View topic - Sunrise Over the Ocean

My gallery · by **Lunar Lullabies** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:48 pm

Present for my grandma's birthday~

Any tips on how to make this better and more realistic? :3 Should I add anything to the sky? It looks sort of plain, but the birds I tried to draw looked too n00bish and unrealistic. XD

Any comments/critique are appreciated. <3

My gallery · by **Villalobos** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:49 pm

add some pink. I find it that most sunsets or sunrise have a bit more color to them.

My gallery · by **Lunar Lullabies** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:51 pm

Hmm, good idea, thank you!

My gallery · by **Villalobos** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:55 pm

welcome,

My gallery · by **Lunar Lullabies** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 1:59 pm

Tried to add a bit of red and pink color; not sure how well it came out. XD

My gallery · by **Villalobos** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:01 pm

Very cute

My gallery · by **Lunar Lullabies** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:38 pm

Thanks. <3

My gallery · by **Villalobos** » Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:39 pm

welcome.

My gallery · by **Lunar Lullabies** » Tue Aug 23, 2011 1:39 pm

Bumping for comments and suggestions. C:

My gallery · by **flagella** » Tue Aug 23, 2011 4:40 pm

you did a good job with the reflection of the sun itself in the water, but there should be more of the sky reflecting in the water as well. the waterline should also be almost completely flat at the horizon because it's very far away. i hope that helps. this is pretty cool :>

Artist	Lunar Lullabies [gallery]
Time spent	1 hour, 10 minutes
Drawing sessions	7
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