughly 1 monh old, the Dark Days came. A buck in green came with heavy stuff, and shot a long, silver pellet into my father. My mom went crazy. My sister went crazy. And I ran off. Sure, my sister and I were twins. Whih made it much harder to seperate and leave. I figured everybody would he dead, but I'm still here!

But now I walk the forest alone. As the trees rattle and shake, and shiver in the cool breezes. The beautiful leaves flow away into the cold dark sky, never to be seen again. But at dawn, when the seen peeks out from behind the horizon, all is well. No hunters amongst the trees, since they come in the evenings.

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Right now, it's about mid-day. The wind is dead calm, and the sun is blazing like a torch to your skin. But to me, it's all peaceful.

Then there is the screech of a roller. It echos throgh the distance, like loud thunder splitting the air. Every creates bolts to their dens, excpet me. I don't have one, and I'm in the middle of a large plain. Completely in sight! How foolish was I as to come here? I can hear a hunter inhing closer, probaby reloading his 'weapon'......

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[Chirai]

nothing here

[Pideaux]

Silver moon, you need to PM the form to Paper. Could you please edit your post, remove it and PM it? :3

[.Apocalypse.]

My heart was beating so fast I thought it would burst as I dashed through the forest. My hooves pounded effortlessly over the ground, but I feared I was not fast enough. He followed me still, with his long stick that was known to kill my kind. He had been chasing me for the past few days, but every time I escaped, he found me again. As I shot into the forest, I wondered, Why not give up? No one cares about me, I have no family, so why am I running? But I shoved it to the back of my mind. I was running because I want to live, to maybe have a chance at a family one day. I flattened my ears as I ran and encouraged myself to keep going. As I gave myself encouragement, I picked up speed, running faster than ever before. The wind slicked my thin fur and the human looked like an ant in the distance, though he was still pursuing me. I stopped and glanced down. I was at the edge of a cliff. The cliff looked ten times my length to the other side and 100 times my length down. The hunter got closer and I realized the only chance I had was to jump. No deer had ever jumped this cliff but my father. He was once the leader of all the Deer in North forest. But the same hunter chasing me now got him. I backed up and threw a glance over my shoulder. The hunter was still there, running at me, I was almost in range of his killing stick. I faced foreward once more and hoped that luck ran in the family. I sped across the land, feeling like I was gliding and leapt. It almost felt like I was flying, and I would be enjoying it if it wasn't the leap for my life. First my front hooves hit the cliff, then my back, but I landed on the edge. I heard a terrible bang come from the other side of the cliff and the stick was smoking. I looked to my side and saw a tiny hole in the tree next to me, and the Hunter was angrily shouting. My eyes widened as I realized he had shot at me and I dashed into the forest, quicker then before. I still didn't feel safe, even on this side of the cliff, because I knew he'd find me once more, but I decided, until that happens I should relax. So I slowed down and padded into a cave, lying on a pile of leaves, and decided to take a nap.

How did I do? I usually write more but I have never written about a Deer before.

[Aima]

can't wait to apply to be an artist!

[.Ghost.]

Guys guys guys!
The form MUST be sent in to me in a PM, do not post them here in the thread!

Edit: Winner decided, congratulations Miune who got the deer!

[astrocompass]

Congrats Miune! You're writing was amazing, and I'm curious after reading it; what happened to the doe? Did she survive, since I think the 'lights' were headlights correct?

Alright, this is a kind of warning. I am off to school and will be there for oh, six hours. In that time I'd like anyone who hasn't yet to PM me their deer names to do so. (if you have and it hasn't been updated yet, i'm going to get it done I promise) it's no big fuss but it would be in your favor if you did seeing as I may not update the archives again until the next deer goes out. Sorry I just needed to put this up again, but I promise I won't harass you guys any more about PMing me from now on until the next deer comes out :3

[ɾïṿεṉḋεll]

Good job Miune! That story was amazing!